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Old 12-14-03, 04:55 PM   #1
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The Shook One Responds (cr0nix diss)

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The Shook One rules this shit, like a president
Im the owner, your just a resident
I know you've heard of us (Nuclear concepts), we the RB.Com herb murderaz'
Im makin dough, while you tryin to start net-beef
I levitate-haters wit shells, I dont hesitate-wen-merkin-fakers
Im reliniqushin you from the rap-section, ur statchitory like detention
He's gettin some recognition, cuz look i mention the name cr0nix
He's still learnin his Ebonics, cuz he's hooked-on-the-phonics
Illiterit idiot, havin his dad readin my diss's
The white moron, has spoken (cr0nix) spirit is broken
He's steppin up & choken, like a D.U.Ier tryin to get a license, ur played verses r revoken
Im slopen this shit like MT Everest, no one makes the climb
Ur 'jabs' hurt me like a feather-fist, so he's harmless
I could throw better 'punches' at G's, if i was armless
My chamber-is-loaded, like a m80 i've exploaded
Makin 'this gangsters' neck emploaded, quit rippin my spits, and showin em
You've grow from an idiot, to a complete dumb-fuck
But ill hand it to you, some of your rhymes are dope, but its just some-luck
Ill cut you from head-to-toe, unlike you, im like a pencil, I got lead-to-show
Gimmie a street-1on1, I guarntee, like the french you retreat-son
U'z a straight up pussy, go cover ur clit(body) wit a tampon
Bitch...
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Old 12-14-03, 05:09 PM   #2
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Old 12-14-03, 05:11 PM   #3
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yeah man quite liked this some good vocab and multis, but ya dont need to highlight them...we know what they are...lol....keep reppin man...pZ
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Old 12-14-03, 05:22 PM   #4
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thanks for the positive feedback... upp
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Old 12-14-03, 05:30 PM   #5
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UPP WAT THE FUCK TAKE THE PILLOW OFF AND STOP SLEEPING
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Old 12-14-03, 06:49 PM   #6
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Old 12-14-03, 07:00 PM   #7
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Yeah this was alright i thought...some lines were kinda stretched out a bit but nothing big...you had some good multies in this like Deva said, liked that...vocab was pretty good as well...but overall this was alright...keep at it.
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Old 12-14-03, 07:33 PM   #8
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Old 12-14-03, 09:51 PM   #9
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