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spit wen ready, check in dawg!

feeble minded u jus reminded me of how wack mods can be...
cudnt step to me in a three~legged race...
ur leg met wiv me n u still cudnt invade my space...
we cross references but u bein crucified like jesus...
extra meaness n death sentences means ya only head...is on ya penis...
thinkin u the shit wiv 2000+ posts...no losses wot u boast...
fuck that...
u got a new profile wen u weren't a MOD many left u as toast...
roast in the oven..shrivel under my heat..
u try to make me burn but theres always blood~in~this~meat...
beat n bullied bringin you dajarvu of old-school n bein de-moralized...
equalized by snappin ya spine n ya ribs so ur parrellel to paralized...1

uppin ur verse!

time to get skills. . well, im waiting, u swell with hatred
& talking about being elite?. . u dont even belong in elevated
text wise your still a newb, every battle u fumble through
. . shows your screenname is the only way u'll get D W
a sad truth, he's got high hopes to be a text king
& he beats me easily. . when a fairy tale is the setting
Ive always owned you. . . height wise u cant test my flight
i leave your face in more colors than florescent lights
im not even trying, your overjoyed with false thoughts
and to us your test is more distasteful than salt carts

ha...good battle....dw had some good punches and nice metas....but feeble came back with harder punches....and some funny personals....here's what got it...

^^haha...funny...DW line was good...

BREAKDOWN
Multis - dw (he had a few)
Vocab - dw
RhymeScheme - Feeble
Structure - Feeble
Flow - Tie
Metas - dw
Wordplay - dw
Punches - Feeble
Personals - Feeble (would be a tie...but Feeble's hit harder)
Creativity - Feeble
Complexity - Tie (dw line from feeble kept this a tie)
Overall - Feeble got this with just harder and more creative punches.....good read from u both though...no hate...just a vote.....

peace
4:20

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opener - feeble...Dw that was wack
closer - feeble
punches - feebs lol at the W line
personals - both verses were really indirect
wordplay - dw...just cuz you havent won any categories yet
vocab - meh at both
overal - feebs

hey feebs check the application forum dog

peace

Multis - not much really...but dw
RhymeScheme - Feeble
Structure - Feeble
Flow - both
Metas - dw
Punches - Feeble
Personals - Feeble
closing - feeble
my vote - feeble

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uppin, yo. . lets get some honest votes up in here, up in here. now! or kill yourselves for sucking at life. .

Opening: Feeb
Punches: Feeb
Personals: Feeb
Vocab: dw
Structure: Feeb
Flow: Feeb
Closer: feeb
Overall: feeb

Multis - dw
opener - Feeble
Structure - Feeble
Flow - tie
Metas - dw
Punches - Feeble
Personals - Feeble
finisher - feeble
overall - feeble

pretty good battle but feeble takes it...

Thank You.Bye

Multies - Feeble
Wordplay - N/A
Flow - Feeble
Punchlines - Feeble
Enjoyment - Feeble

Feeble won this battle by everything, DW had a nice verse jus didnt hit him hard enuff..

Vote - Feeble

alrite fair votes.....uppin this!

feeble can ya check ya pm's dawg......thanx!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !

This isn't even close..

Wordplay: Feeble
Multis: Feebs
Punches: Feebs
Flow: Feebs
Verdict: Feebs

Feebs killed...dw your whack.

Peace

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