aight we goin 5 bar limit............... i could care a less when u post as long as u don't NO-SHOW but i gueess it shoeld be in in like an houre or two.i will drop in a few................................

im keyin mine now................................
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check it

come on man, check in damn you!!!

u sed 10mins, yet ur not even browsing the forum idiot!!!!

come onnnnnnnnnnn!

agiht fuck it... here it goes....

This ain’t slavery but this bitch runnin like he was a “Freeman”, an wit these-plans, I”ll spit this kid out just like a load of my SE-MAN!!/ (semen a.k.a. my nut lmao)

Like this cats fighting un-armed, to bad he ain't throwinno savage-barz, I'l waste "FREEMAN" so bad hell be looking like his-avatar/

Like we fightin on ice u’ll trip-an-freeze, I made him weak in the knees cuz I spit-disease, this FREEMAN more vulnerable then holdin a sign that says RIP-me PLEASE!!/

This cats like a common cold I’ll just Shake-u-off, then break-u-off, take the fever just to gain-a-cough, ur lips on my dick so tight this loss will only get-u-off/

I said no-way, that I would end this battle with fuck u an have a nice day, so I changed it to “isn’t everybody from the U.K. gay“?????/

aight, sum nice bitten shit there.........ur anuva 1 hu watched 8-Mile before they battle me, eh!?!?!?

good luck....

here goes..........................

im gona spit this shit at u till you crack, crumble and fall --
u can throw everythin uve got and a wudnt stumble, not at all --

uve been on this site for 6 damn months, and uve built urself a reputation --
uve doubled ur wins and added 1 to get ur losses, haven't u heard of elevation --

the time has come to show up this prick once and for all, to me ur easy prey --
ur gona be down-trodden afta u read this verse, the rhymes'll leave u in disarray --

ur a twat hu likes to shout his mouth, wot else can u expect from a guy named 'Jshook' --
the only way u got ur 2 wins is by followin ur motto, 'by hook or by crook' --

its Christmas man, stop borin me wiv ur basic punches and ur shitty flow --
the only reason you like Christmas is cuz you get to eat the yellow bits in the snow --

nice spit man......

good luck wiv it............

lets get some votes on this..................

uppin #1

don't accuse me of bitting ne thing dog........ cuz honestly.... i neevr do............

nice drop..............

lets let teh votes come in now...

This wasn't that good of a battle, but Freeman took this. He had better vocab, and punches.... I wasn't feeling shooks verse all that much, good job though..

Return da' fava
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...772#post1004772

Tight battle man.....Can't poll but anyway...
JShook came nice... the 2nd/3rd bars were pretty nice.... the semen shit was slightly played tho, as well as the have a nice day, but it ended well really.....
I wasn't feelin the structure tho... the way its set out the fillers used at the start of the bars had little impact, whereas Freeman's did more damage as they were seperate lines with good personal references....
the 'common cold' bar was the weakest outta the verse. the multies used weren't up to much....more of just puttin multies in for the sake of it, lackin a real nice punch.
Freeman started well...2nd bar was a nice personal...
Most of the verse was consistant altho punches weren't standin out as much as Shooks... The last bar with the yellow snow was pretty weak also as a closer....Flow was on point, and overall I felt the consistant disses were always hittin.... so I'd....

Vote - Freeman

Drop an honest vote on this battle if you got time man...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=99923

lol shook, flippin the 8 mile line for ur finisher, but i'll pretend not 2 see dat lol, now my breakdown.

This ain’t slavery but this bitch runnin like he was a “Freeman”, an wit these-plans, I”ll spit this kid out just like a load of my SE-MAN!!/ (semen a.k.a. my nut lmao)
The slavery part was good but the punch is highly overused

Like this cats fighting un-armed, to bad he ain't throwinno savage-barz, I'l waste "FREEMAN" so bad hell be looking like his-avatar/
hehe, had me laughin der

Like we fightin on ice u’ll trip-an-freeze, I made him weak in the knees cuz I spit-disease, this FREEMAN more vulnerable then holdin a sign that says RIP-me PLEASE!!/
its ok...u have sum fillers in der tho...

This cats like a common cold I’ll just Shake-u-off, then break-u-off, take the fever just to gain-a-cough, ur lips on my dick so tight this loss will only get-u-off/
It was leadin up 2 sumthin but dick punch just ruined it...

I said no-way, that I would end this battle with fuck u an have a nice day, so I changed it to “isn’t everybody from the U.K. gay“?????/
lmao, was funny but styll a weak finish, ur dissin an entire nation, and UK doesn't have the highest # of gays in the world lol.



m gona spit this shit at u till you crack, crumble and fall --
u can throw everythin uve got and a wudnt stumble, not at all --
iight opener, lets see wat dis leads 2

uve been on this site for 6 damn months, and uve built urself a reputation --
uve doubled ur wins and added 1 to get ur losses, haven't u heard of elevation --
Haha, dat was nice, i like dat line

the time has come to show up this prick once and for all, to me ur easy prey --
ur gona be down-trodden afta u read this verse, the rhymes'll leave u in disarray --
hehe, its iight, bar before was better tho

ur a twat hu likes to shout his mouth, wot else can u expect from a guy named 'Jshook' --
the only way u got ur 2 wins is by followin ur motto, 'by hook or by crook' --
would b nice but where did it come from? is dat a personal?

its Christmas man, stop borin me wiv ur basic punches and ur shitty flow --
the only reason you like Christmas is cuz you get to eat the yellow bits in the snow --
meh...iight finisher...was better than JHooks atleast...

Overall Comment
Im giving Freeman the W here, Jshook was iight but too many played out punches, like every battle u see in front lines, sumbody rappin bout sex. Jshook, seperate ur bars man, it looks unattractive even before u start reading. I guess dis is iight for a 10 minute spit.

Vote- Freeman

Hit me up wit sum honest votes with the battles in my sig. Thx.

i was feeling Freemans verse a lot more...Both were weak but yeah///////////////////i was feeling his a lot more because he had more personals....Tha about got the whole concept besideds the structures were goood.

nice keep um comin.............................................
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Opener - Tie
Punches - Jshook
Personals - Jshook
Effect - Jshook
Structure - FreeMan
Flow - Jshook
Vocab - ( None Really )
Creativity - ( None Really )
Closer - Tie ( Both were weak )

Vote - Jshook

Conclusion - Jshook just had harder punches. He didnt win by much, so dont think this was a bad loss FreeMan. Both could work on structure. But its hard to do on how the site is made. It was a straight battle, nothing spectactular though. Keep Elevatin

OUT

-High Class a.k.a Confusion

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