I'll spit first

iight u spit first even doe u told me 2 iight no changin it now u spit first iight heres da rules IIIGHT!

No hate votes
no crew votes
no dick ridin votes
no unexplained votes
no feedin or bitin...

8-20 lines iight ~1~ u spit first check in neway

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...i didnt pick this, sorry i gotta knock u out wit da quickness...
...Dey say Dis trick slick, Not even tylenol can cure my sickness...
...I dont mess wit hoes i jus get da Pro sluts...
...Ya 13 man crew will be left like a bakers dozen of Doughnuts...

Man how u gonna tell me how i write my rhymes
I write my rhymes like any other fucker
Want ya to know that Im about to change over
Cuz tha game is about to be over
It's about time that u had a make over
If u come my way thats how u get fucked up
So shut up and spit some rhymes
I think I made my lines clear
But I still demand some respect
Cuz im tha one who that set it up
Im about to set it off
So go off and spit ur rhymes hoe

Lil AJ

LMAO!!! iight good shit lil man elevate doe HEres ma shit


U might not be a BLunt but imma leave u smoked...
I cant beleive im battlin dis LIL A[B/]SS [BJOKE...
Wack emcee wut kinda name is lil AJ?...
ya flow aint even Elementry..nigga its Pre-K...
Nigga u fuckin suck why da fuck u battlin me...
talk shit nigga u gon get Claped in da Knee....
you wont be able to walk but its dont matta...
didnt ya motha eva tell u to hold ya blatta....
I am wut i eat so i'll keep from eatin dis wannabe Mc....
If he spit victory in his whole verse n i stayed quiet u still cudnt beat me...(Stretched)
u a wanna be mc u,..see letters? u shud eat 2...(M & C)
If u was battlin da cat n da hat he cud prolly beat u...


heres a decent line cuz i jus felt like spitin suntin decent lmao....


I hate ya flow it makes me wanna bash ya head in....
u got a 'Old School' 'flow' like a 'Wave' of nba 'Legends'....(derre its ova)

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...i didnt pick this, sorry i gotta knock u out wit da quickness...
...Dey say Dis trick slick, Not even tylenol can cure my sickness...
...I dont mess wit hoes i jus get da Pro sluts...
...Ya 13 man crew will be left like a bakers dozen of Doughnuts...

I made a mistake heres da redu ma fizzault lmao iight ~1~

LMAO!!! iight good shit lil man elevate doe HEres ma shit


U might not be a BLunt but imma leave u smoked...
I cant beleive im battlin dis LIL [ASS JOKE...
Wack emcee wut kinda name is lil AJ?...
ya flow aint even Elementry..nigga its Pre-K...
Nigga u fuckin suck why da fuck u battlin me...
talk shit nigga u gon get Claped in da Knee....
you wont be able to walk but its dont matta...
didnt ya motha eva tell u to hold ya blatta....
I am wut i eat so i'll keep from eatin dis wannabe Mc....
If he spit victory in his whole verse n i stayed quiet u still cudnt beat me...(Stretched)
u a wanna be mc u,..see letters? u shud eat 2...(M & C)
If u was battlin da cat n da hat he cud prolly beat u...


heres a decent line cuz i jus felt like spitin suntin decent lmao....


I hate ya flow it makes me wanna bash ya head in....
u got a 'Old School' 'flow' like a 'Wave' of nba 'Legends'....(derre its ova)

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...i didnt pick this, sorry i gotta knock u out wit da quickness...
...Dey say Dis trick slick, Not even tylenol can cure my sickness...
...I dont mess wit hoes i jus get da Pro sluts...
...Ya 13 man crew will be left like a bakers dozen of Doughnuts...

iight da lil ass joke thingy is for LIL.A.J. iight u get it if u dont ~1~ b

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...i didnt pick this, sorry i gotta knock u out wit da quickness...
...Dey say Dis trick slick, Not even tylenol can cure my sickness...
...I dont mess wit hoes i jus get da Pro sluts...
...Ya 13 man crew will be left like a bakers dozen of Doughnuts...

haha this was weak

lil aj-ur flow was elementary,as was ur structure
ur punches,well there were none,plus u recycled
u had no personals.....and u need to elevate or just quit rap while u can
no hate

da magician-ur punches hit harder,u had good flow.i didnt really like ur structure though
u had a couple personals....but u basically take this battle in every categorie
so
v/da magician 7

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good look yo...Man i didnt even try dat was like a 5 minute keystyle...

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...i didnt pick this, sorry i gotta knock u out wit da quickness...
...Dey say Dis trick slick, Not even tylenol can cure my sickness...
...I dont mess wit hoes i jus get da Pro sluts...
...Ya 13 man crew will be left like a bakers dozen of Doughnuts...

Lil AJ: played stuff, couldnt see any punches.. gotta elevate man... work on flow first and punches after that. Make all your words rhyme, dont just put random stuff in, it has to roll off the tongue right... dont quit rap man, just improve, its all prac., head to the cyphers.

Magician: lil bit of wordplay lil bit of personal stuff. Your at the level where you need to make your flow more complex, and mature a little.. im not disrespecting you or anything though. use multis and innners to get your flow sounding ill, and what i meant by mature was drop that gangsta thing.. like all the "nigga" and that in your rhymes... you could if you were freestyling and u were actually a gangsta.. then the audience could see, but on the net its kind of "try hard", especially if you're white.. how often do you see em say nigga?? pretty much never.. but even if you are black its still pretty lame.

my vote: Magician

could you guys return the favour?? need some votes on this battle:
http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...d.php?p=1339183

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look son i said earlier in da thread...I didnt try at all...i was watchin t.v. when i was spittin dis sh1t im serious iight ~1~ and i said 'nigga' 3 times

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...i didnt pick this, sorry i gotta knock u out wit da quickness...
...Dey say Dis trick slick, Not even tylenol can cure my sickness...
...I dont mess wit hoes i jus get da Pro sluts...
...Ya 13 man crew will be left like a bakers dozen of Doughnuts...

omg! lil aj is tha worst rappa on tha planet. it didnt even rhyme tha whole thing was horrible, the best part was when you ended it lol. da magician took it all.
my vote goes to him

vote on my battle i did wit bigpimpn, return tha favor, an im not sayn vote for me, jus keep it real.

yeah like ma man posion said lil aj elevate big time magican took this

vote magican
now i voted here so go vote on me and canopy's battle and mine wit aj i will return tha favor

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