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NeW:Breed | 1 | 25.00% | |
Nyne Myll | 3 | 75.00% | |
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04-09-04, 12:06 PM | #1 | |
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Nyne Myll Vs NeW:Breed
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No Biting No Writtens No Hate votes No Dick Ridin' I'll spit as soon as you check in.... |
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04-09-04, 12:09 PM | #2 |
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IP: FAEF 230F
ok im checkin in i wanna an that votes must be explained clearly n fully please>?? peace
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04-09-04, 12:18 PM | #3 | |
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You could have H.I.V and you wouldn't be as ill as me// ya even got your name off of a 50 Cent DVD// i'll leave ya speechless like a scriptless actors// when the time comes i'm blowin up like nuclear reactors// torturin MC's as if they were Jews and i was a Nazi// my glock lights up ya block like flashes from the paparazzi// i'll leave a hole in ya the size of a hockey puck// there's nothin like an easy victory against this dumb fuck// you need to be taken out the game like a Sitcom Blunder// the only man that see's ya talent is Stevie Wonder// |
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04-09-04, 12:23 PM | #4 |
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IP: FAEF 230F
ok wat u packin a 9mm wat gat? fuck thats pack a punch,
see i dont need a weapon i eat mcz like u 4 lunch, shit im hungry now, but u taste faul..i'll sick u back up, shorein ur insiders in a plastic pot, u a menice like denis wit ur ellastic sling shot, claim u a G but u not, ur cold as fuck wishin u were hot! u a pest 2 me, jus like a spot, but u easily ereased coz spots go pop, ure soon 2 burst, shit ive seen sum bad verses in my time but gotsta b the worsed, ure rhymes are really stupid shit they really silly, u aint gota gun but a 9 milli willy, so thats why u get no pussy u rediculious, shit u a particular part boy u cliterious, fanny 4 a face, jus ask me 2 slow down if u cant maintain the pace, i 'll whip the smile of ya face, so boy not smerk, ive never found it so easy 2 diss a bitch, fem u jus got merked!!
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04-09-04, 12:24 PM | #5 |
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IP: FAEF 230F
aight gone a lil over so sorry but fuck it uppin votes please
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04-09-04, 12:56 PM | #6 |
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votes plzzzz i wanna get thids battle dun n dusted u no?!!
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04-09-04, 04:57 PM | #7 | |
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COME ON YA'LL VOTE UP!!!
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04-09-04, 05:30 PM | #8 | |
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IP: 75F5 BDD1
Punches: Nyne kept bringing it, and each line was a decent punch at least. The last line is kinda overused, but still ok for a closer. I didn't really feel any of Breed's stuff, except that one ill personal "9 milli willi"... that's a burn.
Personals: Like I said, all to Breed.. didn't see one from nyne Flow: I dunno... nyne had pretty good flow but it felt really mechanical.. i thought NB was off at times but at least had some nice variance... worked for me so i make it a tie. All in all, pretty tight... but i go with breed cuz i like his style more.. nyne you said no writtens but your shit felt like a pre, no variation or anything, no personals, nothing. at least fuck around with world play, multis, something to spice it up. Hit up my battles.
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04-09-04, 09:37 PM | #9 | |
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uppin For Votes, Come On Ya'll We Need More Than Just 1 Vote So Get Votin On This Shit!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!thanks In Advance
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04-09-04, 11:01 PM | #10 | |
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yo that was a new breed of garbage, no h8
4real dogg ya ryhmes was playschool, and ya punches was non-existant, =elevate! u got a lil flow but its repetetive and flavor-less like old gum mack milli came with it, all around, one-sided in my opinion "You could have H.I.V and you wouldn't be as ill as me// ya even got your name off of a 50 Cent DVD//" -the paparazzi/ nazzi line was phat too i just call it how i c it peace
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04-10-04, 09:56 AM | #11 |
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c'mon 1-1 we nee votes on this battle plzzzzzz
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04-10-04, 10:19 AM | #12 | |
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Nyne Myll: You had some alright flow but your punches were kinda basic. You didn't really have any metas or multis and a personal would have been nice. You can't just spit rhymes, you gotta spit them at someone, That's why this is called a battle. One line did stand out to me though........
torturin MC's as if they were Jews and i was a Nazi// my glock lights up ya block like flashes from the paparazzi// ^Kinda hot.....lol NeW:BreeD: Your rhymes are all over the place. You never really established a flow at all. I understand that you like to just keystyle and let the typo's go, but no one else understands it. Take your time and reread what you write, it only takes a minute or two. You also had a line that stuck out to me........ ure rhymes are really stupid shit they really silly, u aint gota gun but a 9 milli willy, ^Only real personal in the battle Overall, this was two newbs battling who are both gonna get better. That's what these votes are all about. But it is a competition in which only one can win.............. Vote: Nyne Myll for more established flow and punches
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04-10-04, 10:20 AM | #13 | |
O.wning Y.ou D.aily
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Oh yeah............ Fix the size of your text. That shit is almost impossible to read
^for Nyne Myll
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04-10-04, 10:24 AM | #14 | |
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aight thanks for the votes and all the feedback, keep 'em comin!
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04-10-04, 10:43 AM | #15 | |
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Nyne Myll Takes This One.His Verse Had More Punches & Better Disses.Most Of His Punches Were Poorly Delivered Or Had Played Concepts.He Takes It In The Punches Department Mainly For His Usage & Not Strength.New Breed's Verse Barely Even Flowed & In Some Parts He Didnt Make Sense.Seemed Like He Was Talkin Jibberish.Elevate
Vote-Nyne Myll Can Ya'll Return The Favor And Vote On This: http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117642
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