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11-29-04, 06:58 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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Freindly Fire Ft. Indeph & Cenario
IP: 5043 32F4
Stepin back to see a teammate fall, when I dont give a Shit? I don’t really care if they fall so far down I make them Quit Startin beef with them temporarily & they always shit Seriously Then after what I did they end up in the hospital having Surgery Hopefully he doesn’t come back, I think he thinks hes Reckless Well he came back, & it ended up that I jacked his Neckless I didn’t really want this to happen to him but he did it Him-Self He has problems trying to fight back, Well I said watch Your-Self Well he said he didn’t care so I took it to him, Was that Wrong? Must have been, we were a team, we us to be together for so Long Took awhile for him to finish his elevation but it was his Decision So he ended up in the hospital got & out weeks later with an Incision Came up to me felt like he was gonna hit me, but that was a Guess So I asked him if he would drop the beef, and hoped for an Yes He said No then it came out that I was right, so he punched Me I couldn’t do anything but take the hard blow to the face, Directly Later that day I caught up to him spoke words to him, he said Nothing He Walked away from me so I punch him he & didn’t do Anything I giggled because we usto be fam, everyday I would sell a Gram And he was usually happy because I gave mad deals to such a Man -2x4…True Story It was my mistake..but now I gotta change..how.. will I tell my fellow gang..I went to church..and I was saved.. would they accept me..let me in or contest me.. I couldn't continue this life...with all these cops who oppres me.. surprisingly..they stood right by with me..they said they believed they'd die with me..but that I could leave.. but when I leave somebody gotta die at least..they said.. shoot the nigga on the porch across the street.. I think that's the nigga you hang with in tatered jeans,.. They'd terminate me if I should freeze..so I was on the brink..My own Life over his..I think my boy was on to me.. I tried to send gestures..to tell him to go inside.. but as he moved his feet..the GD's were notified..they grabed him clenching his shoulders..said do what I told ya.. and you know wahats gonna happen..if you should fold up.. homie told me..nigga just get the job done...I don't care if he's your nigga, cousin, mother or father..pull the trigger or risk getting shotup............................................ ............bang -Indeph Fights were always occuring, we would pretend were shamed And at the same time play these girls like nintendo games Tempers rose quickly, especially mine do to my background Friend or foe u knew regardless that i would never back down The same routine took place, i guess it wore down on us to Seemed a good day for us was us two hanging out plus two Exchanged words here and their but nothing of real damage Gangsta enough with our fist, no need to conceal hammers Close enough, claimed to be brothers with different mom's Like suicide attackers are anger came equipped with bombs Now as of the late few months when u were in this area code Remember my father's death, u helped me carry my clothes But shit always wasn't so smooth as our friendship showed When it came to my ex weren't u the one that got blowed? But in a way i understood, just repercussions of past sins I didn't help when u were on the court like chucky atkins Our relation at times was as stable as cripples on tight ropes I harbored hate, u attracted girls, i had to search like lycos Ashamed, ended up on a severe note due to consistant lies Everyone was beaming at me with extreme persistant eyes I didn't know at first what the problem was, i soon found out A comment i made left me alone in other words a man down It's funny how the littlest things can hit emotions very hard Seems ya loyalty went under paid like mall security guards But shit happens, i'm not a wizard, i can't turn back time So for now our friendship is exposed as more crimes then -The janet jackson halftime…Cenario |
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11-29-04, 07:03 PM
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<<-Carpe Noctum->>
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IP: 3240 794D
wow,this was dope,you guys all had descriptive words, imagery and genuine situations in your verses,they were all strong in there own right, and flowed well together, nice job guys,keep it up, 9/10
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"QUOD ME NUTRIT, ME DESTRUIT--AUT VINCERE AUT MORI" O Y D   *FluidMusic* *Poetic Scriptures Moderator* |
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11-29-04, 07:05 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 5043 32F4
im no guy im a girl....weerd...jk...haha...uppin Yall check my other open mics to..
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11-29-04, 07:39 PM
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IP: 0825 899A
werd..Fluid's dope...
^______________________^ you are a girl
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The Competition
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11-29-04, 07:43 PM
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†•The Council Nigga •†
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IP: CC30 7562
One Word ________ WhACK haha Just Playin This Was Dope Homies Keep It Up This Was Hott You Spit Some Sick Shit In This Word Im Feelin This All The Way 9/10 |
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11-29-04, 09:46 PM
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IP: 0825 899A
^_____________^
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The Competition
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11-29-04, 10:42 PM
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#7
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 5043 32F4
hehe good feedback keep it up...weerdizzle..
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11-29-04, 10:46 PM
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...The Truth...
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IP: ABE5 5A5C
it was koo, 8.5/10.....................................
i still think 2 by 4 is a bitch but this is about his mc skills, their alright, but as a person hes still a bitch
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...Done Wit The Games...
...Time to Get On My Grown Man... |
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11-29-04, 11:25 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 5043 32F4
Quote:
thanks you for being honest with my mc skills...and its not my falt..im so dope...  ..i guess it is being online day and night weerd...but i ahte my country...fucken gay..wanna get out of here my freinds are goofs..all they do is piss around like lil bitches...but when i move ill be dropen audios nuts..weerd |
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11-29-04, 11:38 PM
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...The Truth...
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IP: ABE5 5A5C
yea, wateva, still a bitch, my open mic shit is wack unless u hear it audio, thats why im doin some songs now
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...Done Wit The Games...
...Time to Get On My Grown Man... |
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11-29-04, 11:52 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 5043 32F4
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ya i can see you being dope at audio....but man you need to hear me then...i aint no lil bitch... |
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11-29-04, 11:57 PM
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mess with me get cooked
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IP: 4162 CDFC
hey da next fucking time yall do an callab fuckah'z get at me nuff said..........
 o and one word for that piece DOPE
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 THE SLEEP & THE DREAM- Quote:
SEE THAT EMPIRE WERD~!  P.S.A COMING SOON-GODS BETRAYL OUT NOW-THE SLEEP & THE DREAM |
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11-30-04, 12:12 AM
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IP: 6CB8 12EC
Two By Four- I think you got some serious skill, but put a little bit more work in to your rhymes... Just take five more minutes with the last word of each line and you got a seriously dope piece.
Indeph- Dope as usual, felt the emotion for sure in this one... Nice rhymes and all... Props... Cenario- Nice shit also, some deep shit, and some humor (end).... Good job to all... |
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11-30-04, 12:23 AM
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Scaring Niggaz Into Text Retirement
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IP: 666C F77E
uppin for more feedback in this bitch
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11-30-04, 01:46 AM
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Scaring Niggaz Into Text Retirement
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IP: 666C F77E
uppin for more feedback
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i scared f-empire into text retirement, pussy jobs important, wendy's uniform has to be clean, i starch it daily...
hate niggaz who diss me cause i look like an overweight carson daly// ^Bar from "People Pleaser" ft. Indeph (had to impersonate empire for the om) Quote:
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