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| Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End | RV Radio  |
05-04-05, 06:04 PM
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Make Believe...(C.A.L.I DISS)...
IP: 7236 47FA
Bored as fuck...didnt know who else to go at so i choose cali
 MAKE BELIEVE This bitch is make believe... you a make believe thug aint nobody here believe you... This bitch is make believe... You never seen real life in the ghetto,real knife or the metal... I seen ya lifestyle ya make believein...ya gota regognize... That real life aint nothin like them mob flick they televise... Ya need to calm down...and get ya life changed... Real thugs say nothin...'fake' 'niggaz' like fame... You steady flashin...braggin bout them drugs you stashin... Ya loud mouth ...nobody needs to know whats happenin... You make believe everythin that we hate to see... Play your possition...understand what you meant to be.. And u wonder why theses rappers all hate u breathin... Its cos they live the real life while you make believein... You aint never been a thug...you never popped nothin... Never sold drugs..never weighed up and shot nothin... I guess that mob type of flick got you hyped up... Pussy thats not you...that life'll get you clapped up... Ya need to pull ya jeans up...loose ya bandana... U not thug...watch ya mouth...its ya damn grammar... This bitch is make believe... you a make believe thug aint nobody here believe you... This bitch is make believe... You never seen real life in the ghetto,real knife or the metal... Yo...let me break it down..you an amatuer...ya fam mad atcha... Ya mama knows that her lil boys actin outta character... Ya fake ass shoulda stayed in college doin english and maths... You might have figured out the foneys are the things that dont last... You aint never popped nothin...you a happy go lucky type... Afraid on the streets...one of those go snitch grassin types... Lets get it settled...grab ya knife and the metal... Wana be a thug?...go loose ya life in the ghetto... You aint never been a thug...you never popped nothin... Never sold drugs..never weighed up and shot nothin... I guess that mob type of flick got you hyped up... Pussy thats not you...that life'll get you clapped up... Ya need to pull ya jeans up...loose ya bandana... U not thug...watch ya mouth...its ya damn grammar... This bitch is make believe... you a make believe thug aint nobody here believe you... This bitch is make believe... You never seen real life in the ghetto,real knife or the metal... Its all the same...everyday i see the same routine... Same people wana talk like they shottin rocks to the fienes... You a half a ounce bitch...never seen with a KI... But wana talk like ya pushin nine bars on the street... You a wannabe fake...u a bum...u a make believe thug... You aint really that hard..Tha Q needs to give you a big hug... Stop tellin stories bout the life that ya lead.. Before its too late...and die by the lies you speak... You aint never been a thug...you never popped nothin... Never sold drugs..never weighed up and shot nothin... I guess that mob type of flick got you hyped up... Pussy thats not you...that life'll get you clapped up... Ya need to pull ya jeans up...loose ya bandana... U not thug...watch ya mouth...its ya damn grammar... This bitch is make believe... you a make believe thug aint nobody here believe you... This bitch is make believe... You never seen real life in the ghetto,real knife or the metal...
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05-04-05, 06:13 PM
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IP: 7236 47FA
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05-04-05, 06:21 PM
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IP: 3147 6785
this was seriously garbage truthfull i mean if you pick me at least attempt to come hard even my haters wouldnt even lie and say you stand a chance in a battle aganist me go diss someone on your level..........................................lik e sinner and let me up this so people will laugh at you uppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp
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^^in other words your scared running from a battle on a site made for battling and your mod so you dont have to battle you just duck and pop shit? herb  I OWN RB YOUR NAME GOES HERE SOCRATES
EFUSIVE PAIR-A-DYCE LYRIC
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05-04-05, 06:36 PM
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Hell yeah
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IP: 5262 5C6E
everything that diss's you cali is all wack so meh,
anyway nice vocab,mmm at the structure,nice nice flow,overall pretty good diss |
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05-04-05, 06:45 PM
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E-Style, Bitch.
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IP: 6EAC C462
Okay, man
fuck what cali said he's never written a respectable open mic in his life i like it, an NO CALI I'm not sayin this just because i apparently ''hate you'' like every other person who votes against you, but blah back too the topic at hand nice rhymes man flow was right on point, an what people fail ta understand is this is an open mic, not a battle...so the concept an the way u write ya rhymes has ta change, an u took full of advantage of that an hit real hard with some nice lines.....it may have more effect as an audio, but still, the flow was good, disses were strong, good personals, punches lacked a bit of textual complexcity in some places, thats why i said it may be better as audio....but not much i can fault, its a hot ass diss an cali wont respond, he'll just shit talk about u for 3 weeks until he has enuff personals ta drop a 6 line battle keep 'em comin man, 8/10 for this Peace out.
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05-04-05, 09:43 PM
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IP: 3147 6785
lol at the dickriders funny how the worst audio head and the worst text head even had the nerve to post in here i k.oed you dopeman akak teplon that should tell you how extremly wack you are and i will rank this serious iddillic and this is being real you had no good personals structure was horrible no flow to it at all none period shit was way off here badly disses were either weak or played and vocab was grade school status this IS a open mic but its a diss so hence a battle verse so no teplon structure and shit dont change idiot only on a song thats why im 6-1 at audio after beating half the audio vets on rv and your 0-0 cuz you still scared to turn your mic on............this is truely garbage i hope you can suck dick idillic cuz being a groupie is the only way youll ever get in the rap game...........
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vvv AND A NEW LEVEL OF HERB EMERGES vvv Quote:
^^in other words your scared running from a battle on a site made for battling and your mod so you dont have to battle you just duck and pop shit? herb I OWN RB YOUR NAME GOES HERE SOCRATES
EFUSIVE PAIR-A-DYCE LYRIC
VALOR
OAKLEY SDIZZLE
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05-04-05, 09:45 PM
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IP: 3147 6785
and oh yeah one more thing there is not one metaphore or punch in that entire verse....................
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vvv AND A NEW LEVEL OF HERB EMERGES vvv Quote:
^^in other words your scared running from a battle on a site made for battling and your mod so you dont have to battle you just duck and pop shit? herb I OWN RB YOUR NAME GOES HERE SOCRATES
EFUSIVE PAIR-A-DYCE LYRIC
VALOR
OAKLEY SDIZZLE
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05-04-05, 10:33 PM
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leave you rest'n pz's
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IP: 79B1 EDD4
i kinda agree with cali, if your bored n pick some1
decent to diss, you should take the time to get personals n dope punches, alot of your verse was iffy.... i mean you sayin hes make believe'n is sayin your real n that said, kinda puts you in a quandry..... i mean its ok to diss cats but make it interesting or funny to read . overall it wasnt bad, but far from a great diss...no hate
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts what the fuck, was you high..? did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...! . . fake fucks..move on...! |
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05-04-05, 11:27 PM
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Skadoosh!
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IP: 91F7 E22B
structure was off and the flow was pretty choppy
ya had gud vocabs n shit but nuthin that really caught my attention no real dope personals on him which shudn't be hard really........i mean CALI been on here for a long time and has so many names ya cud get hundreds of personals on him!! overall 6/10 RTF on my RV Road Trip OM!!!!
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05-05-05, 02:19 PM
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IP: 42F4 D4F3
lol..tephlon understands the shit..yes it is a diss..but its an open mic..not a battle verse...and therefore i cnt come with a whole dope 3 verses on one topic towards cali..and it was just sumthin to do..but it was not really a battle verse...the topic is make believe...cali acts like hes a big gangsta...when hes not...ya feel me..but cali..why u gettin wound up...lmao...u the most known cat on here..thts why it was at you...u should be flattered bitch....lol..it aint personal...
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05-05-05, 02:22 PM
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IP: 42F4 D4F3
and why are cats who i thought were vets still talkin bout flow in text verses...the only flow is the one i used to write it...which yall wouldnt catch anyway...u canhave structure...but no flow..no no....
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05-05-05, 04:25 PM
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IP: 0AE0 3B1A
This was a decent drop
you had some personals , you wrote this as if you were battling cali .. and this is an om so you would have to switch up your style , to drop an om your punchlines were alittle shacky, some were hitten , and some were just plain fillers.. structure was good , your flow was on point ...like tephlon said it probably would have been better if you did it on the mic... but it was still a good drop keep it up ..just work on your vocab usage and how you word your bars ,... and use better direct punchlines .. to the person your tryin to diss.. not just punchlines that could possibly go to anyone , na'mean.. overall keep it up , hope to see some more from you soon
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