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12-31-03, 01:31 AM | #1 | |||
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[WK9] 11 High Class (2-0) 12 K.Largo (2-3)
IP: 6CDC 921F
Topic: Quality
Verses Due: Jan 9 Voting Ends: Jan 12 |
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12-31-03, 03:57 AM | #2 | |||
A King Missing a Queen...
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IP: 8D7B 43DF
Checkin In...
Nice topic Realist, It will be a little tuff
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12-31-03, 01:48 PM | #3 | |||||||
ShO-Nuff. Fuckers
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im here Yayyyy...
let's make it good.. g-luCk
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12-31-03, 02:53 PM | #4 | |||||||
ShO-Nuff. Fuckers
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An old king relentless in his pursuit of perfection sought out seneless abuse 'cause he was used to attention summoned the towns talent for random entertaiment but the scene would get violent if it didnt entertain him take for example this young man who stumbled atop spilled jokes like a computer but he mumbled a lot he would fumble the plot and folded it senseless but for this mistake he was beat till it left him breathless relentless was the pursuit and heres another example a simple song group of a sister and brother ensemble their melodies were clear & loud like a summer in june but they sounded like a new guitar that was not yet in tune so their chords were draped, cause it wasnt what he hoped I guess u can call it fate that they sang hanging by a rope so this went on talent after talent left dead & abandoned they had to do what was told, there was no way around it but so behold the day that this tyrant was finnally satisfied he found a sweet lulabye that couldnt ever be falseafied she sang song, with the grace & elegance of a hummingbird was given riches, in exchange of presence and nothing more it's funny her name would fit this search of extravagant formality birthed in a poor family who soon named this gift Quality........ And so she was signed for a multimillion dollar contract at last they greedy CEO had found what he was looking for..
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12-31-03, 02:59 PM | #5 | |||||||
ShO-Nuff. Fuckers
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*edited it to center it*
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01-03-04, 12:04 AM | #6 | |||
A King Missing a Queen...
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High Class Verse
IP: 8D7B 43DF
" Quality "
A step that paces further than other steps Its a respect, that even the respected respect Attracts the neglected, but they dont neglect it Brings endless effect, and incourages the effected Its a project projected... Ment to be perfected A wide range elective, not yet elected A present state dream, in relation to schemes So far a big copy, the light has not gleamed... Its the gun held inside the womb of a holster You have seen bold, but this essence is bolder Over time things grow old, but this never older While objects struggle with weight... It has free shoulders Others appear to be motionless, while this in motion Potions come and go with lives, but not this potion Ideas seam to reflect as this is the reflecter You can press hard, But it handles the pressure New things exhist, but this always exhisted A passion to lift, but can this emotion be lifted? Not a simple gift, the opener must be the gifted there are twist's always solved, but this is to twisted This leaves the patient with out any patience Everything occupied while this is forever vacant For the disabled flyers, this enables you to fly All of your dis-likes could be solved simply by.......... a Better Quality... ( I hope everyone understands the similies and shit in there )
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01-03-04, 12:34 AM | #7 | |||
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Damn....DOPE from both... ...
This is a hard decision... ... Word Usage: High Class Better Story: K.Largo Vocabulary: K.Largo Creativity: K.Largo Good Solid Flow: High Class Damn Some close shit... But i really think that K.Largo Edged it.. Shit was a good battle...Mad props to both Ya both got some potental.... .................................................. ................... Vote-K.Largo
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01-06-04, 04:21 PM | #8 | |||||||
..Soft Focus..
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This was a great battle. I enjoyed the different apraches from the writters. Very creative.
K-L- Impressive verse, had a great detailed description on this topic made the reader want to keep going and the vocab and what not...was really good. I Enjoyed the openeing lines...they really helped your piece...because you opened smooth...then let the story go in the middle...and then finished with a slight edge...which i thought was impressive good work High- Also a very impressive verse. i loved the similies in it and the wordplay that brought your verse into a great format of truth. because a lot of people i feel look at quality like that. and you word usage was okie some parts you elaveted but that wasnt really needed for the way you went about it. It was a good piece well done. But overly I enjoyed K largos verse a little better. because with 'quality' high class you had roughly the same idea as me about it...which made it feel i was reading thoughts over again...so it wasnt as impressive because lots of people ask those questions and have those opinions..so it just seemed not basic but not perfection..no what i mean..to me the more complex verse was k largo slightly because of the different way he went about it High Class...you had a great verse but..i just enjoyed the story line by K...good work though...keep it up Vote K Largo Peace.
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01-06-04, 07:57 PM | #9 | |||||||
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i'll hafta be tha one that goes against tha grain...
here we go... K: really nice story that was thrown in there and kept me hooked to read it, i wanted to find out wat had happened but at tha same time, tha story was confusin until tha very end, or rather half way through at least before i was gettin tha picture, which, by tha way, u did have real good imagery and i enjoyed that aspect, tha fact that u showed Quality as something that's both a virtue and can lead to a "tyrancy" as u put it was rather interestin... I would give u a 7.8 / 10 G/J HC: at first it had seemed like ur idea was missin tha sense of "Quality" but i soon found that i was wrong. after about tha first four lines i found wat it was u were explaining and how u explained it, not something i was expecting really but had a nice touch anyway, i really liked tha semi-"wordplay" u used as u broke up tha words and wat not (esp. tha gifted line) but to fully understand took a second reading, although tha first read still took ur breath away, overall a real nice touch to reflect Quality as something only people who deserve can get. 8.1 / 10 G/J Winner: High Class Both keep it up and improve, one's limit is even past heaven if u seek it... PS: if ur wonderin y tha rating is like that, i made a program on my TI-83 that calculated a percentage than i divided that by ten... hey, it works....
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01-07-04, 06:01 AM | #10 | |||||
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vote largo
his verse was good and ending even better something i wouldnt have thought about this subject the imagery was good first thought it was death but i see now it wasnt good imagery does that shit to ya high class: his was more amusing simply creativity, origionality wins in my views ur vocab was fantasttic and flow with the vocab was a great object to hold and u held it througout yah peice but in this case he won with creativity,origionality,and amusement
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01-08-04, 10:37 AM | #11 | |||||||
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Well...
I'm kinda torn here... Both of you threw some really good verses. I was really swept up in Largo's story... Great imagery, great fucking flow. Wasn't thrilled with the ending, though. I was liking being back in medevil times... But I appreciate the twist you gave, nonetheless. Vocab and originality are to be commended. At first I was pretty put off by this verse. The constant use of the same word, slightly altered... Made me think there wasn't much effort put into this... But then as I got half way through it or so... I saw and understood why you were doing it... And thought, "wow, that's pretty dope". Good verse, real nice use of vocab, flow was pretty tight. Still, for the originality, but mostly for the story included... I gotta throw to Largo. By a tiny fuckin margin. Props to both. Peace
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01-12-04, 07:12 PM | #12 | |||
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K Largo wins.
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