just a peice from a text album or book i did last year i've posted it on other sites but not here so tell me what you think and peep the rest of the collection at www.geocities.com/raven420_ca/album.htm

it's almost midnight but this pear isn't cast in darkness/
almost a daytime sight thanks to the moon's brightness/
but for sure like in my life I am here utterly isolated/
my thoughts tear relentlessly my esteem degraded/
when your consensus pulls away as your greatest fear/
when your mood's wild swinging removes who's near/
then you got my state of life my own personal hell/
where life feels void of freedom like existence in a cell/
resistance causes further disturbance in a repeated cycle/
the only way out seems to cause the vital signs to fall/
that's why I'm here now with liquor and cement blocks/
I passed around ideas, often having these suicide thoughts/
so now I stand up and out loud say to no one, 'good bye!'/
'my boss, my ex wife fuck you!', to my child who might cry.../
I'm sorry but it was the only way I apologize for it but bye/
a splash and abit of noise creates a scene worthy for me to die/

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win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's


and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league

yo that shit was fire keep it coming

it was good.
try to increase your vocab so that yor shit could flow/


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demolish of chryme sindicate

damn, that was pretty hot! Yea, vocab upage would help the flow out a bit. But other than that, it was really good. Keep droppin'.