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10-31-03, 01:34 PM | #1 | ||||||
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in the killing zone
IP: 4577 CD9A
i don't know what to do with this life of mine
because being picked on is just not fine help me, i need my life line don't hang up or shatter my spine you talked behind my back all the time fuck, you're not my friend and that is fine shit, tommorrow, i'll get a new friend guy or girl, whatever, it's time to spend maybe there's someone you can lend and i give that person back or i'll pretend that i lost him or her at that show we did attend but i'll pay you back, nope dead end i'm bullied at school everyday they choose me to be the prey and in the thrid grade i was never invited to play or to get my picture taken in santa's sleigh i'm like a fucking cat that is astray and my life is a cliche someone do something about it or i'll kill myself like my friend did it. |
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10-31-03, 01:37 PM | #2 | |||
You talkin to me?
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IP: AE7D DE0F
I hope this is venting, but it seems like a cry for help.... if it is, get some.
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10-31-03, 02:01 PM | #3 | ||||||
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IP: C1DA C961
don't take lyrics so seriously
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10-31-03, 07:02 PM | #4 | |||||||
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IP: C1DA C961
yo nigga overall this was a good drop, vocab was average flow was good, concept was good, a nice drop.
check this out and drop some feed back on it plz, thx. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...7212#post877212
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10-31-03, 08:58 PM | #5 | ||||||
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Jyeh nice flow and vocab was aight. Keep it up
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