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Old 01-16-05, 11:45 PM   #1
Kordozar
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From: Fifth Ave
Kordozar vs Roy Merkem

IP: 4C83 DF2E

Battle Rules:

10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
3-0 Ko
4-1 Tko

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 01-17-05 at 12:20 AM

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Old 01-16-05, 11:45 PM   #2
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Kordozar has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-16-05 11:45 PM.
 
Old 01-16-05, 11:47 PM   #3
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Old 01-16-05, 11:56 PM   #4
Kordozar
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His Hand On His Sack And Than His Seed Lands On A Napkin..
Lilcutieboi=Queer,If Homo's Wass A Football Team Than He'd Be Tha Captain..
You Hot?We'll I'll Turn Ya Iceman Like George Gervin..
Lil M.o.h Kid You Hurtin,Likes Men So He Lets Roy Merkem..
Confused If He's In Tha Closet Or Not So He ? His Location..
Hides Tha Stats,Cus Dude Has More L's On His Rekord Than A Radio Station..
Overdozed On Coke,Is What Makes Him Doper Than You..
Ya Onli Chances Of Beatin Me Iss Havin All Mih Votes Removed..
...............Try A Dq And Ya Still Wont Be Victorious..
Kid Askin Fa A Battle But Won't Stand A Chance Like Mictorious..


Explanations......
2nd Line Lilcutie Boi=Aim Name
Geroge Gervin Aka Iceman
Moh Money On Hand
? His Location
Hides His Rekord
Under His Avy Says Doper Than You
L's On His Rekord,Lyrics On Rekord Radio Stations Have Tha Most
I Beat Mictorious......
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Old 01-17-05, 12:00 AM   #5
Metaskriptz
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Take you That Long To Pre-Write...

Aight Check it.

Deturming by your flow I will rip you apart leaving you with nothing but bones.......
By your rhymes I can tell your Dirt, I guess we can call you Fred Flinstone......
I guess since you watch cartoons so much, You wont make it very far.....
After I blow you out, I will leave ya body like daffy on ya avatar....
I guess how you act you toss gay man salads to make a hit...
You have Gay money..I guess thats why you talk alot of shit....
Open your mouf with that salad thing makes us not listen to what you say...
Smoking that Crack, I guess Thats Why you look like Flavor Flav when he was Back in Da Day..
Im like a lyrical disease about to sneak into one of your tiny leave open cuts...
So I guess I can feel sorry for you..Because your just a squirrel looking for a NUT...


If you Dont get the salad tossing Thing..Just leave the Site..lol
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Old 01-17-05, 12:04 AM   #6
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My Record is 7-1 Boy....I had a More higher But I reset it..To Start All OVer...O well'' Uppin
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Old 01-17-05, 12:25 AM   #7
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Aktually I Had Ta Leave,And Ya Shit Wass Wack Uppin Fa Votes.............
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Old 01-17-05, 12:27 AM   #8
Metaskriptz
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just Like ya sig and yo avy..Nikka, You IMed me to just get my Screen Name..Lol ok uppin
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Old 01-17-05, 12:30 AM   #9
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Called A Personal Cus.............................
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Old 01-17-05, 12:40 AM   #10
Technical
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Voted For: Kordozar

lol no explanation needed, one sided battle
punches- K
personals- K, RM u had not one personal
structure- both were easy to read
closing- K

By your rhymes I can tell your Dirt, I guess we can call you Fred Flinstone......
^^^^wat da fuck was dat....lol
 
Old 01-17-05, 12:42 AM   #11
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You Musta Didnt read it Right...Uppin.............
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Old 01-17-05, 01:12 AM   #12
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ehh this wasnt too good of a battle.....

Kordozar........
His Hand On His Sack And Than His Seed Lands On A Napkin..
Lilcutieboi=Queer,If Homo's Wass A Football Team Than He'd Be Tha Captain..
decent opener.....gay jokes are kinda played

You Hot?We'll I'll Turn Ya Iceman Like George Gervin..
Lil M.o.h Kid You Hurtin,Likes Men So He Lets Roy Merkem..
decent bar...hit ok....

Confused If He's In Tha Closet Or Not So He ? His Location..
Hides Tha Stats,Cus Dude Has More L's On His Rekord Than A Radio Station..
best bar here....good personal....hit hard......

Overdozed On Coke,Is What Makes Him Doper Than You..
Ya Onli Chances Of Beatin Me Iss Havin All Mih Votes Removed..
1st line was a good personal...2nd line was ok...

...............Try A Dq And Ya Still Wont Be Victorious..
Kid Askin Fa A Battle But Won't Stand A Chance Like Mictorious..
ehh ok closer...not that good...kinda self glory here


Roy merkem.................
Deturming by your flow I will rip you apart leaving you with nothing but bones.......
By your rhymes I can tell your Dirt, I guess we can call you Fred Flinstone......
ok opener....set up line sucked....hit ok

I guess since you watch cartoons so much, You wont make it very far.....
After I blow you out, I will leave ya body like daffy on ya avatar....
set up line again was garbage...2nd line ok...not that good

I guess how you act you toss gay man salads to make a hit...
You have Gay money..I guess thats why you talk alot of shit....
good attempt at wordplay....could have been worded better....prolly your best bar here

Open your mouf with that salad thing makes us not listen to what you say...
Smoking that Crack, I guess Thats Why you look like Flavor Flav when he was Back in Da Day..
not too good.....

Im like a lyrical disease about to sneak into one of your tiny leave open cuts...
So I guess I can feel sorry for you..Because your just a squirrel looking for a NUT...
not a good closer...wasnt feelin it at all....


kordozar takes this easily with an overall better verse....his verse was on a whole different level.......better punches....and better personals.......RETURN THE FAVOR PLEASE!!!!!!!! link in sig



ahh shit....i cant vote...not enough posts....damn...oh well....this is what i thought of the battle even though it dont count.....
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Old 01-17-05, 01:16 AM   #13
Metaskriptz
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O well if you Win you Win....Nice Battle....I cant be the best At everything.Nice battle Kid,

I hate when People Call me kid so I won't Say it to nobody anymore
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Old 01-17-05, 01:41 AM   #14
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23-7, 16 Knockouts
 
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so explain it to me den man, mayb ur outlook on it is different from mine
 
Old 01-17-05, 02:03 AM   #15
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Voted For: Kordozar

Deturming by your flow I will rip you apart leaving you with nothing but bones.......
By your rhymes I can tell your Dirt, I guess we can call you Fred Flinstone......
I guess since you watch cartoons so much, You wont make it very far.....
After I blow you out, I will leave ya body like daffy on ya avatar....
I guess how you act you toss gay man salads to make a hit...
You have Gay money..I guess thats why you talk alot of shit....
Open your mouf with that salad thing makes us not listen to what you say...
Smoking that Crack, I guess Thats Why you look like Flavor Flav when he was Back in Da Day..
Im like a lyrical disease about to sneak into one of your tiny leave open cuts...
So I guess I can feel sorry for you..Because your just a squirrel looking for a NUT...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^Lol,The flavor flave line and the closer was dope fam, nice punches. Throughout the whole verse though, ya had some personals,punches (not that decent) flow was kinda chopped up fam,work on struture.Salad line, was creative,nice.








His Hand On His Sack And Than His Seed Lands On A Napkin..
Lilcutieboi=Queer,If Homo's Wass A Football Team Than He'd Be Tha Captain..
You Hot?We'll I'll Turn Ya Iceman Like George Gervin..
Lil M.o.h Kid You Hurtin,Likes Men So He Lets Roy Merkem..
Confused If He's In Tha Closet Or Not So He ? His Location..
Hides Tha Stats,Cus Dude Has More L's On His Rekord Than A Radio Station..
Overdozed On Coke,Is What Makes Him Doper Than You..
Ya Onli Chances Of Beatin Me Iss Havin All Mih Votes Removed..
...............Try A Dq And Ya Still Wont Be Victorious..
Kid Askin Fa A Battle But Won't Stand A Chance Like Mictorious..
^^^^^^^^^^^^^ok, nice punches,good flow,and personals (dissing his aim name) Punches were creative, and good wordplay too


overall=This is kinda a close battle, both threw some good punches and personals, nice flow from both heads. I felt Roy had an good verse punches was good. Felt you went kinda baisc here fam, bit creative,less punch effect fam. Kor you had an good verse, nice punches,good flow, wordplay was good and the punches was decent, KOR YOU WON THIS BY AN LAND SLIDE,PERIOD.

roy i just felt Kor came harder with the punches

no hate fam.

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