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06-27-05, 10:16 AM
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Odi et Amo
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{Propain} (3-0) vs. Immense (3-0)
IP: 7419 CC76
Battles up Monday - Check In by Wednesday - Drop by Friday - Votes by Sunday
No line limit and the battler with most votes by Sunday night is the winner. If this is a topical battle, write a topical and not a poetic drop and the same is vice a versa. Extensions must be asked for by Thursday night by pming any of the mods (Drakel or Drama Queen). No extensions will be given if asked on Friday night. Extensions are only given till Sunday night at the most. If you dont ask for an extension, and drop whenever you feel like it you will be disqualified. Do not abuse extentions, they are not to be used if you're just too lazy to drop within the confines of the circumstances. Leave reasonable explanation for your absence. If the League notices you are a slacker due to this nature you will be banned for being out-right slothfully callous. Don't ho-show because you will be banned if you do it twice. We can understand you cannot drop due to certain circumstances but if this happens a second time, you're banned from the league for 2 weeks. If you signed up for both leagues and you no-show in one league twice, you will be banned in both leagues! Try to limit the freeposts, we will have a chat/beef thread for that. Also give fully explained votes, if not your votes won't count! New rule: first to get 3 votes wins by KO MiddleWeight Title Battle  Your Topic: Call of The Haunted
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06-27-05, 05:52 PM
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Middle Weight
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IP: D92C 0475
Aight, Checkity check...
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..Sonned.. Snow, Prezidict, Dizzee Rascal
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06-28-05, 12:50 PM
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IP: 7236 47FA
check..............................
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Living Legendz I Promise Alot...But I Deliver Alot More... ...Topicals...  SPEKTIKUL GFX
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06-30-05, 08:21 PM
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Middle Weight
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IP: D92C 0475
~Call Of The Haunted~ Calls from your mental demons can Be Heard Its all very easy how you can Be Lured To do things you wouldnt do without an Addiction The needle penetrates the skin and you feel the Enfliction Load up another and inject into my Blood Stream Evil runs through my veins and the poison Floods Me The need for the injections is like the pain of when Slugs Pound And this aint a whirlpool but Im still getting 'Drug Down' The evil is throughout your body and you cant stand the Taste Man Its like your brain is trash and your lifes the Wasteland Your will power to stop is too small cuz you Lack Heart And you aint stratching CDs but still left with Track Marks The need for your Obsession builds up Agreession Then when its all over you feel a state of Deprestion Its a continuous path to hell and will you Sober, No Cuz itsjust like the number trace, you stay 'OverDose' ~Life crumbles to dust and blows away
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07-01-05, 09:41 AM
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IP: 7FA8 F1D1
Call Of The Haunted
As night falls...souls emerge from the ghosts of RV's past... With intent to be our downfall...and make this battle the last... As i enter the forums...the sound of the dead can chillingly be heard... Battles increasingly getting slept on...members visions are blurred... Strange goings on occur...as votes are been explained their mindz deter... Not voting for the best piece of writing...just the emcee they personally prefer... Established members sucking dick...strictly for their links to get a click... Its like..."Ye...You easy beat him...Now go return the favour quick..." I just sit back...watching as this site i like crumbles and slowy dies... In my eyes we got a problem...as this open mic clearly defies... Topical verses arent getting rated because the piece of writing is witty... Its because you write in small letters...and make your font look pretty... But fuck these false writers...i just rub them out like they were chalk.. This aint even me battleing propain...this is completely real talk... We gettin called by the dead...burried with pointless made threads... RV's riding in a hurst...we just a stone throw away from deaths bed... Dont wanna see the other side...so from this pledge that i apply... Everybody need to play their part...and dont let this site die...
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Living Legendz I Promise Alot...But I Deliver Alot More... ...Topicals... SPEKTIKUL GFX
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07-02-05, 01:31 AM
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Still Spectacular, Yes!
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IP: F90B D163
V/ Propain Both dropped nice pro dropped a more specific topical and a better stated..better vocab topical... Nice Try both Church
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07-02-05, 02:46 PM
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Banned: For Being So Fly.....lol....my new account is Triple Sixes....
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IP: 0D11 88C9
now this was a good drop here very good vocab but not good structure from propain u need to work on that structure aight didnt like have a good flow but still good aight and immense ur was very good nothin really bad from it except u can improve a little on everythin to make perfect aight but good man v/ goes to immense just a better drop but keep it up aight
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07-02-05, 03:48 PM
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Odi et Amo
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IP: C534 D815
{Propain}: nice concept, vocab was on point, flow was aight. Imagery was good just like the emotion which was raw, had a very straight forward approach, picturing situation vivid and clearly. I was feeling the third one the most, the lines just were so smooth there.
Immense: original approach of the topic and I love how you worked it out, you are speaking mad truth there. It's not your typical topical piece but I absolutely loved reading it, it read so smoothly because everyone on here can relate to this in some way. Vocab was nice, flow was good, can't really comment on imagery or emotion. Vote goes to Immense because I just felt his a bit more...
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07-03-05, 02:12 PM
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IP: 074B 22E7
imagery- propain (ex. The needle penetrates the skin and you feel the Enfliction)
emotion- immense (you can tell that he was annoyed at the dickryders and battles being slept on) metaphors- immense (ex. ...i just rub them out like they were chalk... ) vocab- propain flow- immense (not much to say, but his thoughts blended in well) concept- propain (a deep concept, i just preferred his concept over immense's no offense, though) originality- immense (had an interesting twist to how he stated his thoughts) overall enjoyment- propain damn, this sucks, my votes came out even. I enjoyed propain's most and he won the more important categories, so my vote goes to propain
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07-03-05, 02:37 PM
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Don't Even Think About It
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IP: 1CA5 73AB
Nice battle indeed...
Propain-Real good verse from you. Imagery was fantastic, vocab was unbelievable, and emotion just added to perfection. This was great man, real talk. I was feeling your verse, and how it portrayed the story and stayed on the topic. Truly good work here my friend. Immense-Decent drop, but you lacked emotion. I wasnt feeling it. I dont know, it just wasnt reaching out to me man, it was boring. Vocab was good, imagery was decent, but emotion lacked. You didnt do as well of a job on this topic as Propain did, so that is why he gets my vote. V/ {Propain}
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07-03-05, 02:44 PM
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Middle Weight
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IP: D92C 0475
Aight thanks for the votes people..thats 3-2 my way. Uppin for more votes.
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07-03-05, 03:04 PM
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IP: 178B 4CFA
nah...you win homie....first to 3 votes wins...nice battle though...
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Living Legendz I Promise Alot...But I Deliver Alot More... ...Topicals... SPEKTIKUL GFX
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07-03-05, 03:10 PM
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Odi et Amo
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IP: 1346 B633
Nice battle by both of you
{Propain} wins and is the current MiddleWeight Champ
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