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04-10-03, 01:27 AM
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I truly hope so
IP: E114 9EF7
How can you?
Tell me it's real the emotions you feel & then do me this way? Why would you? Say that you care that you'll always be there & then pull this on me? How could you? Just do me like that & then never look back Am I worthless? Can you tell me what you see In this shattered human being I'm helpless! Is it easy? Are you watching how Careless words fly out Do you care? Because some where it's gotta hurt you like it's killing me I just hope so to prove you have a soul and those words held weight that you told me I truly hope so... This was raw emotion, sorry it was bad but I wanted to post it |
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04-10-03, 10:20 AM
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IP: E5BF 4A60
baby i truly understand this poem it that it was true emotion as always this was great keep flowing
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04-13-03, 03:57 PM
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IP: BFE5 28C7
Aye, seemed true and straight from the heart...raw if you would...simple, yet effective in depicting a certain amount of emotions...
no critique... ...bananos (formerly resp...)... |
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04-13-03, 11:32 PM
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Atra Ludio or Hip-Hop?
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IP: ABE5 5A5C
Indeed. This was straight up and out and pouring from the heart.
How could you? Just do me like that & then never look back Am I worthless? Can you tell me what you see In this shattered human being I'm helpless! ^Hardest hitting lines.^ ~Shalom~ |
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