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02-14-05, 05:44 PM | #1 | |||||
Middle Weight
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Life's a ho...
IP: F964 623A
Laying in the dirt, depression runs through me like a viral disease//
Beef left unslaughtered, I wonder when this cycle will cease// Nothing's left in my life, writing verses is completely vital to me// There is no best in this, everywhere I go there is titles I see// In the end, the bottom is exactly where my rivals will be// Like Kings knocked off their throne and living right on the street// I keep myself high, forever the crown rests on my head// I make my own decisions, so for now, it's suggestions I dread// Let me stress to your head, I'm my own man and I have no friends// Too many motherfuckers around me and I tend to get tense// My mother said it herself, a person like me don't deserve to be loved// From my father, everything between us was certainly mugged// So, I'm left in this position, only got the art of Hip Hop workin' me up// Last edited by M.C. Streak : 02-14-05 at 06:01 PM. |
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02-14-05, 05:58 PM | #2 | ||||||
New to RV
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IP: B525 44D9
yo man, this was sum crazy dope shit right here. 10/10, ya ryme scheme was really fuckin dope.
i dont got a open mic 2 tell u 2 leave feedback on, so, could u vote on my battle maybe? http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=177094 thanx man |
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02-14-05, 06:02 PM | #3 | |||||
Middle Weight
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IP: F964 623A
now u can say it's a 1o my flow was off on one part. i fixed it up but thanx ND I WILL RATE URES
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02-14-05, 06:52 PM | #4 | |||||||
a.k.a prozak
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IP: B845 C898
yo that was good but no 10 ha...that makes me laugh but u actually did good i myself would give it a 7.5/10 it was all good except for the thing u said dont forget to check my new ones out i released i after another in a row....."Turn The Pages"..."40 Ounce Remix"..and "Never Forgotton" and leave some feedback yo
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02-14-05, 06:58 PM | #5 | ||||
E-Style, Bitch.
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IP: ECB3 36A0
it was straight.....
No real punches or creativity, but it flowed real well, 6/10, work on ya wordplay an you'll be good ta go Peace
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02-14-05, 08:19 PM | #6 | |||||
Middle Weight
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IP: F964 623A
so just becuz i said that i lose some points. i appreciate but how y'all rate is weird
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