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08-04-04, 03:01 AM | #1 | |||||||
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Lets Get Poppin-freestyle
IP: 88C4 C811
yo peeps who think that i drink to damn much, get choked in the throat and locked in my trunk,
I maybe what you call a case of dellisiuon, but thats just i come out of my house hollerin an hootin, I'm yellin out for anybody that dares, to snipe me out but guess what, fuck I dont care, I'm makin people stare and stoppin and havin they jaws droppin, I'll step to a cripple and say lets get it poppin, roll him down the street makin sure he's deceased, beat him down with the arm he lost in vietnam, now some might think i push my lyrics to the edge, but all you have to do is staple the headphones to your head, like the walkin dead except when i start to eat you, I'll be aware rip off your head and have you stare while i defeat you, my type of people are those who beat ho's, cus they lost to em' at a game of dominoes, yeah maybe i need to seek proffessional help, theres sumtin wrong wit the state of my mental health, now before i leave heres sumtin to remember me by, mix aleve, vikeden, and ex your bound to get high. -------------------------------------------------------------------------- just sum shit i came up wit tell me what you think
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08-04-04, 03:11 AM | #2 | ||||
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IP: 88E6 6CAA
not bad but instead of running multi's like a run on sentence try rewording them better so the don't go so long...that will help your flow n structure....that last line would prolly kill ya..lol..check these out...don't vote if ya don't understand..leave feedback if ya'd like..i suggest the topical..its a good read..
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=139167 topical:200 posts http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137724 me vs 650 http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=138106 me vs sten.cell http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=138359 me vs gran..chi |
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08-04-04, 04:23 AM | #3 | ||||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 5510 817C
......wack...... nuff said
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