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insomniac's opinion on life...
IP: 4577 CD9A
yes indeed...4:30 in da morning keystyle...
I live life to the fullest and I hate every single hour-I-spend// cowardz-pretend to be ya friend only to let you down-in-the-end// all the good I've done in my life has been overpowered-by-sin// now-I-begin to realize that when I get jumped the first one'z to stomp me out-are-my-friendz... I'm not afraid of death...cause to me there'z nothing as scary-as-life// my mind'z been buried with strife and I can't trust noone so I alwayz carry a knife// for all my transgressions only my depression's-been-blessed// I'll be holdin' a weapon-in-death my entire life is just a cycle of regression-and-stress... I live in the darkness that's why I alwayz sleep-in-the-day// evil creeps-where-I-lay I got no love "your crazy" is all that people-will-say// I hope someone will read this and feel touched-through-the-comp// I wanna get married and have kidz but the only girl that's ever loved me'z my mom// I've been through drama...I've been through trialz of denial of course// I've also been in trialz-in-court cause my father didn't wanna pay my child support// all the people that hate me will appreciate-when-I'm-dead// sittin' alone in my bed only thoughts of suicide do I contemplate-in-my-head... |
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IP: 3380 B09B
the flow n the lyricism in this peice was pretty impressive yo.nicely worded n the internal/multi syl rhymin was on point also.. seems like it would flow dope 2 a beat vocally.. nice lil post overall kid.
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IJL.i thought id acknowledge it/now compotitions "losin faith" like Christopher Wallace did// Step n ur dyin,getN no credit 4tryin/Only time u was in a bitch was ya class trip 2 ellis island/ Please believe? i speak da truth/i see U like retarded kids in empty rooms playin peek-A-boo // in a battle?id disembowel any withN a circumfrance,kid 45th is da toughest/so like an armless janitor ud"kick da bucket"// |
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IP: 4577 CD9A
^^^thank for da feedback man...I see that you stayed in Flatbush... I lived there for a minute too...but then I moved to Utica...
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^WE's Leader^...Dope Huh?
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IP: A5C6 0CD7
yea i liked this piece...multi's were good..which is always my favorite lol..worded nicely..vocab was pretty good....jus good verse overall
Favorite lines live life to the fullest and I hate every single hour-I-spend// cowardz-pretend to be ya friend only to let you down-in-the-end// all the good I've done in my life has been overpowered-by-sin// now-I-begin to realize that when I get jumped the first one'z to stomp me out-are-my-friendz... I'm not afraid of death...cause to me there'z nothing as scary-as-life// my mind'z been buried with strife and I can't trust noone so I alwayz carry a knife// dope ...8/10 ![]() |
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IP: C1DA C961
^^^thanks friend...lol...still uppin'
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IP: E194 7957
good rhyme, multis,piece was hot all in all,keep droppin.~!~
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IP: 399E F0FD
^^^I will...trust me...I do one of these late night keystylez just about every night...
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