Battle Rules:

10-20 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

make sure votes r well explained

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 04-03-05 at 07:59 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Armada Da 187 has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-31-05 07:00 PM.

I show you the effects of 10 slugs lodged in ya chest
My rhymes leave ya flat on ya back, in a matta of a sec/

Welcome to Rv bro, Armada given you a grand welcome
point how much ya lyrcis suck bad, n ways u can perfect em/
Im Gonna hit you hard wit punches, thas how ya live n learn
Like how ya dad smacks you around, now its Armadas Turn/
Yooza a lil youngstah to the game, 1 post made today,hark
Also gettin ya first battle n first loss, pretty bad way to start/
these lyrics leave ya body mangled, breakfast for the crows
Ya may have heart, maybe talent, but ur weakness ill expose/
"who want it" ya said, I replied I do, ya hurried n got offline
say ya dont wanna be ko'ed, save me 10 mintues of my time/
cuz thas all the longer it'll take me to clearly stomp ya BRO
Put slugs in ya head, cops in ya house, momma cryin, fo sho/
You put the "Bro" in "Broken" cuz thas all you are, ya sucka!!
also put the GAY in this line, cuz ya a GAY ass mother fucker!/
Gonna make ya first day here, a nightmare that'll haunt ya
couldnt be declared a killer even wit the Make or Break Mafia/
Thas pretty sad, cuz in the MOB we all killers by the HEART
Word of Advice, no embarasment,stay offline n NEVA START/
Unless you a lil bolder, N decide to take bites at Armada foo
lesson to learn: doin that,ull bite off more then ya can chew/
leave ya fams decimated,bones crushed to dust,blood ina cup
accept this battle? ya better not, cuz Armada fuckin you up/ shoot to kill, dont believe? you will!, what u think im bluffin? sit back n visualize that they dont call me the 187 for nuttin/
Yooza Punk Bitch n Denial,A Desperate man gone suicidal
I made remedes for that shit, hollowtips, be worth your while/

Bro has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-01-05 12:10 AM.

yo...u have no lyrical game, i dont feel ya "punches" at all.. i'll quickly dispose this head ache like i was tylonal..

this ho prolly bites everybodies lines...
but this aint reading, u wont get better with time..

spends all his time rappin when he knows he's shitty as fuck... when this bitch throws uh "punch"~line no one even ducks..

he has no skill wat so ever... this niga disgraces the game..to be how shitty u are u gota be trained..

his real name should be door mat.. cuz every one walks on this guy..he couldnt "elevate" his "saliva" if he "spit" from the sky..

this cat should choose better on who he battles next time.. i "heard" better lyrics while watchin uh mime..

i'll keep the bars comin.. since we all know u have none..
his petty "punches" couldnt hurt me even if they were shot through uh gun..

i'll keep ma self focused while rip this herb ta size..
the only career u have involves"do want any fries?

y does he try rappin?he know he has no "hands"
i felt better "flow" walkin by uh fan...

word upppppppppiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnnn this battle

uppppppppppiiiiiinnnnnnnnnn this battle, come on fams drop votes

honest explained votes will be returned

upppppppppppppiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnnnnn nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

Voted For: Armada Da 187

yo...u have no lyrical game, i dont feel ya "punches" at all.. i'll quickly dispose this head ache like i was tylonal..
Nah
this ho prolly bites everybodies lines...
but this aint reading, u wont get better with time..
SO-SO
spends all his time rappin when he knows he's shitty as fuck... when this bitch throws uh "punch"~line no one even ducks..
NO

he has no skill wat so ever... this niga disgraces the game..to be how shitty u are u gota be trained..
WTF????
his real name should be door mat.. cuz every one walks on this guy..he couldnt "elevate" his "saliva" if he "spit" from the sky..
SHIT
=6/10 SORI DAWG BUT HALF DIS SHIT DIDNT RYHME

VS

I show you the effects of 10 slugs lodged in ya chest
My rhymes leave ya flat on ya back, in a matta of a sec/
GOOD
Welcome to Rv bro, Armada given you a grand welcome
point how much ya lyrcis suck bad, n ways u can perfect em/
SO-SO
Im Gonna hit you hard wit punches, thas how ya live n learn
Like how ya dad smacks you around, now its Armadas Turn/
AIGHT
Yooza a lil youngstah to the game, 1 post made today,hark
Also gettin ya first battle n first loss, pretty bad way to start/
DUNNO ALRITE
these lyrics leave ya body mangled, breakfast for the crows
Ya may have heart, maybe talent, but ur weakness ill expose/
NAH
"who want it" ya said, I replied I do, ya hurried n got offline
say ya dont wanna be ko'ed, save me 10 mintues of my time/
GDGD
cuz thas all the longer it'll take me to clearly stomp ya BRO
Put slugs in ya head, cops in ya house, momma cryin, fo sho/
LOL
You put the "Bro" in "Broken" cuz thas all you are, ya sucka!!
also put the GAY in this line, cuz ya a GAY ass mother fucker!/
OK
Gonna make ya first day here, a nightmare that'll haunt ya
couldnt be declared a killer even wit the Make or Break Mafia/
GDGDGD
Thas pretty sad, cuz in the MOB we all killers by the HEART
Word of Advice, no embarasment,stay offline n NEVA START/
LOL TITE
Unless you a lil bolder, N decide to take bites at Armada foo
lesson to learn: doin that,ull bite off more then ya can chew/
NAH
leave ya fams decimated,bones crushed to dust,blood ina cup
accept this battle? ya better not, cuz Armada fuckin you up/
SO-SO
shoot to kill, dont believe? you will!, what u think im bluffin? sit back n visualize that they dont call me the 187 for nuttin/
KK
Yooza Punk Bitch n Denial,A Desperate man gone suicidal
I made remedes for that shit, hollowtips, be worth your while/
NICE FINSHER!!!!!
=8/10 ALOT BETA VERSE STARTED OK BUT GOT ALOT BETA NEAR DA END, I LIKE IT!!!!

MY VOTE GOES TO ARMADA DUE TO HAVIN A LOT BETA PUNCHES N BETA RYHMES!!!! YO BRO TRY N MAKE UR SHIT RYHME DEN IT WILL B GOOD!!!!

RTF PLZ 2 DA BATTLE IN MI SIG!!!!
FANX


this cat should choose better on who he battles next time.. i "heard" better lyrics while watchin uh mime..

i'll keep the bars comin.. since we all know u have none..
his petty "punches" couldnt hurt me even if they were shot through uh gun..

i'll keep ma self focused while rip this herb ta size..
the only career u have involves"do want any fries?

y does he try rappin?he know he has no "hands"
i felt better "flow" walkin by uh fan...

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

SORI I MISSED DIS BIT:
this cat should choose better on who he battles next time.. i "heard" better lyrics while watchin uh mime..

i'll keep the bars comin.. since we all know u have none..
his petty "punches" couldnt hurt me even if they were shot through uh gun..

i'll keep ma self focused while rip this herb ta size..
the only career u have involves"do want any fries?

y does he try rappin?he know he has no "hands"
i felt better "flow" walkin by uh fan...

SORI ABOUT DAT BRO BUT IT SAME AS DA REST!!!!

Voted For: Bro

v/ bro

Armada Da 187, half ya lines didnt even make sense man..punches were wack, especiallyu that GAY, line, that made no sense and was wack.. bro, you had good punches and personals, good use of metaphors like the gun lines, and the saliva from the sky, and they hit harder than armada's..

v/ bro

hit up the link in my sig since i took time to read your battle..

__________________

Voted For: Bro

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=186164

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=185292

rtf please
bro took this. structure was kinda shitty, but i was feelin this drop big time. punches hit real hard, and were worded good. i didnt really see any hard personals, but i was feelin bro verse more. one sided battle to me. I like tha creativite in this one. and you also had more consistency. am187 your verse was too long
it hurt my damn eyes readen it you need a lot of help on ya verse

Voted For: Armada Da 187

Bro.........Breakdown 4 ya verse...........

aight drop..........first of all ya structure is wack, each line shud be separate not put a couple of ... and then text the next line otherwise it makes it harder to see the rhyme...other than that it was aight and ya flow was gud when i figured out where ya lines were....ya opener was pretty weak, the first line was pretty much filler and the 2nd line was aight....closer was weaker, it was short and filler with no real punch, the fan shit didn't work at all. in between u had punches but i gotta say that nuthin really stood out and made me laugh.....ya vocab was pretty much all basic and creativity wise was zero, i saw nuthin i aint seen before. need to throw in some mad metas and multies to make ya spit more enjoyable.........overall 5/10


Armada Da 187........Breakdown 4 ya verse............

aight a nice drop, another long ass one....when are you gonna jsut do a standard 12 line spit, they are far better.....ya structure was aight up until the end when you stretched shit which made ya flow a little choppy.....ya opener was weak like Bro, not really a punch just shit talkin mainly....the same in the next bar.........the closer wasn't all that good but at least you had a little multi in there......punches were ok, nuthin that really set it off and personal wise u need more improvement.....like Bro u need to get more creative and throw in more metas and multies and shit, beef up ya punches n personals to.....overall 6.5/10

V/ - Armada Da 187

RTF on one of my battles!!! If you voted on one already then hit the other.....thnx.....~1~

__________________

Voted For: Armada Da 187

both were good verses packed with punches, but armada gets this by using personals, his shit hit harder and was aimed at the opponet, bro not bad but ya punches missed due to no personals, no hate.

__________________

Daubs MySpace