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Denied Truth 0 0%
Twizted. 5 100.00%
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Old 06-02-05, 08:38 PM   #1
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Twizted. vs Denied Truth

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Old 06-02-05, 10:37 PM   #2
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Old 06-04-05, 11:01 PM   #3
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he set it up and didn't even show...

Well iight Den..
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-What God Has For Me..Is Meant For Me.

II COR. 12:9
And He Said To Me, "My Grace Is Sufficient For You, For My Strength Is Made Perfect In Weakness." Therefore, I Will Rather Most Gladly Boast In My Infirmities, So That The Power Of God May Rest Upon Me.
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Old 06-04-05, 11:02 PM   #4
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Nevermind he dont have to check in untill tomorrow..my fault..
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-What God Has For Me..Is Meant For Me.

II COR. 12:9
And He Said To Me, "My Grace Is Sufficient For You, For My Strength Is Made Perfect In Weakness." Therefore, I Will Rather Most Gladly Boast In My Infirmities, So That The Power Of God May Rest Upon Me.
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Old 06-05-05, 06:28 PM   #5
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Old 06-05-05, 06:32 PM   #6
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Old 06-05-05, 10:23 PM   #7
Denied Truth
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Nigga you not wreckin-on-lines, that's deception-on-minds
Get A Mirror Image Of Ya Rhymes, That's "reflection-on- crimes"
Cuz Wen U Drop Alot Its Like "Mass Murder" Erybody Get Hurt..
Principles On Why U Choose TO Bruise Eyes N Earz Remain Covert..
Disperse Ya Rhymes Simply Like 12 Yr Oles At Liquor Stores..Dey UnderAge Drops
In Other Words Dey Are Lyrically Underdeveloped...No One Wit Skillz Wanna Cop
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-What God Has For Me..Is Meant For Me.

II COR. 12:9
And He Said To Me, "My Grace Is Sufficient For You, For My Strength Is Made Perfect In Weakness." Therefore, I Will Rather Most Gladly Boast In My Infirmities, So That The Power Of God May Rest Upon Me.
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Old 06-05-05, 10:26 PM   #8
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dropped wack cuz i fink he gwan no show...
makes it easier on me...
Chea..i know its weak...
Church
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-What God Has For Me..Is Meant For Me.

II COR. 12:9
And He Said To Me, "My Grace Is Sufficient For You, For My Strength Is Made Perfect In Weakness." Therefore, I Will Rather Most Gladly Boast In My Infirmities, So That The Power Of God May Rest Upon Me.
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Old 06-06-05, 12:45 PM   #9
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[center]Ayo Denied Truth

You Winning Dis Battle Is Like Canadians Winning Ova U.S...
Its Impossible Cuz Only People Who "Deny The Truth" Wear a Vest!...
Your a Newbie-People Don't Put There Time Into You Hoes...
But If You Don't Stop Lieing-I Think Somethings Gonna Grow To Ya NOSE!!!(Sig)
You Capable Of Nothin So Deztructive-Just Water Gun Gats...
Theres Only One Thing Dats Shine-ing On You-And Dats Whats Ya avy HAD!!!..(avy)
I'll Break You Down-Rip Ya Arm Outta Ya Socket-Just To See Ya Cry...
Den Set Fire To Ya House-Den "Deny The Truth" After You Can Ask Me WHY!...
I Hope You Learned Ya Lesson-Cuz Theres No More We Can Re-hurse...
I Just Gave You Gore To And Ko And I Freestyled My VERSE!!!...


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Old 06-08-05, 05:06 PM   #10
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Old 06-08-05, 05:09 PM   #11
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This was feedback posted for Denied Truth

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Chekin Pollz......................................Nice Verse MA!
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Old 06-08-05, 06:13 PM   #12
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Voted For: Twizted.

v/ Twizted

BreakDown...

Punches: Twizted (Denied Had None)
Personals: Twizted (Got On Her Sig & Avy)
Creativity: Denied (Liked Her Use Of Words)
Multiples: Neither (Denied Had Some Not Alot Tho)
Structure: Neither (Both Was Horrible & Off)
Wordplay: Denied (Throughout Her Whole Verse)
Vocab: Neither (Not Really Good On Both Sides)
Nameplay: Twizted (Used ALOT)

Open Lines: Twizted
Middle Lines: Twizted
Endin Lines: Twizted (Best Line Was Ya Closer)

WHY? - Twizted Basically Dissed Her, Shorite Didnt Diss Him...Was Just Sorta Flowin Usin Wordplay, Not Ne Thing Directly At Him...

RTF!!!

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Old 06-09-05, 11:16 AM   #13
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Old 06-09-05, 11:34 AM   #14
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Voted For: Denied Truth

Yo this was an ok battle. i think both of you did well. but i think denied truth had the best verse. i thought his structure was easier to read and therefore made for a better flow. He had better punchlines and stayed consistent with his verse in terms of quality of content. He focused on quality over quantity meanin he concentrated on getting his verse tight rather than having a longer verse.
My favourite line in this battle was:

"Nigga you not wreckin-on-lines, that's deception-on-minds
Get A Mirror Image Of Ya Rhymes, That's "reflection-on- crimes""

because i thought the rhyme structure was nice and the vocab was at a higher level.

"Disperse Ya Rhymes Simply Like 12 Yr Oles At Liquor Stores..Dey UnderAge Drops
In Other Words Dey Are Lyrically Underdeveloped...No One Wit Skillz Wanna Cop"

I thought that closer was nice for real, with one final insult to leave him with.

I generally wasn't feelin Twisted verse as muc. Ain't nothin personal. Don't get me wrong i thought his verse was ok. i just prefered Denied Truth's verse.

Peace

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Old 06-09-05, 11:37 AM   #15
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Yo can you RTF and drop an explained vote on my battle:

§ick§eed vs Souljah
 
 


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