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01-07-04, 02:06 PM | #1 | |||||||
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feedback please
IP: 1A3F 0057
Ive got an open mind 24/7//
You shouldnt battle anymore just give up// Like your momma said its better safe than sorry// I took her advice, I wore a condom when I fucked her// I felt for her, she dont need another son like you// When you came out the world was in shock// The worlds ugliest baby, so tha doc slapped ya mom// Go crawl back under ya stone before ya get stepped on// Im gonna smoke you like I would canibus// Just Get out of here, heres some coin go catch the bus// people are sayin this sucked cos most of it didnt rhyme, does ya verse really have to rhyme? |
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01-07-04, 02:55 PM | #2 | ||||||
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IP: EE88 2083
To be honest....Yeah.
That verse was horrible, not hating, just stating the facts. Go read some tutorials or summat. Good Day
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01-07-04, 06:30 PM | #3 | ||||||
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IP: 17A5 81EF
Yo, none of ya bars rhymed. Straight up playa, you need to go to the sub-forum and look at the tips.
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01-07-04, 08:24 PM | #4 | |||||||
Aint Nobody Iller Than Me
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IP: 7BBC 5E47
Yo, this should be in Open Mic
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01-08-04, 01:28 AM | #5 | |||||||
Flyweight
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IP: 01C0 AB7F
LOL.
practice makes perfect. nobody's perfect so why practice? |
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