bitch dey bout ta commercial my raps with 'GOT FLOW'
i fuck up emcees like am fuckin a HOT HO
i got dough an i'm just FOURTEEN
so in bout 5 years ima sure see MORE 'CREAM'
yall can LEAN my way or choose the HIGHWAY
i make yall niguhz 'black out' so whut 'more can I SAY'
i MEAN, how much more can I SPRAY
Blat, Blat, hold up theres a DELAY, i gotta RELOAD
so you got 5 second ta hit the ROAD
if you come BACK i'll ATTACK with a RAP that'll feel like your STRAPPED too a fuckin BOMB
i know ive got u 'sonned' but do u really gotsta call me MOM? (ha ha)
if u want pussy, i suggest a breath mint, haircut an a 'JOB'
i'm here for war n droppin lyrical missiles so you can call me BOB!!!!!!

BOB = Bombs over baghdad, ya feel me?

just a qyick free for yall cuz ahm back nah n wanted ta flaunt my skills if i have any lol, holla wit sum feed homies

Nah not good man. Punches were weak, and overall too simple. Some wordplay, but not that great. Also, cream and mom punches? All played man, so work on better wordplay and punches. 4/10

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^^^hahahahahahaha agreed on nigga....tha fuck is u sayin "niguhz" fa tunt??...lame ass try at tryna create new net ebonix

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me vs. L~S...i think he cheated tho so check wut i posted b4 u read tha posts... StAcKiN Gs 'n LiGhTiN dat pUrPlE

open mic

nothin special really...no hate...but most of its been played...4real...elevate my nigga...(*somethin i gotta do 2*)....lamo...~1~

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why yall gotsta hate am doin my thang am 14 n rippin hot rhymes an it wuz just a freestyle i typed da first thang dat came ta mah head but da feedbaq iz appreciated NIGUHZ!

try using multis in ya rhymes no hate but ya not rippin hot rhymes ifts a freestyle its still not good post somethin ya wrote so we can see ya talent peace

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i dont usually write stuff
juss rhyme off da dome but u have 26 losses LOL

^^^its no hate comin from me...i just though it was played out...im 15...just a young nigga rippin flows 2...but still return tha fava...link in sig...~1~

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