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04-28-04, 09:37 PM | #1 | |||||||
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Does that mean im in love?.....
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When i think about you constantly in complete lust when your not around
And my heart pounds for your gentle touch wanting to be lyed down Does that mean im in love?..... Because i get the chills through my body when you kiss my neck And we lock eyes constantly more than i'd expect Does that mean i'm in love?..... Or when your gone for so long and tears role down my face And my legs are so stunned all the way to my waste Does that mean i'm in love?.... When i know i've been hurt before but i let go of my past And you assure me and i believe that this relationship will last Does that mean i'm in love?...... Because im willing to try everything with you that doesn't suit me And anyother man is invisible and could never distract me Does that mean i'm in love?..... I don't know what it's like to be in love from so much hurt i never try But when im told that the love is seen in my eyes tell me Does that mean im in love?..... |
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04-28-04, 10:22 PM | #2 | |||||||
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I definitely wasnt in love with that shit
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05-04-04, 09:30 PM | #3 | |||||||
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Whatever.If any body want to give some other type of feedback go ahead.If it really aint all that just let me know.
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05-04-04, 10:08 PM | #4 | ||||
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Its pretty good. I want really feelin it too much. but wasn't too bad. Dont get dicouraged cause we need poetry heads. And you're a pretty good one. Nice stuff, good emotion, no imagery... Keep droppin
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