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03-01-05, 07:03 PM | #1 | |||||||
Vendetta the K.O. King
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Ill Logikal, Jred Loc, Phenom, & Anasaz - WHILE YOU LEAN BACK
IP: A597 E53E
Original beat by Anasaz... track is HELLA toiiight
Ill Logikal, Phenom, & Anasaz - While you lean back ft. Jred Loc here's my links: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=179645 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=179583 drop ya links and I'll peep em
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Last edited by Phenom-in-all : 03-02-05 at 08:57 PM. |
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03-01-05, 08:30 PM | #2 | |||||
Light Weight
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IP: E137 0BC4
i'mma respond just wanting on the links to the feedback you gave
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03-02-05, 08:14 PM | #3 | |||||||
Vendetta the K.O. King
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IP: 070D 64A6
up up and awaaaay. (Links are posted)
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03-02-05, 09:25 PM | #4 | |||||||
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IP: 1628 4BC6
ahhhhh shiit some hard shit right here, all yalls verses was right on point, hook was coo, imma say that shit at school, why you lean back, fuck the doe, imma take yo hoe ohhhhhh lmao nah, some good shit right here man, like something that should be played on the radio
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03-03-05, 06:53 PM | #5 | |||||
Light Weight
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IP: D46B 21E8
beat it coo...
1st dude- aight mang flow was aight ...kinda fell off in a few parts sound like you ran out of breathe...work on ya breathe control...lyrics were coo....delivery was coo too... 2nd dude- aight flow was on point...good rhyme scheme...lyrics were ok...delivery was pretty good tho... 3rd dude- flow was coo on the beat...lyrics were str8 on here...delivery was coo...but i think you could have been a lil better on this not sure what it is...maybe its just ya voice... 4th dude- aight flow was coo on this beat...either you have a little lisp.....or you need to swallow ya spit...lyrics were pretty good...got some good multis...delivery is good.... overall this was a good track fellas. 1 return the feedback http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=179666
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03-03-05, 10:03 PM | #6 | ||||
O.wning Y.ou D.aily
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IP: 2FD5 47F6
Not sure what order it went in, so I'm just gonna say first guy and second guy and so on....
First guy was pretty tight....I like his flow. Doesn'e sound like he takes a breath through the whole thing....lol. Second guy wasn't bad either.....lol Phenom let us know when he came in. You sound a little different. Your quality sounds better. You got rid of that hollow sound Tight track overall.....good drop.
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