12 lines max
blind spit
1 hour after check in to post
No hate or dr

checking in

yo man you gonna battle?

This guy's got forty posts all in call out but none in competition
First lesson for my opposition will cost forty bucks commission
In this battle mission you missin an lost like kidnapped bind people
Need to just give up before ya get stuck an hung up like pine needles
This guys already feeble at eighteen weak an lyrically disabled
Why the hell you on this sight at night you should be cradled
I'm an unstable predator you're at bottom of the food chain wit placid habits
I can done see these illmatics got you fucked up an MC ate like acid tablets
This guy's had it your skills are foreign static if any an not of this Earth
Squirts been punked since birth an zero worth since days of star search
Your first crew was khmerboyz pathetic even with a ghostwriter imposter
I found a foster home for the wack. Guess what? They relocated ya roster

Ya wanna be hard but ya like Lauren hill cuz ya killin me softly
Ask DJ Paul how I hypnotize minds
Ya must me playin ketch up cuz ya runnin be heinz
Its "55" the bomb fuck the logo shit
Ya girl jumps on mah dick like a pogo stick
You no what?...times up it’s the dead line
Ill blast your ass and you wont even make the head line
You cant handle my metafives or duck my punch lines
Ill eat this cat up like big pun at lunch time
You know if you start to mess with me there is gonna be trouble
My lyrics are like AIDS cuz they spread for sure
Don’t try 2 mess wit me cuz there wont be any cure

Shit Telekenetic wins this, morew advanced verse. Tele had nice punches and a good rhymescheme. Also some nice metas in there too. Skandalz came kinda newvish as expected. Not awful for a beginner, but much room for improvement.
Please drop an honest vote here guys. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110074

skandalz if i'm not mistaken u disses u'rself in the first line, otherwise not a bad spitt...telekinetic ya structure was a lil messed ya had sum disses but i didn't think much hit except for the cradle line...personally i felt skandalz more but after his first line...lol...it's a hard decision but i'm a go with skandalz...tele ya need sum seperation dawg..vote-skandalz

First of all skandalz should be banned for bitting. Ive seen almost everyone of his punches on this sight before. Cant you be creative?

that is my own orignal shit...i had a different name but i forgot what it was so i made this one...man your stupid...jus scared your gonna lose dis battle...PUNK

some more people wanna vote on this so it isnt stuck as a tie

Please..... I actually came up with my verse on the spot
I can give you the link........http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...ghlight=ketchup

That shit wasent even meant for me. I voted in that battle you used it in. lmfao
Now whos stupid?

That was pathetic...
Telekinetic took this easily
He had harder punches
better structure..not flow..
But an overall better verse..
Scandal..up ya shit homie
Be creative..think of shit
no one's heard of...

so

v/Tele

hit this up with an honest vote...thanks

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...t=110028&page=2

This guy's got forty posts all in call out but none in competition
First lesson for my opposition will cost forty bucks commission
In this battle mission you missin an lost like kidnapped bind people
Need to just give up before ya get stuck an hung up like pine needles
This guys already feeble at eighteen weak an lyrically disabled
Why the hell you on this sight at night you should be cradled
I'm an unstable predator you're at bottom of the food chain wit placid habits
I can done see these illmatics got you fucked up an MC ate like acid tablets
This guy's had it your skills are foreign static if any an not of this Earth
Squirts been punked since birth an zero worth since days of star search
Your first crew was khmerboyz pathetic even with a ghostwriter imposter
I found a foster home for the wack. Guess what? They relocated ya roster
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sruc wasnt that bad overall 7/10 and nice werdplay ok punches
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Ya wanna be hard but ya like Lauren hill cuz ya killin me softly
Ask DJ Paul how I hypnotize minds
Ya must me playin ketch up cuz ya runnin be heinz
Its "55" the bomb fuck the logo shit
Ya girl jumps on mah dick like a pogo stick
You no what?...times up it’s the dead line
Ill blast your ass and you wont even make the head line
You cant handle my metafives or duck my punch lines
Ill eat this cat up like big pun at lunch time
You know if you start to mess with me there is gonna be trouble
My lyrics are like AIDS cuz they spread for sure
Don’t try 2 mess wit me cuz there wont be any cure

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sruc was off a lil overall needs to elavate 5 1/2/10 k
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vote/telekinetic
hit this up if you will
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109339

uppin.............................................