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Check in by: 03-13-05 at 09:18 PM

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Young Phrophecy has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-10-05 09:23 PM.

Hot Sauce has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-11-05 07:47 AM.

PAIN-IS-SOUGHT when i AIM-THE-SHOTS, If I Put Ya mind in subways You Still Couldnt Keep Ya TRAIN-OF-THOUGHT//I'll go crucial and blast ya with NINES-N-TECHS and DIVIDE-YA-NECK You Coming Shitty Like Major Medicines With A SIDE-EFFECT//u SHORTER-THAN-YA-THOUGHTS Ill Misplace Ya Eyes Back wards So You Cant Look FORWARD-TA-THIS-LOSS//I'LL BLAZE-YA-HEAD put u in ya PLACE-WIT-TECKS I Should turn The Mourgue Into In An Adoption Center Because My Scripts RAISE-THE-DEAD//L's I'll HAND-HIM Your Punches Are Like Sky-Divers Without A Parachute Because You Cant LAND-THEM//i can BARE-YA-SHOOK found some TEARS-IN-THE-ROOK, I dont think u know where u stand even your influences dont know WHERE-TA-LOOK// Let me TRY-THIS as I APPLY-FISTS Ill spit on the Casket YA-LIE-WITH so ill give a big fuck you so just DIE-BITCH//

Finisher:
Your "Garbage raps" dont TEND TO OFFEND ME WHEN HE "Recycles his verses"i dont "mind" cuz hes ENVIROMENTALLY FREINDLY! so im takin the ~GREEN, PEACE~, 2 put an end to Ur MEAN STREAK",another TEEN BEAT "put the shots at this Nerds head" to show how i "CREAM GEEKS"...(AYY)

and its LAME how YOU-GRIP-DICKS,now you'll See "WHOS NOT THE BOSS", i GOT THE LOSS ,till im puttin your ~"BRAIN ON A CRUSIFIX" to get your "THOUGHTS ACROSS"~

openup *SHOPS,ON BLOCKS, ATTRACTING THIS BULLSHIT,grab the "SWITCH" and ~PULL IT~...no FULL CLIPS, cuz ur SHOTS ARE LOST,got ppl ASKIN ~BITCH WHERE ARE THE BULLETS

uppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppin 4 verse

Ya people ask "where the bullets?", They lay in ya chest//
Cuz you attempt to test power of my motion sence gun torrets//
and since when do i recycle my rhymes//
My flow is focused like hocus pocus, voo doo that you do, I'll curse ya hearses//
You couldn't apply fist if I taught you Kung-Fu//
You just mad cuz i flipped the script, and you can't do shit like Young do//
You must be confused, You're the one ther that grips dicks//
Suckin off sick shit, hope you fuckin catch syphyllis

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That's Beast!!!!!!!!!!!!

Voted For: Hot Sauce

hot sauce won this easily punches were tight wordplay was ight multies were crazy rhymes were good flow was really good structre was ight work on it a lil bit 6.5/10

best line--- Let me TRY-THIS as I APPLY-FISTS Ill spit on the Casket YA-LIE-WITH so ill give a big fuck you so just DIE-BITCH

please RTF in my battle link in my sig

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Clcik Hear To Hear My Music

Voted For: Hot Sauce

hot sauce got this.. but duke stop putting those lame explanations and this shit , my-verse-is-garbage.. is just makes u look hella newbish.. but at least u had multi's and some nice punches other dudes verse was pure ass.. both of u need elevation badly.. but hot sauce gets this due to his weak attempts at punches and some nice multi's.. so no hate to either.. u just both need alot of work.. iight pz...

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Voted For: Hot Sauce

Hot Sauce
PAIN-IS-SOUGHT when i AIM-THE-SHOTS, If I Put Ya mind in subways You Still Couldnt Keep Ya TRAIN-OF-THOUGHT//I'll go crucial and blast ya with NINES-N-TECHS and DIVIDE-YA-NECK You Coming Shitty Like Major Medicines With A SIDE-EFFECT//u SHORTER-THAN-YA-THOUGHTS Ill Misplace Ya Eyes Back wards So You Cant Look FORWARD-TA-THIS-LOSS//I'LL BLAZE-YA-HEAD put u in ya PLACE-WIT-TECKS I Should turn The Mourgue Into In An Adoption Center Because My Scripts RAISE-THE-DEAD//L's I'll HAND-HIM Your Punches Are Like Sky-Divers Without A Parachute Because You Cant LAND-THEM//i can BARE-YA-SHOOK found some TEARS-IN-THE-ROOK, I dont think u know where u stand even your influences dont know WHERE-TA-LOOK// Let me TRY-THIS as I APPLY-FISTS Ill spit on the Casket YA-LIE-WITH so ill give a big fuck you so just DIE-BITCH//

Finisher:
Your "Garbage raps" dont TEND TO OFFEND ME WHEN HE "Recycles his verses"i dont "mind" cuz hes ENVIROMENTALLY FREINDLY! so im takin the ~GREEN, PEACE~, 2 put an end to Ur MEAN STREAK",another TEEN BEAT "put the shots at this Nerds head" to show how i "CREAM GEEKS"...(AYY)

and its LAME how YOU-GRIP-DICKS,now you'll See "WHOS NOT THE BOSS", i GOT THE LOSS ,till im puttin your ~"BRAIN ON A CRUSIFIX" to get your "THOUGHTS ACROSS"~

openup *SHOPS,ON BLOCKS, ATTRACTING THIS BULLSHIT,grab the "SWITCH" and ~PULL IT~...no FULL CLIPS, cuz ur SHOTS ARE LOST,got ppl ASKIN ~BITCH WHERE ARE THE BULLETS

Easy 1 hot sauce
great structure
nice rhymes
and terific elevation
9.5/10

Young Prophecy


Ya people ask "where the bullets?", They lay in ya chest//
Cuz you attempt to test power of my motion sence gun torrets//
and since when do i recycle my rhymes//
My flow is focused like hocus pocus, voo doo that you do, I'll curse ya hearses//
You couldn't apply fist if I taught you Kung-Fu//
You just mad cuz i flipped the script, and you can't do shit like Young do//
You must be confused, You're the one ther that grips dicks//
Suckin off sick shit, hope you fuckin catch syphyllis

2 short
he murked u wit more harder punches
elevate more
be more agressive wen spittn
bette structure
7/10

my v/hot sauce

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thanx uppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp pppppppppppppppppppin

yup yup upppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppin again

uppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp pppppppppppppin

Uppin............Ayo, just a comment..........I really didn't have time to finish my verse but whateva get goin wit it.

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That's Beast!!!!!!!!!!!!

Voted For: Hot Sauce

Hot Sauce- Verse was nice...so was your punches....Had some nice sick azz personals also....Structure was decent...easy to read n all...but overall your won this with a better overall verse and punches...8.6/10........

Yun P- your verse was nice a little, but your punches really didnt seem to connect hard enough...your structure was layed out nice...but you went weak on punches thats all...5.9/10.......

V/Hot Sauce
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