as agreed

usual rules
10 lines
u spittin first

ill take the pin out of your ass and throw you away granade-
you aint no rapper he's a fake he's like a masquerade-
so your new to rap battles just like me, but im touched by the lyrical g-
granade has h.i.v, you can't forget the hepititas b-
your getting cooked and grilled and 200 degrees c-
i forgot 2 mention he pays jay-z to be his emcee-
your a fake you should be called a dud-
he says his girlfriend is the flower of the bud-
not knowing she likes a bit on the side, especially with real men-
you'll see this "Grenades been exploded" all over cnn-

Scriptive: while you wait check out hotshh! vs strype and drop a vote ill do the same
for you, its right under your battle in frontlines

hotshh ya aint supposed ta freepost in battlelinks + while am here am a tell grenade dat wen he spitt here i wan him 2 spitt in my battle wid him, dumb fuck

call u scriptive,but u lack skill..scrawling all ova the page...
u gonna need a new identity...try callin up travolta n cage..(face-off)
u couldnt scratch my record...if u woz your avatar...
watchin table dancing on t.v...only time u seen a hot-bar...
hvnt got skills yet...gve the game up..u`ll neva learn..
take sum advice from usher...n just "let it burn"...
dnt be upset were both winners...let me make it clear..
me the battle...n u the butt of everyones laughs n jeers!...
i ripped u scriptive,u about as addictive as a transexual dancer...
only reason u think u sick is...coz everyone avoid u like cancer..

everone avoid you like cancer that was hot this was close but that last line basically sums up this battle but both ya were good, for a newbie battle right script?

this wasa good battle,

Scriptive = flow was ok, but ur vocal was a lil wack, u kept rhyming e sounding words words, u gotta expand ur vocabulary.

grenade = the flow was good, structure was strong, your punches was ill,

my vote goes to grenade

yo vote here

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=135175

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dis was a goo battle i like both of your stlyes but
i gotta give dis one 2
grenade his punch lines where a lil tyghter

vgrenade

please vote on dis battle

amayzin grace vs forgotten flow
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136031

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gernade good ender and good bar with ill leave you scratched like your avator flow was good struture was ok your personals were ok and you had some good disses4/10

scriptive i thought you was gonna merk him you started off with a good opener7/10 but the rest of your verse was --------------------------you killed yourself there your flow was good and struture too your punches went away after the first bar and your disses aint hit hard enough3/10

vote-gernade








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grenade cuz srtucture was blowin shit up and harder

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