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03-01-05, 10:54 AM | #1 | |||||||
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Deep Breath
IP: 2AF4 5C39
yo' tell me how many feel like this
constantly hated by many, but loved by most nobody does it like me im a lyrical ghost with an open mic i never needed no crew to get me throught i knew what i had to do if i wanted to be apart of it to that was ta keep my heart true........ I'm to be myself, i got hooked onto rap when i was twelve younge enought ta believe in a dream, but old enought to tell tha diffenece between heaven an hell an what they mean.............. The streets razed in a fucked up neighbourhood daily i got my ex-girlfriend goin copletly crazy but i dont let that shit faze me........she took my baby girl away from me fuckin bitch made me out to be lazy as fuck but i was tha brains of tha family that seem to have tha luck her mouth never shut,not even for 2sec selfiouse little mut so let's face it,this shit is just tha basic's you strugglin to make it to tha top so basically you dont understand tha true meaning to hip-hop my rap does tha talkin this is my last lap befor i start walkin............ha ha ya im like tooth decay, an lockjaw rolled into one cuz ya mouth is constantly shut, an there fallin out one by one now tha fun time's over , so bitches mover over' who's heart is colder when you a dieng soilder FUCK IT IM OUT PEACE........................CB83
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03-02-05, 12:46 PM | #2 | |||||
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IP: 0F40 8178
yo I honestly thought this was really lifeless (if I may)...i was not feeling it...
I dont know if this is personal or whatnot but I just wasn't feelin it...u said a line in there about being basic...and I think that's what this is man...u need to up ur vocab and wordplay and all that interesting stuff so the reader can actually get insight from this...anyway I just thought I'd say something cuz no one else said anything...and so u can return the favour...and u better... here's the link: heat of the moment- from ya boy feat..doe bagz
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