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"Insane (let's play)"

Hook: Both
Verse 1: Prah'Ject
Hook: Both
Verse 2: Prah'Ject
Hook: Both
Verse 3: Nyla G
Hook: Both

Ifyall don't know shorty is my girlfriend doing her thing ya dig...shit is hot..HOLLA..

Will put links below this post

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http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3130453
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=238867

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Insane beats...I like their style,i used a couple,not this one..sorta upnorth swang to it,

Flow:I like ur swag nig...u gotta ill flow nigs.

Lyrics:Ur flow makes the bars stand out even more..fun lyrics nothing to serious just club-ish,i can mos def slam this in the trunk...the hook is nice!Im feelin this song..I can see one of those videos for this,u know like the begin'n of belly in the club scene.

Props nigz.

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=238942

Rtf if u feel like it,if u dont feel anthing about it then dont bother im not fuck'd up bout it...but still givin u props tho'.

Thanks for the feed my dude and your link i hit up but it says the thread is closed

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damn forgot the links...lol.

dont worry bout it bay bro.

Wow man.....that chick's voice works well with yours man. First verse is typical Prah swag....lol. I'm digging that hook though man. Beats nice too. Lyrics are cool. This is an all around good song man. I'd probably make this the first single that you put a lot behind. I could easily see this getting some good rotation on radio and in clubs. Good shit man

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very club-ish beat

works for wut u want it for...slick

quality was on tap here...clear vocals...

some of ur lines shudda been dubbed while others not...

otherwise, flow/delivery is slick here...

the breathing in the background is intersting...lol

hook is clever with the singin/breahting/rapping...lol


interesting that u didn't split the verses and u dropped the 1st two



good drop



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Ayo Pros...check yo pm's i fed there for u..

Enyg..thanks..our voices go together in the bed also ..BUT only when alicia aint there..lol

and Q thanks bro

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Upppin..........

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using a Ansain beat...thats always good..really good production on...your lyrics are always tight...flow is simple with nothing to crazy till you start talking about the swag...then it turns up nice. Hook is ill...this could be a tight single in club and shit fam. Nyla sounds tight on this too. She's in the verse with out actually being too loud or overtaking the verse which is good. Her verse or break down wasn't that tight and it died down in the end with out anything leading towards the hook. This track easily gets a 8.5/10


*Note* to get a perfect 10, you got to be Big Pun or 2 Pac fam so please dont get offended by it...

please RTF in one of my tracks....like....

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=238971

thanks

-InDeath

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figure I could drop by and promote my my first mixtape and what not since im here..

thanks for the feeed

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uppin................

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her voice matches with yours quite well...very clubbish song. good job. quality is pretty good. clear lyrics. nothing too loud or too low. her voice in the hook i think should be a little softer though. flow is real cool on both verses. as for her verse..it worked. you might want to add something at the end of hers though..maybe have her hit a higher note to kinda finish it off cause it sounded like she just didnt feel like singing anymore so she stopped. good job though overall with the track..