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06-28-06, 04:11 PM | #1 | ||||
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feed me people, this the 1st i've done in a while and mods dont delete this, i'll have links edited into this post http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=230439 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=230444
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06-28-06, 07:05 PM | #2 | ||||||
...Closer Look...
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lmfao...lil jon didnt really have to be there ehhh!!!...ur quality is ughhhh mayne...i like the beat..shit is loud as hell...u got a nice flow on it...delivery needs a lil bit of word dawg..i cud barely get what u were saying...i'm just feeling the beat big time... keep 'em coming
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06-28-06, 09:14 PM | #3 | ||||
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thanx for the feed
i just turned the beat down n uploaded it again uppin
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06-28-06, 10:13 PM | #4 | |||||||
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tony brown you blockhead!!!!!!!!
the beat is nice...good selection.......you got good prescence and good flow and everything.......only thing that needs to be upped is the quality, a little hard to understand what your saying due to it......but overall its a nice drop....just work on quality......and you'll be on your way
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06-28-06, 10:33 PM | #5 | ||||
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thanx mayne, btw just gimme a link if u want me to rtf. same for anyone else as well
uppin
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06-29-06, 10:21 AM | #6 | ||||
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uppin..........
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06-29-06, 07:51 PM | #7 | ||||
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Wake up people..
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06-29-06, 10:15 PM | #8 | ||||
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No love? damn....
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06-30-06, 10:16 PM | #9 | ||||
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*yawn*
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07-01-06, 12:57 AM | #10 | |||||||
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u dont pause enough in ya spit... shit just keeps comin, and its too much if u aint got mad multi's... and yo shit would sound doper wit some adlibs... i dig ya second verse better cuz its a lil slower.. the fad out is kinda wack though... but good shit word... .. .. return wit some feed http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=230858
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07-01-06, 04:24 PM | #11 | ||||
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iight thanx, but werd i hate pauses so i just don't lol
i'ma hit up your link right now uppin
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07-02-06, 12:31 PM | #12 | |||||||
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ewww @ the beat maN....u sound real young....delevery is nice, you sound like ur pretty confadent...flow ups a LOT here....for about 4 bars...kinda hard to hear what ur saying at some points...lyrics sound decent....i'd throw some more metas n shit in a shit talk track tho...hooks decent..i'd EQ a bit more if i was u..maby add some more lows to ur shit...best thing here was the multis witch brang the flow nice
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07-02-06, 07:40 PM | #13 | ||||
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thanks mayne, yea problem is idk how to mix so hopefully i'll learn how to do some eq'ing myself pretty soon. thanx for the feed
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07-04-06, 02:23 PM | #14 | ||||
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DAYUM at the quality. you'll get better. LOL @ the lil john shit. Oh well you'll get better this shit was aiight....
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07-04-06, 03:44 PM | #15 | ||||
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yea lol doesnt matter anymore, i just threw my old mic away n got a shure PG58 vocal mic so my quality's literally like 5 times better. thanx for the feed
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