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01-08-05, 04:49 AM
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B-force - Elevated
IP: FDD6 AE15
i was workin on this t'night
you may call me spastic, i dont calm like antacid ya asked for it kid, freeze you as molasses i dont react when my egos been blasted my brains been chemically reacted to never be flattened harder, never flaccid, always fresh, never rancid no longer primean, highly evolved homo sapien dashing dime bag bowls, bong hitting champion one hoot, scoopin loot, old school chronic recruit giving me elation to be crushing you like a crustacean call it petty, pint sized like confetti better be ready, made quick like spaghetti raw sauce, out you get tossed, recognize tha boss faster 'n' Andretti, beheaded by my machette you all insinuate i should elevate all that i create for fucks sakes give me a minute to renovate chill out, masturbate, while i take all that you say and reinstate my place at head plate a heavyweight , eating up eight steaks up tempo you're all overated i hate to say it i wont make a parade of it sadly, i feel jaded and i resort to raiding mentally invading, verbally raping your bones im scrapping, your nerves im chaffing can't outwait fate, feeling irrate i've set the bait, yall just took it late i could'nt wait, move early out of the gate slippin tactically in a war state spiral bound books is where i contemplate squeeze verbs into nectar lemonaide a hit insane, methaphetamine melting in your brain have you rambling for loose change taking pop cans back standing in the rain feedback plz?....  elevated?  posts: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?p=1881101 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?p=1873222 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?p=1875613 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?p=1881101 Last edited by BForce_420 : 01-08-05 at 06:54 AM. |
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01-08-05, 06:53 AM
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IP: FDD6 AE15
rate this just some feedback....
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01-08-05, 08:20 AM
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IP: E09B 97DF
Elevate sum mo'...you could do much better if u tried.
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01-08-05, 04:34 PM
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IP: FDD6 AE15
it didnt have no topic thats what killed it... ,
i try and defet every old piece i write so we'll see  more feedback? |
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01-08-05, 06:50 PM
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IP: FDD6 AE15
more feedback yo!
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01-10-05, 12:28 AM
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IP: FDD6 AE15
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