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Black Thief 2 28.57%
Shadows edge 5 71.43%
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Old 04-19-04, 07:24 PM   #1
Shadows edge
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From: Urbana
Black Thief v Shadows Edge

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Hmm.. rules up to you... if you don't make any I'll just drop right after you...
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Old 04-19-04, 08:03 PM   #2
iamthatdude87
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yo shadow wanna battle....i'll vote on this when u both finish
 
Old 04-19-04, 08:12 PM   #3
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Old 04-20-04, 04:14 PM   #4
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Uppin for Black Thief.. if you still wanna battle.. or we can just close this.. I almost forgot about it
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Old 04-21-04, 12:22 PM   #5
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From: GA all day nigga
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my bad....som many battles I forgot but its cool

Im bout to kill this cat in this fuckin battle
have u on tha "edge" of fuckin bein scared of ya own "shadow"(shadows-edge)
read between tha lines kid...my lyrics go way deeper
than u think...i grip ya neck and put ya in a sleeper
Killin you softly wit words....Im tha real grim reaper
ya name is whack...it couldn't be any cheaper
ya lyrics?they played out like hip-packs and beepers!
tha only way ya shit could be hot is if u read mine
I spit like Armor-all....all my lyrics got shine
destroy ya self esteem...ya shyt aint makin connections
ya shyt bout as hard as a dick wit no erection
nigga I spit hot shit by tha masses
to destroy cats like u....fuckin net nerds thinkin they shit classics
Ya only wins were against weaks...just lokk at ya credits
Man Im slaughterin you like this shit is a nasty fetish
Come in like a ghost...call me a phantasm
My shit so strong...even ya mom feels it and catches orgasms
have her in spasms movin up and down
tell her to keep her ass up and her head down
she got a thang for rappers
Have her lookin like she bobbin for apples
Cut ya flesh and pur acid in ya wounds....
Know that ya met ya fate...ya record is doomed
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Old 04-21-04, 12:54 PM   #6
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Ayo.. check it:

It's just plain fucking sad, check this cats age (19)
And still couldn't get a job for minimum wage
Occupation: bill collector... like he bum his friends bills
Only thing this cat thieved is his sister's birth control pills
He fraid to get knocked up the way I come so damn hard
Spit so fucking hot, touching the mic leave ya hand scarred
Cat got two quarters to his name and think he 50 Cent
Quit chasing fame... spit one bar n your talent spent
Battl'n herbs is something I don't do generally..
But just for now I'll play Ulysess S. n General Lee
Whoop this cat's ass all over the fucking south
You gotta know shit's what you get for running yo mouth
Cat call himself Black Thief, though really meant he Lack Bief (beef)
You sickness just a false belief, but when you die it's still a fucking relief
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Old 04-21-04, 12:59 PM   #7
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Hmm... somehow it cut out two lines there at the end.. between the last two, put this in:


The way he got a nine milliy willy.. good grief!
Think he hot smoking a floral leaf, I leave him sleeping on a coral reef
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Old 04-21-04, 01:13 PM   #8
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umm okay ima give an honest vote and a real wun nahmean di battles goes da black theif hands down cuzz shadow u was sayin some dumb shit..."stealin ya sister's birth control pills"????? wow but ima break it down pause!

structure-shadow
opener-black...nice opener
punchlines-black hands down
wordplay-nun
multi's-shadow...u had a few
personals-black
finisher-shadow..good endin dat shit was hard
enjoyed-umm i gotta go with black...he had a real battle verse...if ya'll was battle face da face da crowd a feel it..nahmean shadow ya verse was goodbut soem shit u cant say when u battlin

my vote-black

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118364
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118442
^^^^ THERE GO 2 OF MY BATTLES RETURN DA FAVOR PLEEZ
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Old 04-21-04, 02:06 PM   #9
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Um.. ok I had wordplay but thanks for the honest vote... uppin ^^
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Old 04-21-04, 02:37 PM   #10
Black Thief
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From: GA all day nigga
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uppin this bitch
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Old 04-21-04, 05:08 PM   #11
Black Thief
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From: GA all day nigga
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uppin this bitch
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Old 04-21-04, 07:33 PM   #12
Shadows edge
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Upping for votes... don't sleep on this people ^
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Old 04-21-04, 07:47 PM   #13
GKillaz05
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From: CANADA
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Shadow - I liked your flow alot, it went well.. your spit was pretty hot wit some hard hittin punches in there.

Best Line - It's just plain fucking sad, check this cats age (19)
And still couldn't get a job for minimum wage )nice opener(

Worst Line - Occupation: bill collector... like he bum his friends bills
Only thing this cat thieved is his sister's birth control pills

Black - good spit man, had an alright flow going and some good word play wit some pretty good punches.

Best Line - NONE really stood out.

Worst Line - Im bout to kill this cat in this fuckin battle
have u on tha "edge" of fuckin bein scared of ya own "shadow

OVERALL - this was a pretty good battle, but I gotta give my vote to shadow, I was feelin his flow more and he had some hard punches in there. He also had some good wordplay goin... black man, your shit was good to just didnt flow and good, and the punches wernt as hard. Good Battle.

VOTE - Shadow

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http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119893
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Old 04-21-04, 08:38 PM   #14
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Aight man.. thanks for the feedback. Uppin for more votes
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Old 04-21-04, 09:20 PM   #15
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Shadows edge
Aight man.. thanks for the feedback. Uppin for more votes


again...
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