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Old 08-21-04, 04:43 PM   #1
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[rate] Things Have Changed

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Things changed


Verse 1:

look baby it seems, that things have changed, they aint the same
you playin games, its like I dont even know ya name
Im goin insane, what the hell is with our friendship?
you talk shit to ya gurls, then tell me sumthin different
man this is, ballistic, and I dont wanna end this
how you gon tell me you love me, and tell others we finished?
I thought our love was endless, atleast thats what you told me
said we was homies, but now I know that it was just another story
you said your heart was mine, and now you take it away?
how you gonna break me off like that, without saying a thing?
baby its crazy, damn gurl, I thought you was my lady
it seems like you hate me, atleast thats the impression you gave me
and lately, you been finding excuses not to talk to me
you stole my heart, as if you committed grand larsony
its not hard to see, that like toilets, our love has plunged
as much as I hate to admit it, gurl I think we are done


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you said that you love me, but now I realize
that you were fake, it was a mistake, nuthin but lies
please prove me wrong, assure me that it aint the truth
we may be thru, but my life is only sane with you


verse 2:

I've told you nuthin but truth, the way I feel is real
and while I'm up in this boothe, I'm still in love with you
nothing concealed or hidden, I said what I mean and I meant it
how can we be finished? baby gurl, when we was only beginnin
this doesnt make sense, like a crippled man, jumpin a fence
our love was endless,so why you start to cry and doubt it?
cuz believe me, like master p, girl i'm bout it bout it
but ya words were hammers girl, and my heart was pounded
and now I'm astounded, that we lasted this long
a relationship built on lies and fights, cant be too strong
I put up with this for too long, and still the question remains
are you still feelin me? cuz if not, I'll go and pack up my things
and leave, just leave all that we ever had behind
cant believe I didnt see it comin, I must've been blind
must've been high, wont make the same mistake next time
and there aint nuthin that you can do or say to change my mind


Hook:

you said that you love me, but now I realize
that you were fake, it was a mistake, nuthin but lies
please prove me wrong, assure me that it aint the truth
we may be thru, but my life is only sane with you

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Old 08-21-04, 06:06 PM   #2
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that was tight dawg!!! nice vocab,flow,structure,just somethin ill...keep rappin
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Old 08-21-04, 06:14 PM   #3
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Drop Stuff

If you vary with flaw then you contrary to the law of rhyme
Eat Cole slaw and swine drink bold raw wine lunchtime
Sometimes get deprived real good of livelihood with punch lines
Fracture bones and manufacture homes with no roof just
To cause a freak-a-leak like Petey Pablo, truth is a must
Lover of wisdom discover systems of knowledge through
The rhythm of college and that destroys garbage too
Remove parts from brain groove and spark flames like
Dragons on wagon trains rap art to dames on bikes
Rhyme so ill I fell in health stay well stealth like B52’s
Lets pack up tents and go where there’s facts and events crews
Foul here, flow juice and powers and produce flowers like gardens
Need fertilizer down my throat,
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Old 08-21-04, 06:32 PM   #4
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wut the fuck??? yo maddrapper dawg i asked for reel feedback not ur queer ass flow...either leave reel feed or dont say shit aight?
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Old 08-21-04, 08:41 PM   #5
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HERE YOU GO black magic YOU A WHACK TRAGIC A FAGGOT IN FUBU AND A MAGGOT IN DO DO
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Old 08-22-04, 11:49 PM   #6
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lmao...ok homie
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Old 08-23-04, 12:20 PM   #7
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yo cmon people!!! uppin for feedback on this shit!!!!
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Old 08-23-04, 12:44 PM   #8
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nice drop ill it all when im more myself im way out of it but so far nice piece
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Old 08-23-04, 12:50 PM   #9
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thanx homie...uppin
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Old 08-23-04, 02:36 PM   #10
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Tight rhymes, good flow, nice vocab, keep flowin'
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Old 08-23-04, 06:51 PM   #11
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uppin
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Old 08-24-04, 02:00 PM   #12
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nice shit...is it all true or is it just a song? anywayz...holla at me if u wanna do a collab or sumthin dawg u is ill
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Old 08-24-04, 05:28 PM   #13
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yo i like that shit n i can relate to it man all da way, good piece evryline made sense n it wasnt all borin n shit nice peice dawg keep doin ya thang
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Old 08-24-04, 05:48 PM   #14
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thanx for the luv yall...uppin
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Old 08-27-04, 11:59 AM   #15
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damn this got hella slept on
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