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Verbal Shoota 5 71.43%
Black City 2 28.57%
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Old 06-23-05, 12:12 PM   #1
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Black City vs Verbal Shoota

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Old 06-23-05, 12:13 PM   #2
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Old 06-23-05, 12:25 PM   #3
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Old 06-23-05, 12:32 PM   #4
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dude its not cool to ga and do tha type of shit dat you do
you must have a 'disese', 'RAW' is tha fuckin name of ya crew!

Tephlon? please dont tell me dats a name ya niggaz gave you
cuz ya flow aint strong, i dont have to shoot, i can easily punch thru

i heard dat you was a bitch and when you lose you be gettin niggaz dq'd
what type of shit is dat? what a pussy, now tha RV know its true

but whateva, nigga imma win dis one here, you gettin mad? maybe
but before dat happen 'clean ya act up' cuz like ya location you a 'dirty baby'

young nigga, wit young figures but on rapverse you must be rich
cuz u post twice every minute like what you are, a no life bitch

w/e if its weak...i gotta go to a meeting in 10min...dont get it, dont vote
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Old 06-23-05, 12:56 PM   #5
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no matter where you go...i'ma be there Poppin up like a neandraphall
stick glue on ''tha mittens'' 'cause ya 'Black citys' dropppin the ball
Homey, you only standin tall next to me if you attatched too stilts
only time its ''off the dome'' wit you is rockin a hat witta' Tilt
PEOPLES rookie? brown nosin the rock still wont have your shit smelt
you could be in touchin distance witta blind man
.............................................an you're presence ain't felt
cards are dealt, man its elementary, an you're losin First Hand
you'd think a terrorist is controllin ya punches...cuz the shits dont land
You couldnt bring the beef hard if it was supersizzed or even enlarged
shit....if rv says..
beatin on herbs is a crime, then with this rhyme, im guily as Charged!


explanation-
in his user profile it says ''from: tha mittens''....the rest you should understand.....
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Old 06-23-05, 01:04 PM   #6
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lmfao........iight, iight.....nice................uppin
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Old 06-23-05, 01:26 PM   #7
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Voted For: Black City

GOOD:

Flow - tie
Structure - tie
Punchlines - tie
vocab - tie
Wordplay - Verbal Shoota
Nameplay - Verebal Shoota

BAD:

forced Rhymes - Verbal Shoota
Forced Multis - no
Non Sence - nope

CREATIVITY

Theme Battle - no
Creative Punches - Black city
creative multi's - nope

PERSONALS:
Both had great personals this was almost a tied battle but Black City had em more hard hittin...

OPENING/CLOSING:

Opening: Black City
Closing: Tie

COMMENT:
The battle was (like I said) almost a tie, but wut happened here wuz that Black city had a few better punches and Verbal Shoota forced sum rhymes... pc

V/ Black City
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Old 06-23-05, 02:06 PM   #8
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Voted For: Verbal Shoota

dude its not cool to ga and do tha type of shit dat you do
you must have a 'disese', 'RAW' is tha fuckin name of ya crew!
wack opener
Tephlon? please dont tell me dats a name ya niggaz gave you
cuz ya flow aint strong, i dont have to shoot, i can easily punch thru
no
i heard dat you was a bitch and when you lose you be gettin niggaz dq'd
what type of shit is dat? what a pussy, now tha RV know its true
okay, punch was a little-aight
but whateva, nigga imma win dis one here, you gettin mad? maybe
but before dat happen 'clean ya act up' cuz like ya location you a 'dirty baby'
nope
young nigga, wit young figures but on rapverse you must be rich
cuz u post twice every minute like what you are, a no life bitch
weak closer


no matter where you go...i'ma be there Poppin up like a neandraphall
stick glue on ''tha mittens'' 'cause ya 'Black citys' dropppin the ball
weak opener
Homey, you only standin tall next to me if you attatched too stilts
only time its ''off the dome'' wit you is rockin a hat witta' Tilt
decent
PEOPLES rookie? brown nosin the rock still wont have your shit smelt
you could be in touchin distance witta blind man
.............................................an you're presence ain't felt
meh, flow is lackin here.. punch was aight
cards are dealt, man its elementary, an you're losin First Hand
you'd think a terrorist is controllin ya punches...cuz the shits dont land
nope
You couldnt bring the beef hard if it was supersizzed or even enlarged
shit....if rv says..
beatin on herbs is a crime, then with this rhyme, im guily as Charged!
decent closer

overall Teph took this one.. punches were just harder than
blackness here.. black work on ur punches.. add some personas
& shit .. n’ make them connect.. cuz ur rhymes were connecting
at all in this battle.. no hate.. just elevate
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Old 06-29-05, 09:10 PM   #9
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This was feedback posted for Verbal Shoota

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Old 07-04-05, 10:08 AM   #10
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upppppiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnnnn


Drop a link after you vote an favor will be returned.
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Old 07-04-05, 10:13 AM   #11
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Voted For: Verbal Shoota

good battle both ya...............................
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Old 07-05-05, 09:28 AM   #12
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Old 07-05-05, 01:08 PM   #13
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Voted For: Verbal Shoota

v/verbal shoota...

reasoning:..he kept it consistent...thru out....a punch in everybar....that last one was cheesy, though....black, ya flow was kew...yu didnt have any hard hittin punches, though.....and one of the bars...wasnt even a punch....the thrd one....I wasnt feelin ya verse..at all...good try though......

pm me if i gotta break it down more.....
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Old 07-05-05, 01:15 PM   #14
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Voted For: Black City

open: Black City
close: Black City
personals: Black city
metas: Both
punches: Both
multis: None

win:Black City
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Old 07-10-05, 10:31 PM   #15
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Voted For: Verbal Shoota

This kat owned dat City dude.... wdf is up wit mockin RAW bro????? fuk you.... black city dnt eva mock raw..... cuz dat my crew tooo not on r.v. i got my own crew called RAW_SKILL ENT....we make musick.... fuk ya dnt eva mock dat,,,, any ways this vote goes ta Verbal Shoota..... overall why??
ask yourself... better vocab.. better punches by fukin miles
flow owned him..... lines a bit too strecthed.... but otherwise dope best lines were no matter where you go...i'ma be there Poppin up like a neandraphall
stick glue on ''tha mittens'' 'cause ya 'Black citys' dropppin the ball
Homey, you only standin tall next to me if you attatched too stilts
^^^^^^ lmfao good werd play.... wit da droppin the ball

now fo black city??? well

dude its not cool to ga and do tha type of shit dat you do
you must have a 'disese', 'RAW' is tha fuckin name of ya crew!
^^^^^ only da opener...... dat wuz da only good thang..u had better overall flow than Verbal shoota but lacked puncehs..
Overall vote goes to verbal shoota.... return the favour //..... u peeps.... an honest vote.... peace!!!!
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