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06-11-06, 10:45 PM | #1 | ||||
Hell yeah
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The Blade That Would'nt Cut(My best one)only one verse
IP: 531E 6576
Beat made by : Full Effect Productions, the dude is ill damn, go get some beats from him
only one verse but meh its for that provocative tourny http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pag...m?bandID=454969 ------------------------------------------------------------ http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=229734 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2767697 Last edited by Speats : 06-11-06 at 10:53 PM. |
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06-11-06, 10:54 PM | #2 | ||||
Hell yeah
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IP: 531E 6576
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06-11-06, 11:07 PM | #3 | ||||
On The Air - COMIN JAN 07
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IP: BACC 8E92
alllright i'm listen as i type
The beat is pretty hot...the mixing on the beat is perfect..it sounds professional your quality has got 1000 times better your flow aint too bad you def. got better since the last I heard u.... I like the echo effect u put on ur vocals...... Your lyrics are good and ur delivery is good.....but ur emotion u gotta buck up a lil bit...and then it'd be like 100 times better this is pretty hot tho no doubt.... 1 |
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06-11-06, 11:14 PM | #4 | ||||
Hell yeah
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IP: 531E 6576
word man thanks alot
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06-11-06, 11:34 PM | #5 | ||||
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IP: 25CE F1CC
This is a hot beat. It flowed pretty well,sometimes it seemed a bit forced.
Some decent lyrics,nice echo .. Like Tense said,once u get some emotion,it'll be alot better.
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06-12-06, 07:30 AM | #6 | ||||
Hell yeah
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IP: 531E 6576
thanks man.....
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06-12-06, 04:39 PM | #7 | ||||
Hell yeah
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IP: 531E 6576
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06-13-06, 05:25 PM | #8 | ||||
Hell yeah
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IP: BB9C A210
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06-13-06, 06:15 PM | #9 | |||||||
Nt Your Average
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IP: 1751 7D00
I love this beat....
Aight,Flows 100% better,still needs a lil work lil choppy but mad better....Pronunciation needs a lil work,but thats like me,the accent....I like quality real nice and the echo effect how you do that?...Real nice,deliverys better seems more confident w/ your presence....Lyrics were nice Koo shit...should have made it to a full track..feelin it 1 RTF On My "Welcome To N.C"
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06-13-06, 11:16 PM | #10 | ||||
Hell yeah
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IP: BB9C A210
word thanks, i will
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06-17-06, 11:51 AM | #11 | ||||
Hell yeah
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IP: 48EC 5D32
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06-17-06, 12:32 PM | #12 | ||||
Sam Dope
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IP: C147 32A9
Listening..
Damn, I'm feeling this beat..It has a really deep haunting melody..You come in nice..You sound scary man, Delivery is great. Flow is meh, on and off, slips a few places but nothing too too bad..Overall man, I like it. You've elevated alot. Dope track and shiiiiiiiit |
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06-17-06, 02:45 PM | #13 | ||||
Hell yeah
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IP: 48EC 5D32
yessiirrrrrrrrr
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06-18-06, 12:00 PM | #14 | ||||
Hell yeah
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IP: 48EC 5D32
uppin one mnore time
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06-18-06, 02:52 PM | #15 | |||||||
New to RV
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IP: FFF8 F801
http://www.rapverse.com/community/s...ad.php?t=229687
hit that up i love this beat already from the intro. shit sounds raw. i like how you echo'd the last words. that shit was hard. flow is on point. i aint feelin your accent. but i cant criticize you on that. gawd damn i love this beat. i liked the closer line. your quality is good, but you sound like have a lisp or you spit when you talk. this was real good shit though duke. delivery was on point as well. nothin to criticize
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