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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=233597


M-Eazy on tha first and second verse as well as the hook
Dj Cfc on tha last verse
4 year old nephew on tha outro

This is just a rough draft, sat. I'm hooking up wit a dude whose guna make this an original beat and we gon run wit it...
But, I might switch up my lyrics and put this one on tha mixtape, either way...whats good wit some feed..


First track posted on RV...I do hell of em tho...


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sounds like you saying shay somethin in some parts
lyrics fit the track nothing spectacular
flow on the first verse is pretty good a few parts it was off
on the second verse you went quiet in one part lyrics im likin em a little better on this verse but flow wasnt as good as the first verse
3rd verse rhyme scheme is pretty weak in the beggining flow was pretty good but not great
only thing i really liked about your verse was the adlibs
overall track was pretty good flow wise lyrics fit the track well both voices blended well no doubt best part of the song was the adlibs lol

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