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Old 12-04-04, 10:20 PM   #1
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"One Night Stand" Lots of emotion

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Just somethin quick.. I know y'all been through it

I just wanna be with you like some might have,
And I don't want it to be like the some i've had,
All I want is you to want i ain't even gonna front,
That i'd even be happy with a one night stand...

Ever been friends with a girl? and thought she was all just a friend,
Then been around them and had no idea whats goin on in ya head,
Everyday I feel like that, and them im right back to puzzled,
Like I was with my ex chick, it seems that im back in trouble,
Mixed feelings towards her, thats more of a action where,
You see her in the halls and can't talk, but can't help but stare,
Wanna approach but nope, you can't even if you tryin to,
Then when you do talk you lost in them beautiful eyes of blue,
Speachless but then you speakin at the very last chance,
Why is it that I always want somethin that I can't have?
Every chance im given I lose, and its so very sad to see,
Cuz till I figure out what im doin, i dunno where my ass will be...

I just wanna be with you like some might have,
And I don't want it to be like the some i've had,
All I want is you to want i ain't even gonna front,
That i'd even be happy with a one night stand...

Gotten so confused, so am i supposed to pick our path?
But you don't even know, so our chances are split in half,
I wish I had known so much what you've been thinking girl,
I care about you more than anything in the freaking world,
I think you might know how I feel, if so then how bout you?
I want only you and that why i don't pimp even when im out to,
Find it odd, nah i find it a little more fuckin scary just,
Thinkin when i said i wanted you for xmas, you ain't take it serious,
God only knows, cuz I sure don't, and exactly the same for you,
I think we both hide our feelings and its a shame we do,
Think bout you all the time, put you in my ryhmes as well,
Will we be or will we not? i guess only time will tell,

I just wanna be with you like some might have,
And I don't want it to be like the some i've had,
All I want is you to want i ain't even gonna front,
That i'd even be happy with a one night stand...
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Old 12-05-04, 12:47 PM   #2
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uppin for feedback.... come on now... don't sleeeep
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Old 12-06-04, 11:32 AM   #3
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good drop.felt the emotion.everything was well put.8/10....keep em comin'
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Old 12-06-04, 12:43 PM   #4
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Decently well put together drop. Yes emotion was there, but it coulda been stronger. You had a flow too. Nice work.
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Old 12-08-04, 12:11 AM   #5
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uppin for feedback... don't sleep all you cats....
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Old 12-08-04, 01:37 AM   #6
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lmao @ us havin the same title... mines kinda fucked tho, just a bull shit thing i did in 2 mins
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Old 12-09-04, 09:51 PM   #7
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uppin for some fizzybizzy... and by that i mean feedback
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