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Old 08-18-04, 06:04 AM   #1
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Murder

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Man walks up to u in a club
says a brer's talkin shit bout u
( u say who)
(dat brer over dere filling his cup)
u walk over like man, wassup
he disses u,ur fam and ur crew
now he's insulted u and u look a fool
cos he dun dissed u
in front of yo homies, so what u gonna do
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ur mans look @ u like step up black
so u go outside and key up his cadillac
dem grroves be inches deep
gon cost dat nigga 5 g's at least
he steps out crunk'd as fuck
from a night when Elusiv G dun ripped da club
and he sees his ride
and feels the dagger slicin' through his pride
bitches on the side, laughin' like its a joke
manz screamin ( if it was me dat nigga b smok'd)
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Goes to his contact to buy sum heat
He's weary of the popo so hes on the creep
goes to his hoes, deliperates on the predicament
his niggaz phone saying lets 4get any agreement
so dey roll up in a lincoln navigator
roll by da niggaz house ( nigga com get a taster)
brer stepz outside with his homies at his bak
nigga no.1 dus nuttin but spray from his gat
dats how da streetz fall further
best believ its murder
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Old 08-18-04, 06:06 AM   #2
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nice flow and structure yo view my shit i need you so badly
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Old 08-18-04, 09:55 AM   #3
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yo wasup y'all dis ma rhyme murder. I listened to Nas: Rewind where he spits a story backwards. I wanted to do same sort of thing but spittin backwards is another level so i jus rhymed about a murder from beginning to end. holla Bak

Check my battles:

Elusiv G vs. Invader_ZIM
Elusiv G vs. Hova-Wayne
Elusiv G vs. SLik Skillz
Elusiv G vs. Mc Merc
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Old 08-18-04, 09:59 AM   #4
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cool
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Old 08-18-04, 11:26 AM   #5
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Shitty, come harder man, and to much miscellaneous ish in there, you got a win cause I aint show up, you aint beat me bitch nevh that........If you think you can, reset the battle.
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Old 08-18-04, 07:05 PM   #6
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it was str8, good flow
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Old 08-20-04, 01:59 AM   #7
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good shit

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dat shit is pretty tight jus throw a couple of more punches in dere and you'll be set
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Old 08-20-04, 08:37 AM   #8
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thanks 4 da feedback and Hova-Wayne yeh i got da win cos u bitched out n didnt show up so suck a dick and kiss ma blak ass nxt time u online set up a battle and ill fully rectify any thoughts u hav of beatin me!
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Old 08-20-04, 11:07 AM   #9
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Blast a town with brassbound regulations, devastation
On streets interrupt celebrations with heat, destination
Twilight zone, got a stopper in the sink made of copper
And zinc water can’t escape drown and slaughter fakes proper
Make doctors see straight, rate this above average I’m a thug
Savage, love marriage and like Biggy my grub’s cabbage then the club
In the tub with shorty using Zest soap, best hope for sex
Dope Lex parked, quotes text that spark this girl wanna stroke complex
“Girl Gyration from booty is not a violation of duty, it’s just
Vibration from a cutie like you” “true MADD I’m too glad must
We talk? I’m brittle a little you wanna finger fiddle my pie crust
Guy must lick the gravy of this slick lady before the cock is thrust”
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