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12-09-04, 06:53 PM
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infestin these emcees
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"You Can't Leave Me Like This" aka "The Comeback Part 2"
IP: 8E70 C31B
"You Can't Leave Me Like This" aka "The Comeback Part 1" Listen girl... This is the hardest thing I've ever had to do.. So check it... girl i need your lips i cant survive without the vibe of your kiss when we together it was bliss but spread apart i cant handle this we were meant to be from the start, i cant live with us apart this live isnt wokrin now cuz i need to feel the thump of your heart i need you in my life, my body just wont function without you in it i still remember the softness of your hips but without you i aint legit listen to me because you have to forget about the shit i said i was drunk, baby i could prove it about how many tears ive shed baby id do just about anything just to see that beautiful smile you know my style, we'll see each otha in a while even if it takes me miles i still remember your sexy brown eyes as you said your goodbyes suga you dont know how i cried when i found out it wasnt a lie i need you in my arms so i can feel your wartm and beauty im gunna do anything and everything i can to get u back, its my duty you always be in my heart and in yours baby i hope i exsist but baby please fall back into my arms .. you cant leave me like this |
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12-09-04, 07:55 PM
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Banned
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IP: B417 DEF0
not bad...
i honestly dont really be feeling these kind of songs in TEXT fourm but this was decent... flow was decent * kinda off in some places.... picture was decent... creativeness was aight... all around decent drop keep elevating... 7.0 outta 10 |
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12-09-04, 08:11 PM
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IP: 3240 794D
very emotional piece of poetry.. nice..
i need you in my arms so i can feel your wartm and beauty im gunna do anything and everything i can to get u back, its my duty you always be in my heart and in yours baby i hope i exsist but baby please fall back into my arms .. you cant leave me like this ^ending was nice.. seems like u poured sum feelings into this poem fa real.. and this what made me want to continue reading.. u stuck to the topic throughout the whole thing, structure good too.. no flaws that stood out in my opinion. good luck, pz...
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12-10-04, 11:22 PM
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New to RV
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IP: B0B6 E314
its kind on tight
i don't really feel this shit it aint for me but it is tight fo people who like it u fel me ------Keep it Gutta u-undastand-----
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12-30-04, 09:47 PM
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..The Council..
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IP: 8E70 C31B
Bumpin for my self.
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