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03-25-06, 06:01 PM | #1 | |||||||
I can rap and stuff.
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This isn't a song, rather just a short spoken word poem thingy majing. It started out as an assignment for school for the vocab words but I think it actually turned out pretty good. I'm looking for added opinions. Drop links cuz I don't bullshit with my feedback. Thanks. It's the top track.
http://www.soundclick.com/socratesakaphantom Here's my links. http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2699390 http://community.rapverse.com/showp...387&postcount=9
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03-26-06, 02:46 PM | #2 | ||||
In ya area.
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I'll post the lyrics for those whose who are deaf/don't have working speakers.
Lyrics: Brothers and sisters, please...I think it's time for a poem. Doom comes, like a vac-cuum Because death sucks and smells like a raccoon, or a baboon Death kill us like crack killed Pookieeeeeeeeeee ...Like Schwarzenegger killed Tookieeeee Chewbacca was a wookie, revolution. Overall I think it was pretty dope.
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03-26-06, 06:14 PM | #3 | |||||
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<--can tell your mic is a cheap digi lmao. Learn to mix you lazy shitbag, cuz this could have sounded a LOT better.
Err, for a spoken word track your speakin volume is low. Your annunciation fell off in one spot, lyrics made sense and reached a logical point. Can't really say a whole lot about aspoken word track since it's not like you can judge the flow or anything.
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03-26-06, 06:21 PM | #4 | |||||||
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i like it yo..it was straight to me..but yea u was to low =\..and had way to many lo's lol..take some of them out and ull be straight..
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03-27-06, 12:08 AM | #5 | ||||||||
I can rap and stuff.
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IP: 77D6 3918
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I actually recorded this on my mp3 player's mic because I was too lazy to plug in my real mic and mix stuff.
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03-30-06, 12:51 AM | #6 | |||||||
I can rap and stuff.
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IP: F9AE B249
Bump and stuff.
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