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Old 02-22-05, 05:33 PM   #1
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Tony.Self feat. SevenThird - Sick of This

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Hot little joint jumpin off here... its free download for now- so enjoy that shit and drop links bitches

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Old 02-22-05, 08:48 PM   #2
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Thirdself has a original flow .. i think shit is hot... i mean flow is fuckin hott.. fresh breath of air na mean ?.. was feelin this shit to the fullest... man seven is always going off the walls.. i fuckin love it :-D.....


man nice drop.. was bobbin my head like epalepsy na mean? keep droppin fam
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Old 02-22-05, 10:00 PM   #3
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yea that shit was hot, flow was good, lyrics was good, song overall was hard as shit.......................................
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Old 02-23-05, 11:13 AM   #4
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damn nice flow man... you got a real unique voice
i got nothin bad to say about this song man... sounds tight as fuck
you need to fix ur vocals a little accually, they sound kinda hollow but its not bad

that hook is dope tho... is that you too?

good content in this song... keep doing your thing you know... i love those first couple lines, they sound dope as fuck good shit... peep my new song
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Old 02-23-05, 12:02 PM   #5
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This shit sounds real nice.. Unique flow man.. It sort of reminds me of the old eminem type shit when he was comming up. Especially on the hook, but the verses sounded real nice and origional. Good shit.

Quality was also good.. Seventhird's verse was pretty sick too.. I'm definatly feeling this track.
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Old 02-23-05, 12:11 PM   #6
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this joint was bangin' folk i feel it evathang was on point & the beat was knockin' continue 2 keep bringin' the heat word
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Old 02-23-05, 06:11 PM   #7
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im peepin this sence yall gave me feed..

beat is kinda gay.. first guy has a dope flow i liked when it was fast.. you need better production on your vocals.. put some overdubs on them, then adlins on certain parts.. lyircs cool.. its dope.. id like to colab with the first cat.. hook is aight.. quality kinda sucks on it.. lyrics cool.. aight drop. first verse was the best, fell off on the second.. both of you need way better production.. i can help if you actually wanted to sound better
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Old 02-23-05, 06:36 PM   #8
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Ya flow was orignal and nice, the chorus was ok , beat was nice
you had some good messages their nice shit yo
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Old 02-23-05, 06:48 PM   #9
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Damn. This was dope.

Flow was sick all the way through, chorus was real nice, and the second verse was just dopeness.

Props to Thirdself, another Nice Joint.
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Old 02-24-05, 09:20 AM   #10
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good lookin on all the possitive feedback
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Old 02-24-05, 10:28 AM   #11
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beat i'm not really feelin...

1st dude flow was aight...delivery was ok...i think it could have been a lil better...lyircs were str8...

chorus i wasn't really feeling...

2nd dude- flow was decent i guess...needs a lot of polishing tho....delivery is str8...lyrics were aight...

overall this was a decent track...peace


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Old 02-24-05, 11:41 PM   #12
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beat is eghhh, sounds like some merry-g-round type ish, lol...

OMG this hook iz dumb strange kyd, NOT feelin' it...what's tossing a dollar into the bucket got to do with yuo being sick of soemthing though?...

again, not feelin' the flow on this and the beat's shitty so it's kiLLin' shit for me anyway... (1st or 2nd verse)...

2nd dude rappin' wasn't any better, needed to up ya emotion on the beginning cuz it was more laid back than ya boi, but I liked your voice better and ya flow wasn't as jacked up as the other dude...

maybe ya'll just need to switch flow styles cuz he sounds FUCKed up flowin' like that wid a deep ass voice =/...obviously, I'm not feelin' this...thanx 4 the feed on my track though ...
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Old 02-25-05, 01:14 AM   #13
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Beat sounds liek a Dre beat. First verse, flow is on. Just get kinda redundant. Sounds like some EQing on the high end would have opened em up a bit because they sound a bit muffled. Hooks were dope. Obviously an emcee that uses his vocal range well and knows what he can/can't do with it. Second verse reminded me of the first. Vocals still sounded "flat" but it soudns liek an EQ prob or the mic, not a deliv problem. The deliv on the other hand has some aspects of it that I don't personally like. Trying to think how to explain it. Um...the words hug the syls, like..in one line I just cought it said "you've achieved the roots of the rap we spiiiittin" and "pay a-motherfuckin-teeennntion". It dosen't sound liek the way one would naturally speak and that's what turns me off about it - but this seems to be a prefferential issue since some people DON'T liek it when people spit liek they'd speak by not stretching the syls liek that, and some DON'T like the when people wit the stretch. I fall into that second catagory.

The third verse delivered liek a person would naturally speak, so I favored it. It didn't feel like an act or a performance. Felt almost liek natural convo that just happened to rhyme and had a point and focus to it, which I like. A lot. As a matter of fact, the verse even starts off like normal convo then transitions into a full out lryical convo. I like it.

All in all an OK track - but that's based on my disdain for the syl-stretch. If it was all convo style I'd have loved it.
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Old 02-26-05, 08:55 AM   #14
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ok you guys both came dope......and unique...so thats good

1st verse
dope how you started it....i like your flow its nice...good shit yo
lyrically its dope and your on beat quality is good....nice shit yyo

chorus is catchy but could have been more clear so that i can go around singing it..lol

2nd verse ..
dopeness started this one out the same way as the 1st one...dope shit...quality was nice again......lyrics inthis one where a lil better in some ways......on beat again...if i would hav eto change one thing i would say lyrics...they are dope but need to be dooper ya feel..take more time to write.

3rd verse...
now that is dope that style you never dupilicate the same style or spit the same way wchich is dope...lyrics is dope quality also could have been better but shit was nice


i really liked this shit.,....nice....just dont liek the cussing that much
shoudl make an edited version..lol so i can bumb it in my room

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Old 02-27-05, 05:04 PM   #15
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hahaha~ this track is dope, thought i'd up it for you.....you killed it with this track..nothing wrong with it whatsoever.1
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