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| Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End | RV Radio  |
06-20-07, 05:22 PM
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New to RV
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A New King
IP: 8A60 97E8
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06-20-07, 05:46 PM
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-BTR-
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IP: 2B02 4E7F
your voice is kinda cool..levels dont sound too good.
try to balance it a little..beat is real hype..turn your vocals down a bit. flow in the chorus part is a little off. verse is alright nothing special..sound like some freeway kinda stuff..nothing that really caught my ear.. dude the flow is weird man..it kinda actually works but then again at times it sounds WAY off..this is actually pretty cool something refreshing get at me..we should collabo.. my AIM is Meehahaha |
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06-21-07, 06:38 PM
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I'm Talented.Period.
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IP: B4EB 5C31
What's hot:
1 Intense beat 2 Intense sounding delivery 3 What needs work: 1 flow is lackluster 2 more complex lyrics wudnt hurt here 3 hook sounded odd...were u rapping or just talking on the hook? Overall: needed some focus...up the basic elements dawg...flow/etc 1 |
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