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07-17-05, 12:43 AM | #1 | |||
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My Only Lifeline
IP: 2029 97B3
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/5/vog_music.htm
song is called My Only Lifeline http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=200363 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=199835 Last edited by sabotage : 07-17-05 at 12:51 AM. |
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07-17-05, 02:55 AM | #2 | |||||
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IP: 9EAC 3618
yo yo yo come on people what do you think of the song be honest
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07-17-05, 08:37 AM | #3 | ||||
Aiming for Heads
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IP: 3240 794D
Flow is good...raise your vocal levels...lyrics are ok..presence and delviery sucked because your shit is too damn low.....and beat is nice
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07-18-05, 03:27 AM | #4 | |||
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IP: 0325 A1B0
thanks for the feed............................
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07-18-05, 11:05 AM | #5 | |||
OYD
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IP: 1ADC A69C
i like the beat and the producers who made it...but, u shudda cut off their INTRO
and wassup with ur voice/flow?...sounds like ur mumbling RAP man...RAP no energy in this at all eeeh...work on flow and delivery 1 |
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07-19-05, 08:03 PM | #6 | |||
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IP: 2029 97B3
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07-21-05, 04:43 AM | #7 | |||||||
Addicted
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IP: FB0A 8081
were u find dis beat??? beats sick as fuck... first.... no emotion u sound scared of da mic flow is decent.... lyrics i cant pick out cos ur mumblin ye seriously u need to feel wat u say not just say it.. if u cant feel it nobody else will feel it
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07-21-05, 05:08 AM | #8 | |||
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IP: 2029 97B3
thanks for the feed....................
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08-04-05, 10:00 PM | #9 | |||
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IP: 2029 97B3
this song was alright
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08-04-05, 10:39 PM | #10 | ||||||
Whys That?
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IP: 5285 DC82
listening.................
first impression...vocals to low..the beats drowning out your delivery. hooks nice. second verse is the same as first...vocal lower than the beat, You sound shy on this track..like your holding back. I like your topic.... return some feed..link in sig. |
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08-05-05, 05:39 AM | #11 | |||||
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IP: 3E88 8976
nice beat to rap on need better quality and speak louder then the beat but i like the idea
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08-06-05, 02:20 AM | #12 | |||||||
You Love My Style.
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IP: 87AE 6287
Flow sounds ok for most part but still needs some direction u do sound like u mumbling beat is str8
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08-06-05, 07:46 AM | #13 | ||||||
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IP: 9BCD 2E7C
this was ok, you gotta up your vocals a bit. your lyrics sorta fell in a few places.
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08-06-05, 03:13 PM | #14 | |||||||
Evolution
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IP: 0DD2 7DAA
listening as i type:
beat is illl.... wow... theres no emotion what so ever.. that needs to be worked on. flow is good but your mumbling. work on your emotion and delivery. coz i think its boring and people will turn it off before they hear the rest of your verse hook is ight but no emotion and got no effect so people might not fink its a hook.. second dude same no emotion flow is ight though cant hear the lyrics.. raise the vocals. pz |
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08-06-05, 06:28 PM | #15 | ||||||
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IP: 1BD5 13B2
flow is iight needs work, needs a lot more energy, lyrics is ok, anyways you need to elavate 6/10
return favor though http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=203350 |
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