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IP: D64D 4CD3
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...0056#post300056
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...0057#post300057 Scandal fables check the mind’s ability to think Tangled tables peck the eye’s chivalry, slews blink Smells of pink test masculinity’s incandescent rage The sweet taste of purity denies a pre-pubescent’s age A chess stage holds rival pawns of black and white Coincidence played in a subliminal square, cornered fight Much to my delight structured fuckers sell their souls While pretentious suckers spell ‘blow’ with iridescent coal But maybe I’m amazed at tolerance levels of insects Relevance, absent blazed prophets writing sin~checks Never cashed presents to un-phased toppings on vice Greed craves more as realization surpasses one slice Little spice, unoccupied minds even corrupt innocence Faster than accountants accounting every nano-pence. |
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IP: 4577 CD9A
I LIKED DIS 1 MORE DEN DAT OTHA,IF SEEMED MORE STRUCTURED N LAYED OUT BETTA,I LIKE DA WORD SCHEME U USED,U DROPPIN SUM HOTT RYMES HERE (PUTS ON GLOVES),ANY MORE????DO DA DAMN THANG,RICAN LUV
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Nice flow.. had some short multis.. good content. Saw the hints of wordplay here and there.. and you did a good job spreading a little knowledge. Nice open mic..
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IP: D64D 4CD3
lol thx man, Thats fopr poeple to see that hip hop is worldwide baby...
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IP: 4577 CD9A
i felt ya vocab and small mutis but das all i really saw check da Elements of rap in wackness emergency center dawg it might help (no beef)
U can only get better ~1~ |
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IP: D64D 4CD3
yo samurai you probably didnt even check it man,
Scandal fables check the mind’s ability to think Tangled tables peck the eye’s chivalry, slews blink Fables-tables, Check-peck, eyes-mind, ability-chivalry, think-blink, scandal-tangled every word rhymes man, that alone is a very difficult task especially for it to be understandable, Im sorry man, but if you couldnt grasp the essence of this verse you should be the one in whackness emergency center, (no beef) |
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I'm only sayin cuz when da rest of da verse came u dropped off of dat style it's like u was demonstratin da different rappin styles if u want ur rhymes to be da best they can possibly be u would got to the page i told u to but u ain't gotta take my word for it
U can only get better~1~ |
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