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Old 04-30-06, 08:36 AM   #1
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21. Chrit (0-0) vs 22. Tech Skillz (0-0)

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Old 04-30-06, 03:13 PM   #3
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Old 05-01-06, 12:24 AM   #4
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I'm the king motherfucker...


...its motivation
I got the drive here, so bro, I'ma fly past...
While ur drive... is also where ya bitch ass reside at
Tech'll get blazed, but the kids too poor to hate
Wardrobe of one hat and hoodie... and they aint even coordinate
Immigrant prick, just cause ya save ur welfare...
and bought 1 van
...aint mean ya whole family's gotta live there
Its sorry bro... I got some bucks to help this weak bumb
For real son... my yardwork fucking needs done
But dont get mad... cause this Em fan will never bash me
How hard can a man be, stealin a hairdo from his avy.....



You best show...
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Old 05-03-06, 02:25 PM   #5
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Old 05-03-06, 03:31 PM   #6
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you's a fat kid, a disaster on the runway
I know you can reach your goal...
...so here's a season pass to subway!!
freetos calories cause i'm nacho homie
but he so fat.....
....he lost the punchlines in guacamole!!
i'm about to desinigrate you, make you angry
cause i'd have you bobbin'...
...but your sister's already reflectin yo avy!!
god-like? you ain't even referred to as legend
i'll slam your organs....
....like musicians after a preach from the reverand!!
beating you like bad daddy's with the belt on my waist
so when he hittin the club.......
.....it means i ran a metal rod against his face!!
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Old 05-03-06, 04:27 PM   #7
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I got the drive here, so bro, I'ma fly past...
While ur drive... is also where ya bitch ass reside at
Tech'll get blazed, but the kids too poor to hate
Wardrobe of one hat and hoodie... and they aint even coordinate
Immigrant prick, just cause ya save ur welfare...
and bought 1 van
...aint mean ya whole family's gotta live there

vs.

god-like? you ain't even referred to as legend
i'll slam your organs....
....like musicians after a preach from the reverand!!

Pretty One-sided in my eyes, not that good of a battle though. Chrit cam out with some pretty dope stuff, just not much that made me go ooh, Tech you barely had anything decent attempt but not decent enough. More consistently, Chrit took this.

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Old 05-03-06, 05:21 PM   #8
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I got the drive here, so bro, I'ma fly past...
While ur drive... is also where ya bitch ass reside at
Tech'll get blazed, but the kids too poor to hate
Wardrobe of one hat and hoodie... and they aint even coordinate
Its sorry bro... I got some bucks to help this weak bumb
For real son... my yardwork fucking needs done

vs.

you's a fat kid, a disaster on the runway
I know you can reach your goal...
...so here's a season pass to subway!!
beating you like bad daddy's with the belt on my waist
so when he hittin the club.......
.....it means i ran a metal rod against his face!!

ok, so this was an aiight battle. @ first i wanted to break it down bar-by-bar but felt like.. naw! but seriously, chrit came weak and good. people, notice his bars and his punches. like, each one has some effect in dissin his opponent. he used good set ups and then executed with an actual punch. tech, you didn't really do that with ur punches. you had the creativity/whit, but the execution was poor. if you work on that i see you doing really good in the league. good job to both and good luck.

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Old 05-03-06, 07:30 PM   #9
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I got the drive here, so bro, I'ma fly past...
While ur drive... is also where ya bitch ass reside at
Immigrant prick, just cause ya save ur welfare...
and bought 1 van
...aint mean ya whole family's gotta live there

VS.

beating you like bad daddy's with the belt on my waist
so when he hittin the club.......
.....it means i ran a metal rod against his face!!


Honestly, this was a let down really. I know Chrit can come better than he did and the same goes for Tech. Tech really dropped a weak verse and it was only the closer that I liked, although it was a bar using a concept that has been used by most... still a decent flip so props for that. Chrit had a nice opener, I liked it and it made me laugh as did the van line... that shit was dope, the best punch of the battle. The rest just seemed rushed and was barely pushing average. Overall, Chrit had one more quotable and an overall better verse.

V/ - Chrit
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Old 05-03-06, 07:55 PM   #10
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...its motivation
I got the drive here, so bro, I'ma fly past...
While ur drive... is also where ya bitch ass reside at
Tech'll get blazed, but the kids too poor to hate
Wardrobe of one hat and hoodie... and they aint even coordinate

Vs.

god-like? you ain't even referred to as legend
i'll slam your organs....
....like musicians after a preach from the reverand!!
beating you like bad daddy's with the belt on my waist
so when he hittin the club.......
.....it means i ran a metal rod against his face!!

Not a great battle…Tech could have won this – but as it is, Chrit edged it just about, and had some funny punches
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Old 05-04-06, 10:48 AM   #11
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I got the drive here, so bro, I'ma fly past...
While ur drive... is also where ya bitch ass reside at
Immigrant prick, just cause ya save ur welfare...
and bought 1 van
...aint mean ya whole family's gotta live there

vs

Nuttin..

Eh..

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Old 05-04-06, 07:52 PM   #12
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got the drive here, so bro, I'ma fly past...
While ur drive... is also where ya bitch ass reside at
Immigrant prick, just cause ya save ur welfare...
and bought 1 van
...aint mean ya whole family's gotta live there

vs.

beating you like bad daddy's with the belt on my waist
so when he hittin the club.......
.....it means i ran a metal rod against his face!!

Vote - Chrit

That organs punch by Tech Skillz would have just canceled out the quotable anyway, as that line is played as hell. Decent enough battle, though.
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Old 05-04-06, 08:58 PM   #13
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Chritty..
...its motivation
I got the drive here, so bro, I'ma fly past...
While ur drive... is also where ya bitch ass reside at
..ehh..
Tech'll get blazed, but the kids too poor to hate
Wardrobe of one hat and hoodie... and they aint even coordinate
..nope..
Immigrant prick, just cause ya save ur welfare...
and bought 1 van
...aint mean ya whole family's gotta live there
..ionno, jus not feelin this so far..
Its sorry bro... I got some bucks to help this weak bumb
For real son... my yardwork fucking needs done
..hahahahaha HEELLL no
But dont get mad... cause this Em fan will never bash me
How hard can a man be, stealin a hairdo from his avy.....
..dis verse wuz, wow..

vs..

Skillzo..
you's a fat kid, a disaster on the runway
I know you can reach your goal...
...so here's a season pass to subway!!
..naw..
freetos calories cause i'm nacho homie
but he so fat.....
....he lost the punchlines in guacamole!!
..lol, witty..
i'm about to desinigrate you, make you angry
cause i'd have you bobbin'...
...but your sister's already reflectin yo avy!!
..ehh..
god-like? you ain't even referred to as legend
i'll slam your organs....
....like musicians after a preach from the reverand!!
..iffy..
beating you like bad daddy's with the belt on my waist
so when he hittin the club.......
.....it means i ran a metal rod against his face!!
..naw, weak, espescially for a closer..

vote - tech skillz
..wow..
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Old 05-05-06, 04:20 PM   #14
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I got the drive here, so bro, I'ma fly past...
While ur drive... is also where ya bitch ass reside at
Tech'll get blazed, but the kids too poor to hate
Wardrobe of one hat and hoodie... and they aint even coordinate
Immigrant prick, just cause ya save ur welfare...
and bought 1 van
...aint mean ya whole family's gotta live there

vs

you's a fat kid, a disaster on the runway
I know you can reach your goal...
...so here's a season pass to subway!!
so when he hittin the club.......
.....it means i ran a metal rod against his face!!

vote: chrit....
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Old 05-06-06, 12:07 AM   #15
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Immigrant prick, just cause ya save ur welfare...
and bought 1 van
...aint mean ya whole family's gotta live there

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nothing.


chrit didn't even need to try.
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