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07-26-04, 09:57 PM | #1 | |||||
I'm So Punny
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Flow Intelligent vs. Willy Dexter vs. Cerulean
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battles go up monday check in by wensday verses due by thursday votes due by the next sunday rules: no dick riding no crew votes no freeposting more then three times your dq'd no feeding off of other guys verse up your battle more than three times in a row your dq'd bar limits: 4 line min. 20line max. REMEMBER in your check in thread you must edit it with 5 vote links, if not you will be subtracted a vote every time you are missing a link!!!!
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07-27-04, 10:53 AM | #2 | |||||
The Epitome Of Greatness
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Checkin In Good Luck Cerulean..Willy
Battles Voted On: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?p=1443408 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?p=1447978 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137666 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137663
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07-28-04, 09:57 PM | #3 | |||
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20?
yeah.. i thought so.. http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1450454 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1450460 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137689 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1450480 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1450485 Last edited by Willy Dexter : 07-30-04 at 08:54 PM. |
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07-28-04, 11:29 PM | #4 | |||
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IP: B6B2 3C4D
Starting it off with flow..
I got 20/20 vision, easily seeing this bitches flaws & its a clear win for u.. 'bout as clear as ya pic of Nas Ya girls hot so I'll trailor, I bet you never met a vet I feel sorry for you cuz- RV's his only home... on and off the internet And u AIN'T better yet, u need a buncha' practice For Flow battling me is like a cake walk.. for a fat kid I found out ya secret, I know how to act 'roun a lady Cuz I'll leave this pussy exposed.. like Flashes avy Don't even bother callin' that #, this whores a disgrace Everytime I called it.. this bitch got left w/ a sore face Next up.. another nobody Ur a dissappointment queer.. leave this brotha in fear When u freestyle.. even deaf people cover their ears! Skinny bastid', they gotta name for pummelin' this prick Called beating a faggot.. I ain't talkin' a bundle of sticks Shall I go on? kid, listen to me closely.. ya flow's wrong Couldn't take a stand.. as the shit I hang my coats on Man I embarassin' C, my bad I shouldn't of mentioned it Cuz I dissed C more then that song Eminem did Aight dawg, I bet ya glad its over finally.. aren't you? U can't even function right.. exactly like ya heart do and I'm spent bitches.. |
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07-29-04, 11:04 PM | #5 | |||||
The Epitome Of Greatness
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IP: C1DA C961
You Got Wack Text..For Someone Whos Supposedly The Best Vet
I'll Smack Dex....Handle That....You Havent Even Won A Battle Yet Like Titanic Afraid To Dround Ill Leave Willy A Nervous Wreck Then Draw Spirals Around Your Head Until I W'ring' Your Neck Flow's Straight Hard Spittin' Velocity's Like Engines In Race Cars In The Mean Time, Willy'll Get Smashed More Than Space Bars Think You Got A Neck Up In Tha Ranks? Im Chokin Your Streak My Wise Ways Are Bound To Win Even If My Opener Was Weak This Bitch Gets Disrespected Body Shattered To Segments In Seconds Correct-it...You Couldn't Amount To Shit If You Were Being Digested Willy Aint The King...And Sure Can’t Make A Jailhouse Rock Willy D Drop 'Slick Bars' ? Just For That Jailhouse Cock Your Claims Of Victory Are Like My Condoms..Far Stretched Got More Chance Of Osama Bin Laden Starring On Star Trek With Every Single Word You Say....I'll Crush Your Vertabrae Rip Out Your Tendons...So You Wont Have The Nerve To Play Shhh Willy Can You Hear It? The Sound Of Your Only Fan Clapping It’s A Video Of Yourself....Now That’s A Sign To Stop Rapping Me Gettin Beat By A Bitch....You Must Really Be Wishing Hard Pick Your Cards...Im Ace Of Spades..Your Just A Six Of Hearts Oh And Cerulean's A Bitch ~!1!~
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07-30-04, 11:58 AM | #6 | ||||
Banned: Spamming
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IP: CCAE A7E8
Ill judge this by consitency seein as one of u didnt show
I got 20/20 vision, easily seeing this bitches flaws & its a clear win for u.. 'bout as clear as ya pic of Nas good...its direct Ya girls hot so I'll trailor, I bet you never met a vet I feel sorry for you cuz- RV's his only home... on and off the internet pretty funny. And u AIN'T better yet, u need a buncha' practice For Flow battling me is like a cake walk.. for a fat kid ha nice. I found out ya secret, I know how to act 'roun a lady Cuz I'll leave this pussy exposed.. like Flashes avy decent. Don't even bother callin' that #, this whores a disgrace Everytime I called it.. this bitch got left w/ a sore face werent really feeling. Next up.. another nobody ^word. Ur a dissappointment queer.. leave this brotha in fear When u freestyle.. even deaf people cover their ears! decent Skinny bastid', they gotta name for pummelin' this prick Called beating a faggot.. I ain't talkin' a bundle of sticks I didnt get that. Shall I go on? kid, listen to me closely.. ya flow's wrong Couldn't take a stand.. as the shit I hang my coats on haha nice. Man I embarassin' C, my bad I shouldn't of mentioned it Cuz I dissed C more then that song Eminem did was ok. Aight dawg, I bet ya glad its over finally.. aren't you? U can't even function right.. exactly like ya heart do Nice line. Overall you came well & original, pretty witty aswell. You Got Wack Text..For Someone Whos Supposedly The Best Vet I'll Smack Dex....Handle That....You Havent Even Won A Battle Yet basic. Like Titanic Afraid To Dround Ill Leave Willy A Nervous Wreck Then Draw Spirals Around Your Head Until I W'ring' Your Neck this was good. I see what u were trying but nah... Flow's Straight Hard Spittin' Velocity's Like Engines In Race Cars In The Mean Time, Willy'll Get Smashed More Than Space Bars seen a line like that before..... in front lines aswell. Think You Got A Neck Up In Tha Ranks? Im Chokin Your Streak My Wise Ways Are Bound To Win Even If My Opener Was Weak basic. This Bitch Gets Disrespected Body Shattered To Segments In Seconds Correct-it...You Couldn't Amount To Shit If You Were Being Digested that was nice. Willy Aint The King...And Sure Can’t Make A Jailhouse Rock Willy D Drop 'Slick Bars' ? Just For That Jailhouse Cock seeeeeeeen this. Your Claims Of Victory Are Like My Condoms..Far Stretched Got More Chance Of Osama Bin Laden Starring On Star Trek WACK With Every Single Word You Say....I'll Crush Your Vertabrae Rip Out Your Tendons...So You Wont Have The Nerve To Play Nerve lines are played since Canabis wrote one. Shhh Willy Can You Hear It? The Sound Of Your Only Fan Clapping It’s A Video Of Yourself....Now That’s A Sign To Stop Rapping WACK Me Gettin Beat By A Bitch....You Must Really Be Wishing Hard Pick Your Cards...Im Ace Of Spades..Your Just A Six Of Hearts weak closer. Seriously u came played & weak. I read thru quikly & was like yeh that was ok but it really wasnt. U had to many played concepts & the star trak, video line are newbie material. V/Willy |
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07-30-04, 02:45 PM | #7 | |||||
..Intelligent Hoodlum..
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I got 20/20 vision, easily seeing this bitches flaws & its a clear win for u.. 'bout as clear as ya pic of Nas Ya girls hot so I'll trailor, I bet you never met a vet I feel sorry for you cuz- RV's his only home... on and off the internet And u AIN'T better yet, u need a buncha' practice For Flow battling me is like a cake walk.. for a fat kid I found out ya secret, I know how to act 'roun a lady Cuz I'll leave this pussy exposed.. like Flashes avy Don't even bother callin' that #, this whores a disgrace Everytime I called it.. this bitch got left w/ a sore face ...You Forced Rhymes....Practice- Fat kid Structure Wasnt That niCe At One Point But Ok Drop 8.6/10 You Got Wack Text..For Someone Whos Supposedly The Best Vet I'll Smack Dex....Handle That....You Havent Even Won A Battle Yet Like Titanic Afraid To Dround Ill Leave Willy A Nervous Wreck Then Draw Spirals Around Your Head Until I W'ring' Your Neck ..Hott Into.. Flow's Straight Hard Spittin' Velocity's Like Engines In Race Cars In The Mean Time, Willy'll Get Smashed More Than Space Bars Think You Got A Neck Up In Tha Ranks? Im Chokin Your Streak My Wise Ways Are Bound To Win Even If My Opener Was Weak This Bitch Gets Disrespected Body Shattered To Segments In Seconds Correct-it...You Couldn't Amount To Shit If You Were Being Digested Willy Aint The King...And Sure Can’t Make A Jailhouse Rock Willy D Drop 'Slick Bars' ? Just For That Jailhouse Cock Your Claims Of Victory Are Like My Condoms..Far Stretched Got More Chance Of Osama Bin Laden Starring On Star Trek With Every Single Word You Say....I'll Crush Your Vertabrae Rip Out Your Tendons...So You Wont Have The Nerve To Play Shhh Willy Can You Hear It? The Sound Of Your Only Fan Clapping It’s A Video Of Yourself....Now That’s A Sign To Stop Rapping Me Gettin Beat By A Bitch....You Must Really Be Wishing Hard Pick Your Cards...Im Ace Of Spades..Your Just A Six Of Hearts ..This Was A Sick Drop I Must Say 9/10 Vote..Flow..
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07-30-04, 06:47 PM | #8 | |||
Flyweight
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IP: B6B2 3C4D
Polifick vote don't count after all that shit talk you were doing.. hell no.. and your explanation is one of the worst i've seen.. you said nothing of punches.. you said "sick drop" and forced rhymes.. how can you have forced rhymes? if it rhymes.. then it rhymes and wow @ Flow only having 1 personal.. nice
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07-30-04, 08:10 PM | #9 | |||||
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Because Your Not Known On This Board So I wasnt Going To Go To Original And Search For Shyt Your Not That Important...Im Up 1-0...Because You Didnt Drop Links To Battles You Voted On I Suggest You Start Voting Fast
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07-30-04, 08:55 PM | #10 | |||
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Actually its 1-0, I'm up.. you only have 4 links and that was a hate vote by Pol like i said.. that kid was even hating on me in the mag..
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07-30-04, 09:07 PM | #11 | |||||
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I Just Checked The Mag I Saw It 1-0 You...Uppin
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07-31-04, 01:51 PM | #12 | ||||
MyNd's Full
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I got 20/20 vision, easily seeing this bitches flaws
& its a clear win for u.. 'bout as clear as ya pic of Nas that really didnt hit to me man sorry.. Ya girls hot so I'll trailor, I bet you never met a vet I feel sorry for you cuz- RV's his only home... on and off the internet kinda seen this comin, it was still nice though [B]wording was a little off, but not bad And u AIN'T better yet, u need a buncha' practice For Flow battling me is like a cake walk.. for a fat kid think i seen the concept before, so not really feelin this one either...and he did not force the rhyme here [B]the rhyme was perfect to me I found out ya secret, I know how to act 'roun a lady Cuz I'll leave this pussy exposed.. like Flashes avy wasnt feelin this one either Don't even bother callin' that #, this whores a disgrace Everytime I called it.. this bitch got left w/ a sore face weak closer, gotta do better next verse Next up.. another nobody Ur a dissappointment queer.. leave this brotha in fear When u freestyle.. even deaf people cover their ears! got a chuckle... but nothing special Skinny bastid', they gotta name for pummelin' this prick Called beating a faggot.. I ain't talkin' a bundle of sticks nice, someone didnt get this, i dont see how they didnt get it this was cool.. Shall I go on? kid, listen to me closely.. ya flow's wrong Couldn't take a stand.. as the shit I hang my coats on too basic to me, seemed kinda frontlinish Man I embarassin' C, my bad I shouldn't of mentioned it Cuz I dissed C more then that song Eminem did i get it, but didnt really like.. Aight dawg, I bet ya glad its over finally.. aren't you? U can't even function right.. exactly like ya heart do another weak closer... most of your verse was blah, nothing stood out but we'll see what Flow drops and go from there You Got Wack Text..For Someone Whos Supposedly The Best Vet I'll Smack Dex....Handle That....You Havent Even Won A Battle Yet no punch here, saying he hasnt won a battle is not a diss, your just simply sayin he hasnt won a battle, ok ...and.. Like Titanic Afraid To Dround Ill Leave Willy A Nervous Wreck Then Draw Spirals Around Your Head Until I W'ring' Your Neck too simple, nothing special here Flow's Straight Hard Spittin' Velocity's Like Engines In Race Cars In The Mean Time, Willy'll Get Smashed More Than Space Bars nope, thats played has hell, sorry Think You Got A Neck Up In Tha Ranks? Im Chokin Your Streak My Wise Ways Are Bound To Win Even If My Opener Was Weak nope, first off, never bold words, we can see them, second.. you forgot to throw a punch...u are saying u will win even though your opener was weak..thats not dissin him if anything its filler, and glorifying yourself, feel me This Bitch Gets Disrespected Body Shattered To Segments In Seconds Correct-it...You Couldn't Amount To Shit If You Were Being Digested that played too homie, i seen a line like that at least a year ago and it was played then, sorry dude Willy Aint The King...And Sure Can’t Make A Jailhouse Rock Willy D Drop 'Slick Bars' ? Just For That Jailhouse Cock nope, matter of fact i hated it...wording was horrible seem to me you couldnt think of anything else to rhyme so u wrote the first thing that came to mind..didnt like Your Claims Of Victory Are Like My Condoms..Far Stretched Got More Chance Of Osama Bin Laden Starring On Star Trek wtf, what are u talking about, what does osama bin laden have to do with him, i get the punch, but it was a stretch it didnt connect, and you are slowly digging a deeper hole for yourself..your setup should have helped your punch more in this case..i know that osama being in star trek is a slim chance and u are saying him winning is a slim chance too, right.. well that was a terrible way to throw that punch man With Every Single Word You Say....I'll Crush Your Vertabrae Rip Out Your Tendons...So You Wont Have The Nerve To Play played..sorry thats played too...your multis were on pointe dont get me wrong, but that means nothing if your just going to throw a played ass punch Shhh Willy Can You Hear It? The Sound Of Your Only Fan Clapping It’s A Video Of Yourself....Now That’s A Sign To Stop Rapping i actually chuckled...if you would have worded it better... it would have had more of an impact...other than that it was the best punch you've thrown Me Gettin Beat By A Bitch....You Must Really Be Wishing Hard Pick Your Cards...Im Ace Of Spades..Your Just A Six Of Hearts once again i liked the multis, but the closer really didnt do it for me, sorry man just being honest ok, its safe to say the Willy gets this with a mediocre verse at best.. Flow really didnt show me much...he came played for the most part...i think he need to continue reading other battles to find out what is played and whats not please dont argue with me about my comments. i was just being honest people critique my shit all the time and i use their criticism to get better and i hope you do the same V/Willy Dexter
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07-31-04, 03:49 PM | #13 | |||||
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No Doubt Mr W Rite... I Had 3 Or 4 Other Battles To Write For In 1 Hour So I Was Just Writing WHatever Came To Me Uppin For Votes
2-0 W.D
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08-01-04, 05:56 PM | #14 | ||||
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YO this battle was decent, hStarting it off with flow..
I got 20/20 vision, easily seeing this bitches flaws & its a clear win for u.. 'bout as clear as ya pic of Nas blah.......... Ya girls hot so I'll trailor, I bet you never met a vet I feel sorry for you cuz- RV's his only home... on and off the internet not hard hitting And u AIN'T better yet, u need a buncha' practice For Flow battling me is like a cake walk.. for a fat kid weak I found out ya secret, I know how to act 'roun a lady Cuz I'll leave this pussy exposed.. like Flashes avy weak Don't even bother callin' that #, this whores a disgrace Everytime I called it.. this bitch got left w/ a sore face weak closer You Got Wack Text..For Someone Whos Supposedly The Best Vet I'll Smack Dex....Handle That....You Havent Even Won A Battle Yet weak opener Like Titanic Afraid To Dround Ill Leave Willy A Nervous Wreck Then Draw Spirals Around Your Head Until I W'ring' Your Neck decent wordplay nice punch Flow's Straight Hard Spittin' Velocity's Like Engines In Race Cars In The Mean Time, Willy'll Get Smashed More Than Space Bars not good Think You Got A Neck Up In Tha Ranks? Im Chokin Your Streak My Wise Ways Are Bound To Win Even If My Opener Was Weak okay punch This Bitch Gets Disrespected Body Shattered To Segments In Seconds Correct-it...You Couldn't Amount To Shit If You Were Being Digested nice punch Willy Aint The King...And Sure Can’t Make A Jailhouse Rock Willy D Drop 'Slick Bars' ? Just For That Jailhouse Cock played Your Claims Of Victory Are Like My Condoms..Far Stretched Got More Chance Of Osama Bin Laden Starring On Star Trek not funny With Every Single Word You Say....I'll Crush Your Vertabrae Rip Out Your Tendons...So You Wont Have The Nerve To Play nice punch, Shhh Willy Can You Hear It? The Sound Of Your Only Fan Clapping It’s A Video Of Yourself....Now That’s A Sign To Stop Rapping decent punch Me Gettin Beat By A Bitch....You Must Really Be Wishing Hard Pick Your Cards...Im Ace Of Spades..Your Just A Six Of Hearts weak closer Ive seen much better verses from flow, but this one goes to flow for better punches. Willy didnt really bring anything hard in his personals or punches. votes-flow
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08-01-04, 11:03 PM | #15 | |||
Flyweight
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IP: B6B2 3C4D
lmao ..
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