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06-29-05, 12:07 AM | #1 | |||||
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Airbrushed, mocked up, nothin real, plastic ills, elastic
sicilcone gel, can’t even except the fact they are imperfect and still goin to hell. Beauty may be the key, to landing sex for free, but ya inside rotten to the core, girl wash yaself I can smell ya from the door. their bodies as instruments, guys takin them up and usin them throwin em away on some whim. Degratin women w/ morals and values Statures of limatations we all need to see to that we need the Bible in the worst kind of way Women these days potrayed as slaves. Point of view is this, women are expected to take a hit expected to look all beautiful and legit, when they still feel ugly on the inside and are a selfish b****. Average girls have no chance, sittin cryin in their room cuz they aren’t invited to the dance, or she didn’t get that promotion cuz fake ass sucked her way, all day to the top, and got better pay The ones with morals ain’t gettin no props, just being hated on by guys who use girls as pit stops, thinkin its cool to stick their dick in a seaspool, let me tell ya the rule, it’s a sin to screw w/o a ring dude. Next time ya layin in bed thinkin about the piece u just had, look you objectified her now she’s had, she a thing, nothing more, no sadness on ur ad. Think about a girl who will stick by ya always, ya past forgivin some even ya ways, not of real high standard and always understands that a man, is goin to be a man, but this my friend ain’t a man, its just a boy who can’t control or understand.
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06-29-05, 12:12 AM | #2 | ||||
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this was good, good topic, good flow, structure, and vocab, imagery was there also, great read from top to bottom, keep it up
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i come from a time when you earned respect, for your rhyme and the way you made words connect, not the money that you made or the girls you sexed, a concept you obviously haven't heard of yet Mars Ill
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06-29-05, 02:00 AM | #4 | |||||
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Yo uppin ya'll.
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