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Liquor of Tears 5 100.00%
TheSinnister 0 0%
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Old 04-16-04, 11:22 PM   #1
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Exclamation The Sinnister Vs Liquor of Tears (crew Battle)

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Aight
20 Lines Minimum
No max
No bitten
No Crew Votes what-so-ever
Ill spit first if that makes you feel any better..........
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Old 04-16-04, 11:24 PM   #2
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You talk fast, but i know you think slow/
This remin-issance is gonna kill you fo sho/
No mo battlin fo you, just let go/
Cussin out this bitch quickly and slitten his throat/
Puttin em on his toes, when i dissen his flow/

No mo gonna be left of liqur of tears/
Ya rymes suck dick and You sing like brittney spears/
Bitch get your shit together/
Not even justin timberlake sounds so queer/
Fucking cry me a river/
if you dont like the fact that im im stickin to you like a splinter/
Matter-of fact im sickin you, like a pit bull/
Tast my jaw ready to spit ridicule/
Im drowndin this bitch in his own sorrow/
Fuck this battle, Ill finish you off tommorow/


Wait.... I ain't done yet... We gotta bring this back for undestructable ... AYO,
Lets GO!




You gonna battle me somtime this year?/
I hope my rymes dont let u get to scared cuz i aint showin no fear/ Im makin you my lyrical puppet dog n when im done showin you up nottin gonna be left except a leash and a paw/
Ya better hear me cuz when i speak to u im screamin/
When i seek u im lettin lose this caged demon till i see you, im feeding my need to release His breathing with rage n seep this hate at for this fake angry gangsta's own sake/
There aint gonna be no possible reson where we could even agree/
Im bakin this g at three-hundred n Sixty-three degrees/
You'll Be beaten like you coulden't belive/
Attack with my words u coulden't achive a verse this deep/
Haunt you in ur dreams n murder u in ur sleep/
Noone could possibly b as evil as me/
Not even the preacher could give u this lession im about to teach/
Engrave it in your brain,drive you crazy wit sick split patters in your memorie banks,im gonna weave n get a craving for a razor/
Had ta plead for us no longer to be hateful enemies N wish never to seen light as a seed/
For now we can only greive at eachother for victory/
Only to beat me you'll need every mutherfucker from the streets u can lead/
But even in fleets ill take out every rugged g u can sick at me/
Leaping relentlessly only to be treated like my slave n watch you flee/
everywhere u'll be,ima creep till ur throats cut/
Please forgive me but ya shit outa luck
Ima let'chu free/
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Old 04-17-04, 02:16 AM   #3
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shit...w ell i just got hom eand i am fuuucked up.. So i will post some shit up tomorrow. And dont be like... PRE WRITTEN SHIT. Hah, Whatever. Peaseasesaesaesaeaseases
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Old 04-17-04, 08:20 PM   #4
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Alright kid, i just got home. Busy as fuck cause of my birthday and shit.here ill post up my verse....

Go ahead and spit first kid, your punches wont hit,
you couldn't spit a straight line if you dropped on a grid_~

Cause i lead the artistic renaissance, raised in raps nest
you're intellects a mess,Emotional stress
use your own blood to write my name on you chest
So when i push in the skin you'll know in ya heart whos the best
its sad that text freestyling is gonna be this kids career crest_~

I spit rain storms, makin your dirt lyrics mudslide
My mouth spits heat seekers, so herbs like sinn can't hide_~

Sure you can type lyrics, but your lines more repetative live then Milli Vanilli
I'll have you hearing 'guns clap' like an 'applauding audience of 9 milli's'_~

After this crew battle, UE will Stand for Un-Easy, when you hear us you run
Or Unreliable Emcees, because you're known for not getting the job done_~

I didn't beleive that ya spit sick until ya hoe told me so
She said she even slips a condom on ya toungue if your mouth moves down low
Self glorification wont get you anything, So you know
Cause your spirit in rap game like weeds the way they grow,
and hip hops lawnkeeper is here to mow_~

You battled for UE until you realized you only win cause herbs ride R's dick
So you wanted a real place to chill, so you try out for class sic?

To late kid, i think you were put out once already
When you heard my name vs yours, your muscles couldnt be steady
Cause you realized your reality,your mixed with a ruthless enemy
And you can't stand to me, the way my words accelerate past yours like mario andretti_~

Prewritten? Nah right off my head, Emotionally dead
You could predict what i said, Have your verse given to ya spoon fed
and i will still make ya look patchy... Heres a needle and thread
My punches are felt by crackheads who just down 1000mg of pain killer meds_~


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Old 04-18-04, 12:31 AM   #5
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Hahahaha ok....Uppin for votes............................
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Old 04-18-04, 09:43 AM   #6
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Okay, here's the breakdown........

Sinnister: Your verse was kinda boring. I didn't even feel like finishing the first part and almost fell asleep during the second. Your rhymes seem like they have no meaning behind them. I couldn't detect even the hint of a personal, but your multis were there........... that's about it. Try throwin more personals instead of just tryin to hit multis cause that shit gets kinda boring after a while.

Liquor: I liked your verse a lot better than Sin's. It flowed a lot better and the personals were there. Keep comin wit more shit like this and your wins will keep pilin up. My fav line was........

After this crew battle, UE will Stand for Un-Easy, when you hear us you run
Or Unreliable Emcees, because you're known for not getting the job done_~

Vote: Liquor
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Old 04-18-04, 01:36 PM   #7
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Thanks... I dun like battling too much but when i have to... ya know. UppiN
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Old 04-18-04, 03:57 PM   #8
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Yo my niggih L.o.Tears got massacred that niggih yo, ayo I'll be right back wit my vote to put on the map, but other wise. v/Liquor of Tears
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Old 04-18-04, 04:04 PM   #9
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Yo, Make that shit 'real thorough' or else it wont count.....Sounds d/rin... iight?
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Old 04-18-04, 04:49 PM   #10
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LoT - Nice spit dawg, first one I have seen of yours and I am impressed...you are overall one of the best on the site, I hate to see how good the guy is that gives you your 1st lost.

Best Line - After this crew battle, UE will Stand for Un-Easy, when you hear us you run
Or Unreliable Emcees, because you're known for not getting the job done_~ (daaamn)

Worst Line - NONE

Sinn - yo dawg, you had some tight shit man, your flow was good punches were on target and overall good spit.

Best Line - NONE stood out at me to much

Worst Line - Noone could possibly b as evil as me/
Not even the preacher could give u this lession im about to teach/

OVERALL - LoT got this is every catagory, he had some awesome flow.. some hard punches and some awesome wordplay. Sinn your shit was tight also, but if you wanna beat this dawg you gotta work on flowin better and some better multi's and harder hittin punches. Good Battle Boys!

VOTE - LoT
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Old 04-18-04, 05:31 PM   #11
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thanks for votin uppppin
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Old 04-18-04, 05:39 PM   #12
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G, you need to poll vote...Ill pm ya if you dot see this.
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Old 04-18-04, 06:23 PM   #13
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THE SINNISTER
flow is tight, but no literary devices.
Good multies and decent vocab, but not any good punchlines, and most are played out.

LOT
He took this one for sure. His flow was tighter, amazing punches, and godo multies. And killed the sinister in the vocab field. Here is his good punches.

Punches:
-Go ahead and spit first kid, your punches wont hit,
you couldn't spit a straight line if you dropped on a grid_~

-use your own blood to write my name on you chest
So when i push in the skin you'll know in ya heart whos the best
its sad that text freestyling is gonna be this kids career crest_~

-I'll have you hearing 'guns clap' like an 'applauding audience of 9 milli's'_~

-Cause your spirit in rap game like weeds the way they grow,
and hip hops lawnkeeper is here to mow_~
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Old 04-18-04, 06:43 PM   #14
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well... technically its 3-0 me... but it wont let g vote, and Mike doesnt have enough wins.
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Old 04-18-04, 09:39 PM   #15
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LOT, you killed him, your verse was nice, uppin for votes..........
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