Yea, this is the intro to our collab demo.

Ancient Perception (intro)
(click above)

Intro- Deuce
Verse 1 - Deuce
Chorus - Deuce
Verse 2 - Vox (also known as soul?uest)
chorus - Deuce

Mixed by - Deuce

beat - you really think i'm going to tell you.....

I left feed on MadKnight's Me against Everyone and Past Tense's Death Edge.

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Listening:

A fuking nice sample lol....flow is real real nice..... u have a real plain voice which makes it quite boring but ur presence is still there!!!

hook is nice good lyrics

Vox i really aint feeling..... u have no presence....... flow is aight....noooooooo emotion but you both had nice lyrics
Just keep dropping Vox u WILL get better

an decent track just a bit down hill at the end
6.5/10

heard beat before = pretty good


beat is loud, which means ur gonna have to amp ur vocals hella loud

vocals needs to be amped maybe 2 decibels

but ur flow is smooth and on beat...pretty good

lyrics...nothin too stand out-ish...not bad tho


delivery could be upped, as well as inflections in ur voice


Hook: needs to be amped...Panning the hook left and right woulda sounded tyte had I been able to hear what u were sayin


2nd cat...too much bass in his vocals...sounds like he's rappin too close to the mic

flow is pretty decent tho


not a bad track dawg, jus needs polish


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thanks you too, uppin.....................

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