Pic battle?

If not will go prolly like 30

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WTF is up with the no-shows this week anyways huh... like over half the fucking league no-showed

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Nah actually fuck a pic battle... am done writin my verse now anyways... hurry up and check so we can get this shit going. and please dont make this a fucking week long event.

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check.. i ain't got no pics anyway, so 30...

na, lets go like 20 or less, i don't feel like posting 30!

but if you just got to, you do it, i'll just post up 20..

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Iight 20 it will be then ... When you wanna post cause i got shit done already

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Im goin twenty lines herb, soz your face will depart
N here kid ill even give you a six line headstart
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This lame will get raped, and your face on ill be cummin
Cause this kids gay like Clay, hes Aken for some cock lovin
Ironic huh.. you noshow twice sign out for a week and back again
Now you got two no-shows under your belt. n you still have yet to win
Only time you dropped lastime before you signed out was
when you got merked with a Capital B, n i aint takling alpabet cuz
Ill punch your face so hard you'll see double twos
so when im done with you, you'll be stuck seein 2-2
Ill rip out your eyes, n write with em, so you can see yourself lose
I'd say your wack n noone likes you, but that'd be no new news
I'll bruise you bad, n ruien what little rep you had
Pick you up n give you some good feelins
.....................but dude... im not your dad

Blah wow that sucked huh... its cool though cause your gay and bite my concepts.

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Flash... what can I say to you? I don't have any words no more.
I would call you the wackest textcee. .
....but I wanna say something you never heard before!
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^Oh, don't worry, this won't take a week.. here's evidence, chump
this battle been over since Sunday. .
....I don't know why Kemp wasted time setting it up!
He must've been thinking "well, I do have some time to waste
so I'll put him against Quotez.. just to see Flash's lines get raped!"
Last week, you thought you was leaving fools just ruined.
claimed you was nice with the Wordz. .
....and instead, ended up losing to 'em!
Chicks? You don't have any, none you can put in your heart.
cause only time girls 'wanting Lamp'. .
....is when reading a book in the dark!
You shook from the start, you skeet just from palming ass!
and you cum way too quick for chicks. .
....why you think they call you 'Flash'?
You never hit a G spot, you stick it in, think u traveled great..
turns out, you got a Long Way To Go like that song Cassie made!

umm... fuck u!

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Lampejo.

This lame will get raped, and your face on ill be cummin
Cause this kids gay like Clay, hes Aken for some cock lovin
Only time you dropped lastime before you signed out was
when you got merked with a Capital B, n i aint takling alpabet cuz
Ill punch your face so hard you'll see double twos
so when im done with you, you'll be stuck seein 2-2
Ill rip out your eyes, n write with em, so you can see yourself lose
I'd say your wack n noone likes you, but that'd be no new news

Clay Aken/achin' concept I've seen before, but it was the best line in your verse. Rest of the lines I quoted was decent. Wasn't feeling everything else.

Faime S. Quotez

^Oh, don't worry, this won't take a week.. here's evidence, chump
this battle been over since Sunday. .
....I don't know why Kemp wasted time setting it up!
Last week, you thought you was leaving fools just ruined.
claimed you was nice with the Wordz. .
....and instead, ended up losing to 'em!
Chicks? You don't have any, none you can put in your heart.
cause only time girls 'wanting Lamp'. .
....is when reading a book in the dark!
You shook from the start, you skeet just from palming ass!
and you cum way too quick for chicks. .
....why you think they call you 'Flash'?
You never hit a G spot, you stick it in, think u traveled great..
turns out, you got a Long Way To Go like that song Cassie made!

I feel these were all worded and delivered better than any of Lamp's lines. Only reason I didn't list the first bar was because Lamp had a similar one in his verse.

Overall: I feel that Faime came with a better worded and delivered verse. Seemed more polished and experienced. Lamp's verse didn't come off as good as Faime's due to the way he sets up his punches.

Vote: Faime S. Quotez

Im goin twenty lines herb, soz your face will depart
N here kid ill even give you a six line headstart
^^meh
This lame will get raped, and your face on ill be cummin
Cause this kids gay like Clay, hes Aken for some cock lovin
^^played wordplay
Ironic huh.. you noshow twice sign out for a week and back again
Now you got two no-shows under your belt. n you still have yet to win
^^lmao
Only time you dropped lastime before you signed out was
when you got merked with a Capital B, n i aint takling alpabet cuz
^^nah
Ill punch your face so hard you'll see double twos
so when im done with you, you'll be stuck seein 2-2
^^meh
Ill rip out your eyes, n write with em, so you can see yourself lose
I'd say your wack n noone likes you, but that'd be no new news
^^iight
I'll bruise you bad, n ruien what little rep you had
Pick you up n give you some good feelins
.....................but dude... im not your dad
^^meh






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Flash... what can I say to you? I don't have any words no more.
I would call you the wackest textcee. .
....but I wanna say something you never heard before!
^^nah
^Oh, don't worry, this won't take a week.. here's evidence, chump
this battle been over since Sunday. .
....I don't know why Kemp wasted time setting it up!
^^idea is played.. nice wordin
He must've been thinking "well, I do have some time to waste
so I'll put him against Quotez.. just to see Flash's lines get raped!"
^^nah
Last week, you thought you was leaving fools just ruined.
claimed you was nice with the Wordz. .
....and instead, ended up losing to 'em!
^^lol
Chicks? You don't have any, none you can put in your heart.
cause only time girls 'wanting Lamp'. .
....is when reading a book in the dark!
^^played, but nice flip
You shook from the start, you skeet just from palming ass!
and you cum way too quick for chicks. .
....why you think they call you 'Flash'?
^^played
You never hit a G spot, you stick it in, think u traveled great..
turns out, you got a Long Way To Go like that song Cassie made!
^^iight


iight battle.. IMO i got flash with consistancy


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lamp


Only time you dropped lastime before you signed out was
when you got merked with a Capital B, n i aint takling alpabet cuz

I'll bruise you bad, n ruien what little rep you had
Pick you up n give you some good feelins
.....................but dude... im not your dad


faime

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Chicks? You don't have any, none you can put in your heart.
cause only time girls 'wanting Lamp'. .
....is when reading a book in the dark!

some punches really missed like that cassie line...i have no idea lol not really hitting hard the flash line coulda been done better..that lamp line was str8...flash juss came alittle better more impact punchs close battle but

vote-flash

Lampejo

Ironic huh.. you noshow twice sign out for a week and back again
Now you got two no-shows under your belt. n you still have yet to win
Only time you dropped lastime before you signed out was
when you got merked with a Capital B, n i aint takling alpabet cuz
Ill punch your face so hard you'll see double twos
so when im done with you, you'll be stuck seein 2-2
Ill rip out your eyes, n write with em, so you can see yourself lose
I'd say your wack n noone likes you, but that'd be no new news

vs.

Faime S. Quotes

Last week, you thought you was leaving fools just ruined.
claimed you was nice with the Wordz. .
....and instead, ended up losing to 'em!
Chicks? You don't have any, none you can put in your heart.
cause only time girls 'wanting Lamp'. .
....is when reading a book in the dark!

You never hit a G spot, you stick it in, think u traveled great..
turns out, you got a Long Way To Go like that song Cassie made


Overall this was a good battle,
Faime's verse was better organized as far as structure, wordplay, punches & metaphors,
What brought his verse down was the fact some lines in between lacked consistency.
I feel Lampejo brung it harder with the flow & personals. He was more consistent with his lines, but I think the only thing that hurts his verse was not enough creativity. Nonetheless, this was a good battle, keep doing what you do

Vote...Faime S. Quotes

xtortion do you know how to vote?

You quoted more lines from me then him.. and you voted for him>?
Or could this be because i voted agasint you?

Yup your vote aint counting.

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This lame will get raped, and your face on ill be cummin
Cause this kids gay like Clay, hes Aken for some cock lovin
Only time you dropped lastime before you signed out was
when you got merked with a Capital B, n i aint takling alpabet cuz
Ill punch your face so hard you'll see double twos
so when im done with you, you'll be stuck seein 2-2
Ill rip out your eyes, n write with em, so you can see yourself lose
I'd say your wack n noone likes you, but that'd be no new news


vs

^Oh, don't worry, this won't take a week.. here's evidence, chump
this battle been over since Sunday. .
....I don't know why Kemp wasted time setting it up!
Last week, you thought you was leaving fools just ruined.
claimed you was nice with the Wordz. .
....and instead, ended up losing to 'em!
Chicks? You don't have any, none you can put in your heart.
cause only time girls 'wanting Lamp'. .
....is when reading a book in the dark!


cool battle
both came good, i got flash taking this 4 - 3 though based on quotables
but good shit from both