check..................
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=235539
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=235548
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=235541
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3089614

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ight....ima drop now fuck it...

wow your 10-5 ,i guess u had to be spittin heat for that
but it dont mean ur ill,.....it means the fuckin league is wack
ya Lines so bordin and old kid, so weakly worded
You should start ‘em like old jokes.....now stop me if you heard it
in the poker game of life, I’m comin strong with threats
So I guarantee I’ll razor fold…....the skin along your neck
you better not show....I'm sendin threats..burnin ya fam's couches
have'em more scared to post....than fence builders near haunted houses
ya shits tired, an garbage u'll never run the street
cause when son drops......most people go to sleep
i'll jus punch ya teeth, cause I would shoot ya
but then son'll be dropped...an there goes the bright future
blast cats, I pack gats, you cant match me puss
if we go toe to toe you’ll catch a beating..n I’ll catch athlete’s foot
Confused bitch. Someone get this fucker some help
u're homo on so many levels,
.....You need an escalator to get in touch wit yaself

Bllaaaatttt

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Ightt letss gooo
Yo,this cat is soft, he can run at me and i wont budge
cuz i know he pussy inside, like the boy from the grudge
Fuck this herbs rants, he got no guts, and should wear clothes for sluts
looks like his pants reunited wit his balls, the way they huggin his nuts
Ill put Trey in the hospital , have this cat real close to death
not my fault my gun got a drug problem, it keeps smokin Meth
On the real though, unlike this ho, i smoke dro and drink on my soco
Last time Trey passed tree around, he crowd surfed the Stanford logo
I saw Trey and honestly I had some real sketchy intentions
but Meth showed me his best....Micheal Johnson impression
If meth had weight ,he would catch a beatin and thatd be my reason
but only pounds Trey got are in his head durin his migraine season
Hook this kid up wit sum tree,kickin him in the grill wit my tims
and send this young buck to the hospital juss like Chris Simms
Put this fag on the spot he cant even say his prayers
Trey be pullin more groins, then unstretched players

blast cats, I pack gats, you cant match me puss
if we go toe to toe you’ll catch a beating..n I’ll catch athlete’s foot
This was bland in my opnion but i quoted it because it was one of you better bars
Confused bitch. Someone get this fucker some help
u're homo on so many levels,
.....You need an escalator to get in touch wit yaself
This is played but once agains this was the other better bar in your verse.

Trey i wasnt really feelin any of you shit man... none of it made me laugh or anything it was basically just threats and not really punches. I dunno if its just me other people might see it differently but i dunno i just wasnt feelin to much shit in your verse.

vs.

Ill put Trey in the hospital , have this cat real close to death
not my fault my gun got a drug problem, it keeps smokin Meth
Havent really seen alot of Trey's battles but havent seen this from what i remember... concept was nice and wording was good... Nice punch
On the real though, unlike this ho, i smoke dro and drink on my soco
Last time Trey passed tree around, he crowd surfed the Stanford logo
Meh this one is kinda bland... but still connected
I saw Trey and honestly I had some real sketchy intentions
but Meth showed me his best....Micheal Johnson impression
This one was alright

Sonny I thought you aswell really slacked in your verse... like trey's while i was reading your verse i got towards the end and was thinking you wasnt going to have any quotables but then i got to these 3 bars and i laughed at the smokin meth line.. other then that your shit was really inconsistant and not really hittin hard like the meth line... seems like you palyed off the meth part a lil to much aswell.

All in all i thought this was a eh battle.

Vote: Sonny

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