Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End | RV Radio |
09-26-04, 04:36 PM | #1 | |||||
Puttin MD On The Map
|
random freestyle
IP: 408D D2A2
aight yo i thought this was pretty tight so im putting it in here so i can get some elevation tips
why u gotta hide where you from i live on the streets but you the fuckin bum leave you numb and acting all dumb boys sayin calm down man, only broke ya thumb i hit hard and turned your bread to crumbs fumble around dizzy and tumbling stumbling over your words like i was on CAPS LOCK i ride with style while your cheap ass rydin stock scratch that, ill hack that, back track you ride cock so dont come crying to me looking for pussy to beat skeet spots all over your sheets from another meat wrap you up and put you in the trash just gota bag it soft weak maggot dont talk me to anymore i aint no faggot!!
__________________
.:Retired:. |
|||||
09-26-04, 04:54 PM | #2 | ||||
New to RV
|
IP: 88EF 7D1B
I Aint Gunna Chat Shit An Say Urs Shit Unlike Mines Heres Da Straight Up Trutth
Very Gud Wrd Composition And Rymin Techniques However Its Onli Da Last Line Which Jus Needs Mor Adjustin Lol But Dat Can Definatly Kill Ma Lyrics Lol No Joke !
__________________
LaDy_T_aKa_LaDy_LyRiCaL " eVeRy LoSs Is A sTePpIn StOnE tO sUcEsS ! " |
||||
09-26-04, 04:58 PM | #3 | |||||
Puttin MD On The Map
|
IP: 408D D2A2
^^uppin mayn thats what i wana see nice feedback and props thanks LadyT
__________________
.:Retired:. |
|||||
09-26-04, 06:08 PM | #4 | |||||||
Flyweight
|
IP: D26C 0847
like^^^said you have got a good lil rhyme scheme going on...but the vocab needs elavatin...then the multis you had would have sounded better and the read wouldve been easier...good drop thiugh...1
|
|||||||
09-26-04, 07:32 PM | #5 | |||||
Puttin MD On The Map
|
IP: 408D D2A2
thanks mayn uppon on all this feedback i do what i can and then i only get better so thanks for the feedback pplz
__________________
.:Retired:. |
|||||
09-26-04, 07:51 PM | #6 | |||||||
Banned: Cheating
|
IP: BAAD 84F0
it was str8 dawg i felt u on dat 1 keep elevatin
|
|||||||
09-26-04, 07:55 PM | #7 | |||||
Puttin MD On The Map
|
IP: 408D D2A2
thanks man im apprectating all this feedback i had like nest to none on my last one so i appreciate this pplz
__________________
.:Retired:. |
|||||
09-27-04, 07:38 PM | #8 | ||||||
.[M]ind.[I]ntellect.[F]low.
|
IP: 53A1 B36C
Nice Drop Homie.. Betta Than Wat U Did Against Me.. But Just Work On Vocab... But Overall Nice Drop
__________________
Mind.Intellect.Flow Quote:
Quote:
Roflmmfao
|
||||||
09-27-04, 08:09 PM | #9 | |||||
Puttin MD On The Map
|
IP: 408D D2A2
thanks man uppin on the feedback..tight nice to know we aint got beef dawg
__________________
.:Retired:. |
|||||
09-27-04, 10:08 PM | #10 | ||||
New to RB
|
IP: F749 A5DA
"i ride with style while your cheap ass rydin stock
scratch that, ill hack that, back track you ride cock" ^^excellent wording and flow. i enjoyed that. only thing is that both words should be the same. i personally would have used the word RYDIN both times...just to keep the symmetry and the whole concept uniform. but i liked it kid. keep doin it
__________________
Now - exhibit, styles I kick with it Pardon me, but I'm fuckin sickwiddit --Big Daddy Kane |
||||
09-29-04, 08:35 PM | #11 | |||||
Puttin MD On The Map
|
IP: 408D D2A2
aight man thatnks for the feedback uppin on all thsi cuz i felt i needed to elevate so thanks for the feedback keep it coming
__________________
.:Retired:. |
|||||
10-14-04, 04:22 PM | #12 | |||||
|
IP: 183F 8D72
vocab needs sum elevation for real but ur rhyme scheme was pretty nice, as a freestyle not bad, keep it up..
__________________
|
|||||
10-14-04, 08:32 PM | #13 | |||||
Puttin MD On The Map
|
IP: 408D D2A2
yeh uppin on this but it was kinda an older open mic i think ima take it out so i get more feedback on my new one R.I.P. so check that out ppz
peace~1
__________________
.:Retired:. |
|||||
10-14-04, 08:33 PM | #14 | |||||
...Money Is Everything...
|
IP: DB8D 5EE9
personally i think it could use some work. espesailly on flow.
__________________
...You're Gonna Go Down... ...Cuz I'm The Best And Profound... ...Hardcore Ridah Around... ...When I Blast My Shots Are Random... ...Fuck My Foe's I Can't Stand Em... ...Fuck You Where's My Ransom... ...If I Suck Look At The Fans Son... WSK'z Sigg Shop. ^^Satisfaction Garenteed^^
My Battlez Right Now ~~~Respect List~~~
..:Logistic:..
I.Mind For$aken Verbal Vision All In A.O.D |
|||||
Thread Tools | Search this Thread |
Display Modes | |
|
|